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Author: markwahl-msft

articles/active-directory/governance/entitlement-management-access-package-assignments.md

@@ -200,29 +200,28 @@ $policy = $accesspackage.AssignmentPolicies[0]
 $req = New-MgBetaEntitlementManagementAccessPackageAssignmentRequest -AccessPackageId $accesspackage.Id -AssignmentPolicyId $policy.Id -TargetEmail "[email protected]"
 ```
 
-## Assign access from a lifecycle workflow
+## Configure access assignment as part of a lifecycle workflow
 
-In the Microsoft Entra Lifecycle Workflows feature, you can add a [Request user access package assignment](lifecycle-workflow-tasks.md#request-user-access-package-assignment) task to an onboarding workflow.  When the workflow runs for a user, then an access package assignment request can be created automatically.
+In the Microsoft Entra Lifecycle Workflows feature, you can add a [Request user access package assignment](lifecycle-workflow-tasks.md#request-user-access-package-assignment) task to an onboarding workflow. The task can specify an access package which users should have. When the workflow runs for a user, then an access package assignment request will be created automatically.
 
 1. Sign in to the [Microsoft Entra admin center](https://entra.microsoft.com) as a global administrator.
 
 1. Browse to **Identity governance** > **Lifecycle workflows** > **Workflows**.
 
-1. Select a join (onboarding) or move workflow.
+1. Select an employee onboarding or move workflow.
 
 1. Select **Tasks** and select **Add task**.
 
 1. Select **Request user access package assignment** and select **Add**.
 
 1. Select the newly added task.
 
-1. Select **Select Access package**, and choose the access package the user should be assigned to.
+1. Select **Select Access package**, and choose the access package that new or moving users should be assigned to.
 
 1. Select **Select Policy**, and choose the access package assignment policy in that access package.
 
 1. Select **Save**.
 
-
 ## Remove an assignment
 
 You can remove an assignment that a user or an administrator had previously requested.
@@ -268,27 +267,26 @@ if ($assignment -ne $null) {
 }
 ```
 
-## Remove an assignment from a lifecycle workflow
+## Configure assignment removal as part of a lifecycle workflow
 
-In the Microsoft Entra Lifecycle Workflows feature, you can add a [Remove access package assignment for user](lifecycle-workflow-tasks.md#remove-access-package-assignment-for-user) task to an offboarding workflow.  When the workflow runs for a user, then an access package assignment can be removed automatically.
+In the Microsoft Entra Lifecycle Workflows feature, you can add a [Remove access package assignment for user](lifecycle-workflow-tasks.md#remove-access-package-assignment-for-user) task to an offboarding workflow. That task can specify an access package the user might be assigned to. When the workflow runs for a user, then their access package assignment will be removed automatically.
 
 1. Sign in to the [Microsoft Entra admin center](https://entra.microsoft.com) as a global administrator.
 
 1. Browse to **Identity governance** > **Lifecycle workflows** > **Workflows**.
 
-1. Select a leave (offboarding) workflow.
+1. Select an employee offboarding workflow.
 
 1. Select **Tasks** and select **Add task**.
 
 1. Select **Remove access package assignment for user** and select **Add**.
 
 1. Select the newly added task.
 
-1. Select **Select Access packages**, and choose one or more access packages the user should be removed from.
+1. Select **Select Access packages**, and choose one or more access packages that users being offboarded should be removed from.
 
 1. Select **Save**.
 
-
 ## Next steps
 
 - [Change request and settings for an access package](entitlement-management-access-package-request-policy.md)