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Author: JnHs

articles/lighthouse/how-to/publish-managed-services-offers.md

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 ---
 title: Publish a Managed Service offer to Azure Marketplace
 description: Learn how to publish a Managed Service offer that onboards customers to Azure delegated resource management.
-ms.date: 04/08/2020
+ms.date: 04/24/2020
 ms.topic: conceptual
 ---
 
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ Complete the following fields in the **Overview** section:
 |**Summary**     | Brief purpose or function of your offer. This is usually displayed under the title. Maximum length of 100 characters.        |
 |**Long Summary**     | A longer summary of the purpose or function of your offer. Maximum length of 256 characters.        |
 |**Description**     | More information about your offer. This field has a maximum length of 3000 characters and supports simple HTML formatting. You must include the words "managed service" or "managed services" somewhere in your description.       |
-|**Marketing Identifier**     | A unique URL-friendly identifier. This identifier can only contain lowercase alphanumeric characters and dashes. It will be used in Marketplace URLs for this offer. For example, if your publisher ID is *contoso* and your marketing identifier is *sampleApp*, the URL for your offer in Azure Marketplace will be '<https://azuremarketplace.microsoft.com/marketplace/apps/contoso-sampleApp>'.       |
+|**Marketing Identifier**     | A unique URL-friendly identifier. This identifier can only contain lowercase alphanumeric characters and dashes. It will be used in Marketplace URLs for this offer. For example, if your publisher ID is *contoso* and your marketing identifier is *sampleApp*, the URL for your offer in Azure Marketplace will be `https://azuremarketplace.microsoft.com/marketplace/apps/contoso-sampleApp`.       |
 |**Preview Subscription IDs**     | Add one to 100 subscription identifiers. The customers associated with these subscriptions will be able to view the offer in Azure Marketplace before it goes live. We suggest including your own subscriptions here so you can preview how your offer appears in the Azure Marketplace before making it available to customers.  (Microsoft support and engineering teams will also be able to view your offer during this preview period.)   |
 |**Useful Links**     | URLs related to your offer, such as documentation, release notes, FAQs, etc.        |
 |**Suggested Categories (Max 5)**     | One or more categories (up to five) which apply to your offer. These categories help customers discover your offer in Azure Marketplace and the Azure portal.        |

articles/lighthouse/how-to/remove-delegation.md

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.topic: conceptual
 
 # Remove access to a delegation
 
-After a customer's subscription or resource group has been delegated to a service provider for [Azure delegated resource management](../concepts/azure-delegated-resource-management.md), the delegation can be removed if needed. When a delegation is removed, all of the permissions previously granted to users in the service provider tenant will no longer apply.
+After a customer's subscription or resource group has been delegated to a service provider for [Azure delegated resource management](../concepts/azure-delegated-resource-management.md), the delegation can be removed if needed. Once a delegation is removed, access previously granted to users in the service provider tenant will no longer apply.
 
 Removing a delegation can be done by a user in either the customer tenant or the service provider tenant, as long as the user has the appropriate permissions.
 
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ After confirming the deletion, no users in the service provider's tenant will be
 
 ## Service providers
 
-Users in a management tenant can remove access to delegated resources if they were granted the [Managed Services Registration Assignment Delete Role](../../role-based-access-control/built-in-roles.md#managed-services-registration-assignment-delete-role) when the customer's resources were onboarded for Azure delegated resource management. If this role was not assigned, the delegation can only be removed by a user in the customer's tenant.
+Users in a managing tenant can remove access to delegated resources if they were granted the [Managed Services Registration Assignment Delete Role](../../role-based-access-control/built-in-roles.md#managed-services-registration-assignment-delete-role) for the customer's resources. If this role was not assigned to any service provider users, the delegation can only be removed by a user in the customer's tenant.
 
 The example below shows an assignment granting the **Managed Services Registration Assignment Delete Role** that can be included in a parameter file during the [onboarding process](onboard-customer.md):
 
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ The example below shows an assignment granting the **Managed Services Registrati
     ] 
 ```
 
-This role can also be selected for an **Authorization** when [creating a Managed Service offer](../../marketplace/partner-center-portal/create-new-managed-service-offer.md#authorization) to publish to Azure Marketplace.
+This role can also be selected in an **Authorization** when [creating a Managed Service offer](../../marketplace/partner-center-portal/create-new-managed-service-offer.md#authorization) to publish to Azure Marketplace.
 
 A user with this permission can remove a delegation in one of the following ways.
 

articles/lighthouse/how-to/view-manage-service-providers.md

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ To access the **Service providers** page in the Azure portal, the customer can s
 
 Keep in mind that the **Service providers** page only shows info about the service providers that have access to the customer's subscriptions or resource groups through Azure delegated resource management. If a customer works with additional service providers who don't use Azure delegated resource management to access the customer's resources, info about those service providers is not shown here.
 
-> [!NOTE]
+> [!TIP]
 > Service providers can view info about their customers by navigating to **My customers** in the Azure portal. For more info, see [View and manage customers and delegated resources](view-manage-customers.md).
 
 ## View service provider details
@@ -74,4 +74,4 @@ For more info about how to assign a policy and view compliance state results, se
 ## Next steps
 
 - Learn more about [Azure Lighthouse](../overview.md).
-- Learn how service providers can [view and manage customers](view-manage-customers.md) by going to **My customers** in the Azure portal.
+- Learn how service providers can [view and manage customers](view-manage-customers.md) on the **My customers** page in the Azure portal.