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articles/iot-operations/connect-to-cloud/howto-configure-adlsv2-endpoint.md

@@ -74,15 +74,15 @@ az iot ops dataflow endpoint create adls --resource-group <ResourceGroupName> --
 
 The storage account name is the name of the Azure Data Lake Storage Gen2 account in the format `<account>.blob.core.windows.net`.
 
-Here's an example command to create or replace a Azure Data Lake Storage Gen2 data flow endpoint named adls-endpoint:
+Here's an example command to create or replace an Azure Data Lake Storage Gen2 data flow endpoint named adls-endpoint:
 
 ```azurecli
 az iot ops dataflow endpoint create adls --resource-group myResourceGroup --instance myAioInstance --name adls-endpoint --storage-account adlsstorage
 ```
 
 #### Create or change
 
-Use the [az iot ops dataflow endpoint apply](/cli/azure/iot/ops/dataflow/endpoint#az-iot-ops-dataflow-endpoint-apply) command to command to create or change an Azure Data Lake Storage Gen2 data flow endpoint.
+Use the [az iot ops dataflow endpoint apply](/cli/azure/iot/ops/dataflow/endpoint#az-iot-ops-dataflow-endpoint-apply) command to create or change an Azure Data Lake Storage Gen2 data flow endpoint.
 
 ```azurecli
 az iot ops dataflow endpoint apply --resource-group <ResourceGroupName> --instance <AioInstanceName> --name <EndpointName> --config-file <ConfigFilePathAndName>
@@ -304,7 +304,7 @@ az iot ops dataflow endpoint create adls --auth-type SystemAssignedManagedIdenti
 
 The storage account name is the name of the Azure Data Lake Storage Gen2 account in the format `<account>.blob.core.windows.net`.
 
-An example command to create or replace a Azure Data Lake Storage Gen2 data flow endpoint named `my-endpoint` is:
+An example command to create or replace an Azure Data Lake Storage Gen2 data flow endpoint named `my-endpoint` is:
 
 ```azurecli
 az iot ops dataflow endpoint create adls --auth-type SystemAssignedManagedIdentity --resource-group myResourceGroup --instance myAioInstance --name adls-endpoint --storage-account adlsstorage
@@ -385,7 +385,7 @@ az iot ops dataflow endpoint create adls --auth-type SystemAssignedManagedIdenti
 
 The storage account name is the name of the Azure Data Lake Storage Gen2 account in the format `<account>.blob.core.windows.net`.
 
-An example command to create or replace a Azure Data Lake Storage Gen2 data flow endpoint named `my-endpoint` is:
+An example command to create or replace an Azure Data Lake Storage Gen2 data flow endpoint named `my-endpoint` is:
 
 ```azurecli
 az iot ops dataflow endpoint create adls --auth-type SystemAssignedManagedIdentity --audience https://<account>.blob.core.windows.net --resource-group myResourceGroup --instance myAioInstance --name adls-endpoint --storage-account adlsstorage
@@ -483,7 +483,7 @@ az iot ops dataflow endpoint create adls --auth-type UserAssignedManagedIdentity
 
 The storage account name is the name of the Azure Data Lake Storage Gen2 account in the format `<account>.blob.core.windows.net`. The `--auth-type` parameter specifies the authentication method, which is `UserAssignedManagedIdentity` in this case. The `--client-id`, `--tenant-id`, and `--scope` parameters specify the user-assigned managed identity client ID, tenant ID, and scope respectively.
 
-An example command to create or replace a Azure Data Lake Storage Gen2 data flow endpoint named `my-endpoint` is:
+An example command to create or replace an Azure Data Lake Storage Gen2 data flow endpoint named `my-endpoint` is:
 
 ```azurecli
 az iot ops dataflow endpoint create adls --auth-type UserAssignedManagedIdentity --client-id ClientId --tenant-id TenantId --scope https://storage.azure.com/.default --resource-group myResourceGroup --instance myAioInstance --name adls-endpoint --storage-account adlsstorage
@@ -609,7 +609,7 @@ az iot ops dataflow endpoint create adls --auth-type AccessToken --secret-name <
 
 The storage account name is the name of the Azure Data Lake Storage Gen2 account in the format `<account>.blob.core.windows.net`. The `--auth-type` parameter specifies the authentication method, which is `AccessToken` in this case. The `--secret-name` parameter specifies the name of the Kubernetes secret containing the SAS token.
 
