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articles/private-5g-core/region-move.md

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ ms.custom: template-how-to
 
 # Move your Azure Private 5G Core resources to a different region
 
-In this how-to guide, you'll learn how to move your Azure Private 5G Core resources to a different region.
+In this how-to guide, you'll learn how to move your Azure Private 5G Core resources to a different region. This involves exporting your resources from the source region's resource group and recreating them in a new resource group deployed in the target region.
 
 If you also want to move your Azure Stack Edge (ASE) resources, see TODO:link. 
 
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ If you also want to move your Azure Stack Edge (ASE) resources, see TODO:link.
 
 For security reasons, Azure Private 5G Core will never return the SIM credentials provided to the service as part of SIM creation. Therefore, it's not possible to export the SIM configuration in the same way as other Azure resources, and you'll need to delete your SIMs to avoid errors before performing an Azure region move.
 
-1. Create a backup copy of all the information required for recreating your SIMs later. Refer to [Collect the required information for your SIMs](provision-sims-azure-portal.md#collect-the-required-information-for-your-sims) for the information you'll need to recreate each SIM. You can view all your SIMs and SIM groups by following [View existing SIMs](manage-existing-sims.md#view-existing-sims).
+1. Refer to [Collect the required information for your SIMs](provision-sims-azure-portal.md#collect-the-required-information-for-your-sims) to take a backup of all the information you'll need to recreate your SIMs. You can view all your SIMs and SIM groups by following [View existing SIMs](manage-existing-sims.md#view-existing-sims).
 1. Follow [Delete SIMs](manage-existing-sims.md#delete-sims) to delete all the SIMs in your deployment.
 
 ### Disable custom location
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ Before moving your resources, you'll need to uninstall all your packet core inst
 
     1. In [Modify the packet core configuration](modify-packet-core.md#modify-the-packet-core-configuration), make a note of the custom location value in the **Custom ARC location** field.
     1. Set the **Custom ARC location** field to **None**.
-    1. In [Submit and verify changes](modify-packet-core.md#submit-and-verify-changes), the packet core will be redeployed at an uninstalled state with the new configuration.
+    1. In [Submit and verify changes](modify-packet-core.md#submit-and-verify-changes), the packet core will be redeployed at an uninstalled state.
 
 ### Generate template
 
@@ -58,25 +58,25 @@ Your mobile network resources can now be exported via an Azure Resource Manager
 
 ### Prepare template
 
-You'll need to customize your template to ensure all parameters apply to the new region.
+You'll need to customize your template to ensure all your resources are correctly deployed to the new region.
 
 1. Open the *template.json* file you downloaded in [Generate template](#generate-template).
-1. Find every instance of the original region's code name and replace it with the target region you're moving your deployment to. See TODO:link for instructions on how to obtain the target region's code name.
+1. Find every instance of the original region's code name and replace it with the target region you're moving your deployment to. This involves updating the **location** parameter for every resource. See TODO:link for instructions on how to obtain the target region's code name.
 1. Find every instance of the original region's resource group name and replace it with the target region's resource group name you defined in [Prerequisites](#prerequisites).
 
 ### Deploy template
 
 1. [Create a resource group](/azure/azure-resource-manager/management/manage-resource-groups-portal) in the target region. Use the resource group name you defined in [Prerequisites](#prerequisites).
 1. Deploy the *template.json* file you downloaded in [Generate template](#generate-template).
 
-    - If you want to use the Azure portal, follow the instructions to deploy resources from a custom template in [Deploy resources with ARM templates and Azure portal](/azure/azure-resource-manager/templates/deploy-portal)
+    - If you want to use the Azure portal, follow the instructions to deploy resources from a custom template in [Deploy resources with ARM templates and Azure portal](/azure/azure-resource-manager/templates/deploy-portal).
     - If you want to use PowerShell, navigate to the folder containing the *template.json* file and deploy using the command:
 
         ```azurepowershell
         az deployment group create --resource-group <new resource group name> --template-file template.json
         ```
 
-1. In the Azure portal, navigate to the new resource group to verify that your resources have been successfully recreated.
+1. In the Azure portal, navigate to the new resource group and verify that your resources have been successfully recreated.
 
 ### Restore SIMs
 

articles/private-5g-core/toc.yml

@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ items:
       href: collect-required-information-for-private-mobile-network.md
     - name: Deploy a private mobile network - Azure portal
       href: how-to-guide-deploy-a-private-mobile-network-azure-portal.md
-    - name: Move deployment to a different region
+    - name: Move resources to a different region
       href: region-move.md
   - name: Sites
     items: