fix timeout

Author: vhorne

articles/firewall/long-running-sessions.md

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ ms.author: victorh
 
 Azure Firewall is designed to be available and redundant. Every effort is made to avoid service disruptions. However, there are few scenarios where Azure Firewall can potentially drop long running TCP sessions. 
 
-## Scenarios that impact long running TCP sessions
+## Scenarios that affect long running TCP sessions
 
 The following scenarios can potentially drop long running TCP sessions:
 - Scale in
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ The following scenarios can potentially drop long running TCP sessions:
 
 ### Scale in
 
-Azure Firewall scales in/out based on throughput and CPU usage. Scale in is performed by putting the VM instance in drain mode for 90 seconds before recycling the VM instance. Any long running connections remaining on the VM instance after 90 seconds will be disconnected.
+Azure Firewall scales in/out based on throughput and CPU usage. Scale in is performed by putting the VM instance in drain mode for 90 seconds before recycling the VM instance. Any long running connections remaining on the VM instance after 90 seconds are disconnected.
 
 ### Firewall maintenance
 
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ The Azure Firewall engineering team updates the firewall on an as-needed basis (
 
 An idle timer is in place to recycle idle sessions. The default value is four minutes for east-west connections and can't be changed. Applications that maintain keepalives don't idle out. 
 
-For north-south connections that need more than 4 minutes (typical of IOT devices), you can contact support to extent the time for inbound connections to 30 minutes in the backend.
+For north-south connections that need more than 4 minutes (typical of IOT devices), you can contact support to extend the connection timeout up to 15 minutes in the backend.
 
 ### Auto-recovery
 
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ Session disconnection isn’t an issue for resilient applications that can handl
 
 ## Network security groups
 
-You can deploy [network security groups](../virtual-network/virtual-network-vnet-plan-design-arm.md#security) (NSGs) to protect against unsolicited traffic into Azure subnets. Network security groups are simple, stateful packet inspection devices that use the 5-tuple approach (source IP, source port, destination IP, destination port, and layer 4 protocol) to create allow/deny rules for network traffic. You allow or deny traffic to and from a single IP address, to and from multiple IP addresses, or to and from entire subnets. NSG flow logs help with auditing by logging information about IP traffic flowing through an NSG.  To learn more about NSG flow logging, see [Introduction to flow logging for network security groups](../network-watcher/network-watcher-nsg-flow-logging-overview.md).
+You can deploy [network security groups](../virtual-network/virtual-network-vnet-plan-design-arm.md#security) (NSGs) to protect against unsolicited traffic into Azure subnets. Network security groups are simple, stateful packet inspection devices that use the 5-tuple approach (source IP, source port, destination IP, destination port, and layer 4 protocol) to create allow/deny rules for network traffic. You allow or deny traffic to and from a single IP address, to and from multiple IP addresses, or to and from entire subnets. NSG flow logs help with auditing by logging information about IP traffic flowing through an NSG. To learn more about NSG flow logging, see [Introduction to flow logging for network security groups](../network-watcher/network-watcher-nsg-flow-logging-overview.md).
 
 ## Next steps