-An example command to create or replace a Azure Data Lake Storage Gen2 data flow endpoint named `my-endpoint` is:
+An example command to create or replace an Azure Data Lake Storage Gen2 data flow endpoint named `my-endpoint` is:
 
 ```azurecli
 az iot ops dataflow endpoint create adls --auth-type AccessToken --secret-name mySasSecret --resource-group myResourceGroup --instance myAioInstance --name adls-endpoint --storage-account adlsstorage

articles/iot-operations/connect-to-cloud/howto-configure-fabric-endpoint.md

@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ If using system-assigned managed identity, in Azure portal, go to your Azure IoT
 
 Go to Microsoft Fabric workspace you created, select **Manage access** > **+ Add people or groups**. 
 
-1. Search for the name of your [user-assigned managed identity set up for cloud connections](../deploy-iot-ops/howto-enable-secure-settings.md#set-up-a-user-assigned-managed-identity-for-cloud-connections) or the system-assigned managed identity. For example, *azure-iot-operations-xxxx7* .
+1. Search for the name of your [user-assigned managed identity set up for cloud connections](../deploy-iot-ops/howto-enable-secure-settings.md#set-up-a-user-assigned-managed-identity-for-cloud-connections) or the system-assigned managed identity. For example, *azure-iot-operations-xxxx7*.
 1. Select **Contributor** as the role, then select **Add**. This gives the managed identity the necessary permissions to write to the Fabric lakehouse. To learn more, see [Roles in workspaces in Microsoft Fabric](/fabric/get-started/roles-workspaces).
 
 ## Create data flow endpoint for Microsoft Fabric OneLake
@@ -260,7 +260,7 @@ Before you configure the data flow endpoint, assign a role to the Azure IoT Oper
 1. In Azure portal, go to your Azure IoT Operations instance and select **Overview**.
 1. Copy the name of the extension listed after **Azure IoT Operations Arc extension**. For example, *azure-iot-operations-xxxx7*.
 1. Go to Microsoft Fabric workspace, select **Manage access** > **+ Add people or groups**. 
-1. Search for the name of your system-assigned managed identity. For example, *azure-iot-operations-xxxx7* .
+1. Search for the name of your system-assigned managed identity. For example, *azure-iot-operations-xxxx7*.
 1. Select an appropriate role, then select **Add**.
 
 Then, configure the data flow endpoint with system-assigned managed identity settings.
@@ -445,7 +445,7 @@ fabricOneLakeSettings:
 
 To use user-assigned managed identity for authentication, you must first deploy Azure IoT Operations with secure settings enabled. Then you need to [set up a user-assigned managed identity for cloud connections](../deploy-iot-ops/howto-enable-secure-settings.md#set-up-a-user-assigned-managed-identity-for-cloud-connections). To learn more, see [Enable secure settings in Azure IoT Operations deployment](../deploy-iot-ops/howto-enable-secure-settings.md).
 
-Before you configure the data flow endpoint, assign a role to the user-assigned managed identity that grants permission to write to the Fabric lakehouse.:
+Before you configure the data flow endpoint, assign a role to the user-assigned managed identity that grants permission to write to the Fabric lakehouse.
 
 1. Go to Microsoft Fabric workspace, select **Manage access** > **+ Add people or groups**. 
 1. Search for the name of your user-assigned managed identity.

articles/iot-operations/connect-to-cloud/howto-configure-kafka-endpoint.md

@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ Next, [create an event hub in the namespace](../../event-hubs/event-hubs-create.
 
 To configure a data flow endpoint for Azure Event Hubs, we recommend using either a user-assigned or system-assigned managed identity. This approach is secure and eliminates the need for managing credentials manually.
 
-After the Azure Event Hubs namespace and event hub is created, you need to assign a role to the Azure IoT Operations managed identity that grants permission to send or receive messages to the event hub.
+After the Azure Event Hubs namespace and event hub are created, you need to assign a role to the Azure IoT Operations managed identity that grants permission to send or receive messages to the event hub.
 
 If using system-assigned managed identity, in Azure portal, go to your Azure IoT Operations instance and select **Overview**. Copy the name of the extension listed after **Azure IoT Operations Arc extension**. For example, *azure-iot-operations-xxxx7*. Your system-assigned managed identity can be found using the same name of the Azure IoT Operations Arc extension.
 
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ Then, go to the Event Hubs namespace > **Access control (IAM)** > **Add role ass
 
 ### Create data flow endpoint for Azure Event Hubs
 
-Once the Azure Event Hubs namespace and event hub is configured, you can create a data flow endpoint for the Kafka-enabled Azure Event Hubs namespace.
+Once the Azure Event Hubs namespace and event hub are configured, you can create a data flow endpoint for the Kafka-enabled Azure Event Hubs namespace.
 
 # [Operations experience](#tab/portal)