Update after Rob's review

Author: James Green

articles/private-5g-core/configure-sim-policy-azure-portal.md

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 # Configure a SIM policy for Azure Private 5G Core Preview - Azure portal
 
-*SIM policies* allow you to define different sets of policies and interoperability settings that can each be assigned to a group of SIMs. You'll need to assign a SIM policy to a SIM before the user equipment (UE) using that SIM can access the private mobile network. In this how-to-guide, you'll learn how to configure a SIM policy.
+*SIM policies* allow you to define different sets of policies and interoperability settings that can each be assigned to a group of SIMs. The SIM policy also defines the default Quality of Service settings for any services that use the policy. You'll need to assign a SIM policy to a SIM before the user equipment (UE) using that SIM can access the private mobile network. In this how-to-guide, you'll learn how to configure a SIM policy.
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
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     :::image type="content" source="media/configure-sim-policy-azure-portal/sim-policy-basics-tab.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the Azure portal. It shows the basics tab for a SIM policy. The Add a network scope button is highlighted.":::
 
 1. Under **Add a network scope** on the right, fill out each of the fields using the information you collected from [Collect information for the network scope](collect-required-information-for-sim-policy.md#collect-information-for-the-network-scope).  
-Any services that are children of a SIM policy will inherit the Quality of Service (QoS) settings properties of the parent SIM policy unless a QoS is defined for the service.
+SIM policies also define the default QoS settings for any services that use the policy. You can override the default SIM policy QoS settings on a per-service basis - see [Configure basic settings for the service](configure-service-azure-portal.md#Configure-basic-settings-for-the-service).
 1. Select **Add**.
 
     :::image type="content" source="media/configure-sim-policy-azure-portal/add-a-network-scope.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the Azure portal. It shows the Add a network scope screen. The Add button is highlighted.":::