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articles/defender-for-cloud/concept-cloud-security-posture-management.md

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 ## Defender CSPM plan options
 
-Defender for cloud offers foundational multicloud CSPM capabilities for free. These capabilities are automatically enabled by default on any subscription or account that has onboarded to Defender for Cloud. The foundational CSPM includes asset discovery, continuous assessment and security recommendations for posture hardening, compliance of Microsoft Cloud Security Benchmark (MCSB) and a [Secure score](secure-score-access-and-track.md) which measure the current status of your organization’s posture.
+Defender for cloud offers foundational multicloud CSPM capabilities for free. These capabilities are automatically enabled by default on any subscription or account that has onboarded to Defender for Cloud. The foundational CSPM includes asset discovery, continuous assessment and security recommendations for posture hardening, compliance with Microsoft Cloud Security Benchmark (MCSB), and a [Secure score](secure-score-access-and-track.md) which measure the current status of your organization’s posture.
 
-The optional Defender CSPM plan, provides advanced posture management capabilities such as [Attack path analysis](#attack-path-analysis), [Cloud security explorer](#cloud-security-explorer), advanced threat hunting, [security governance capabilities](#security-governance-and-regulatory-compliance), and also tools to assess your [security compliance](#security-governance-and-regulatory-compliance) with a wide range of benchmarks, regulatory standards, and any custom security policies required in your organization, industry or region. 
+The optional Defender CSPM plan, provides advanced posture management capabilities such as [Attack path analysis](#attack-path-analysis), [Cloud security explorer](#cloud-security-explorer), advanced threat hunting, [security governance capabilities](#security-governance-and-regulatory-compliance), and also tools to assess your [security compliance](#security-governance-and-regulatory-compliance) with a wide range of benchmarks, regulatory standards, and any custom security policies required in your organization, industry, or region. 
 
-The following table summarizes what's included in each plan and their cloud availability.
+The following table summarizes each plan and their cloud availability.
 
 | Feature | Foundational CSPM capabilities | Defender CSPM | Cloud availability |
 |--|--|--|--|
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 ## Security governance and regulatory compliance
 
-Security governance and regulatory compliance refer to the policies and processes which organizations have in place to ensure that they comply with laws, rules and regulations put in place by external bodies (government) which control activity in a given jurisdiction. Defender for Cloud allows you to view your regulatory compliance through the regulatory compliance dashboard.
+Security governance and regulatory compliance refer to the policies and processes which organizations have in place. These policies ensure that they comply with laws, rules and regulations put in place by external bodies (government) which control activity in a given jurisdiction. Defender for Cloud allows you to view your regulatory compliance through the regulatory compliance dashboard.
 
 Defender for Cloud continuously assesses your hybrid cloud environment to analyze the risk factors according to the controls and best practices in the standards that you've applied to your subscriptions. The dashboard reflects the status of your compliance with these standards.
 
 Learn more about [security and regulatory compliance in Defender for Cloud](concept-regulatory-compliance.md).
 
 ## Cloud security explorer
 
-The cloud security graph is a graph-based context engine that exists within Defender for Cloud. The cloud security graph collects data from your multicloud environment and other data sources. For example, the cloud assets inventory, connections and lateral movement possibilities between resources, exposure to internet, permissions, network connections, vulnerabilities and more. The data collected is then used to build a graph representing your multicloud environment.
+The cloud security graph is a graph-based context engine that exists within Defender for Cloud. The cloud security graph collects data from your multicloud environment and other data sources. For example, the cloud assets inventory, connections and lateral movement possibilities between resources, exposure to internet, permissions, network connections, vulnerabilities and more. The data collected builds a graph representing your multicloud environment.
 
 Defender for Cloud then uses the generated graph to perform an attack path analysis and find the issues with the highest risk that exist within your environment. You can also query the graph using the cloud security explorer.