Second pass

Author: RoseHJM

articles/dev-box/concept-dev-box-architecture.md

@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ The network connection that is associated with a dev box pool determines where t
 
 Developers can create a dev box from a dev box pool by using the developer portal. They might choose from a specific pool based on the VM image, compute resources, or the location where the dev box is hosted.
 
-Once the dev box is running, dev box users can [remotely connect](#user-connectivity) to it from the developer portal. Dev box users have full control over the dev boxes they created, and can manage them from the developer portal. 
+Once the dev box is running, dev box users can [remotely connect](#user-connectivity) to it from the developer portal. Dev box users have full control over the dev boxes they create, and can manage them from the developer portal. 
 
 ## Microsoft Dev Box architecture
 
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ When you configure dev boxes to use [Microsoft Entra join](/azure/active-directo
 
 ### User connectivity
 
-When a dev box is running, developers can connect to the dev box  from the developer portal.
+When a dev box is running, developers can connect to it from the developer portal.
 
 Dev box connectivity is provided by Azure Virtual Desktop. No inbound connections direct from the Internet are made to the dev box. Instead, the following connections are made:
 

articles/dev-box/how-to-configure-multiple-monitors.md

@@ -26,7 +26,6 @@ When you connect to your cloud-hosted developer machine in Microsoft Dev Box by
 | Remote Desktop Connection (MSTSC) | <sub>:::image type="icon" source="./media/how-to-configure-multiple-monitors/yes.svg" border="false":::</sub> | [Microsoft Remote Desktop Connection](/azure/dev-box/how-to-configure-multiple-monitors?branch=main&tabs=windows-connection#configure-remote-desktop-to-use-multiple-monitors) |
 | Microsoft Remote Desktop for macOS  | <sub>:::image type="icon" source="./media/how-to-configure-multiple-monitors/yes.svg" border="false":::</sub> | [Microsoft Remote Desktop for macOS](/azure/dev-box/how-to-configure-multiple-monitors?branch=main&tabs=macOS#configure-remote-desktop-to-use-multiple-monitors) |
 
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 ## Prerequisites
 
 To complete the steps in this article, you must install the appropriate Remote Desktop client on your local machine.

articles/dev-box/how-to-create-dev-boxes-developer-portal.md

@@ -41,9 +41,9 @@ You can also create a dev box through the Azure CLI dev center extension. For mo
 
 After you create your dev box, you can connect to it from the developer portal.
 
-Connecting to your dev box from the developer portal launches the Windows App remote desktop client, which provides an enhanced user experience, including support for multiple monitors. It's available on multiple platforms, including Windows, macOS, iOS/iPadOS, Android/Chrome OS (preview), and web browsers. For more information, see [Get started with Windows App](https://aka.ms/dev-box/windows-app).
+Connecting to your dev box from the developer portal launches the Windows App remote desktop client, which provides an enhanced user experience, including support for multiple monitors. Windows App is available on multiple platforms, including Windows, macOS, iOS/iPadOS, Android/Chrome OS (preview), and web browsers. For more information, see [Get started with Windows App](https://aka.ms/dev-box/windows-app).
 
-Alternately, You can use the **browser** for lighter workloads. When you access your dev box via your phone or laptop, you can use the browser. The browser is useful for tasks such as a quick bug fix or a review of a GitHub pull request. For more information, see the [steps for using a browser to connect to a dev box](./quickstart-create-dev-box.md#connect-to-a-dev-box).
+For lighter workloads, or when you access your dev box via your phone or laptop, you can connect to your dev box from the **browser**. Connecting from the browser is useful for tasks such as a quick bug fix or a review of a GitHub pull request. For more information, see the [steps for using a browser to connect to a dev box](./quickstart-create-dev-box.md#connect-to-a-dev-box).
 
 ## Explore dev box actions
 

articles/dev-box/overview-what-is-microsoft-dev-box.md

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 Microsoft Dev Box gives developers self-service access to ready-to-code cloud workstations called *dev boxes*. You can configure dev boxes with tools, source code, and prebuilt binaries that are specific to a project, so developers can immediately start work. You can create your own customized image, or use a preconfigured image from Azure Marketplace, complete with Visual Studio already installed. 
 
-If you're a developer, you can use multiple dev boxes in your day-to-day workflows. You can access your dev boxes through the developer portal.
+If you're a developer, you can use multiple dev boxes in your day-to-day workflows. Access and manage your dev boxes through the developer portal.
 
 The Dev Box service was designed with three organizational roles in mind: platform engineers, development team leads, and developers.