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Author: chengyuanlai-msft

articles/communication-services/quickstarts/voice-video-calling/includes/volume-indicator/volume-indicator-android.md

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ ms.subservice: calling
 
 [!INCLUDE [Public Preview](../../../../includes/public-preview-include-document.md)]
 
-As a developer you can have control over checking microphone volume. This quickstart shows examples of how to accomplish this within the Azure Communication Services Calling SDK.
+As a developer you can have control over checking microphone volume. This quickstart shows examples of how to accomplish it within the Azure Communication Services Calling SDK.
 
 ## Checking the local audio stream volume
 As a developer it can be nice to have the ability to check and display to end users the current local microphone volume level. Azure Communication Services calling API exposes this information using `getVolumeLevel`. The `getVolumeLevel` value is a float number ranging from 0 to 1 (with 0 noting zero audio detected, 100 as the max level detectable, -1 noting a failed operation).

articles/communication-services/quickstarts/voice-video-calling/includes/volume-indicator/volume-indicator-ios.md

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ ms.subservice: calling
 
 [!INCLUDE [Public Preview](../../../../includes/public-preview-include-document.md)]
 
-As a developer you can have control over checking microphone volume. This quickstart shows examples of how to accomplish this within the Azure Communication Services Calling SDK.
+As a developer you can have control over checking microphone volume. This quickstart shows examples of how to accomplish it within the Azure Communication Services Calling SDK.
 
 ## Checking the local audio stream volume
 As a developer it can be nice to have the ability to check and display to end users the current local microphone volume level. Azure Communication Services calling API exposes this information using `volumeLevel`. The `volumeLevel` value is a float number ranging from 0 to 1 (with 0 noting zero audio detected, 100 as the max level detectable, -1 noting a failed operation).

articles/communication-services/quickstarts/voice-video-calling/includes/volume-indicator/volume-indicator-javascript.md

@@ -6,13 +6,13 @@ author: sloanster
 
 ms.author: micahvivion
 ms.date: 1/18/2023
-ms.topic: quickstart
+ms.topic: include
 ms.service: azure-communication-services
 ms.subservice: calling
 ms.custom: mode-other
 ---
 
-As a developer you can have control over checking microphone volume in JavaScript. This quickstart shows examples of how to accomplish this within the Azure Communication Services WebJS.
+As a developer you can have control over checking microphone volume in JavaScript. This quickstart shows examples of how to accomplish it within the Azure Communication Services WebJS.
 
 ## Prerequisites
 >[!IMPORTANT]
@@ -39,5 +39,5 @@ volumeIndicator.on('levelChanged', ()=>{
 })
 ```
 
-For a more detailed code sample on how to create a UI display to show the local and current incominng audio level please see [here](https://github.com/Azure-Samples/communication-services-web-calling-tutorial/blob/2a3548dd4446fa2e06f5f5b2c2096174500397c9/Project/src/MakeCall/VolumeVisualizer.js).
+For a more detailed code sample on how to create a UI display to show the local and current incoming audio level, see [here](https://github.com/Azure-Samples/communication-services-web-calling-tutorial/blob/2a3548dd4446fa2e06f5f5b2c2096174500397c9/Project/src/MakeCall/VolumeVisualizer.js).
 

articles/communication-services/quickstarts/voice-video-calling/includes/volume-indicator/volume-indicator-windows.md

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ ms.subservice: calling
 
 [!INCLUDE [Public Preview](../../../../includes/public-preview-include-document.md)]
 
-As a developer you can have control over checking microphone volume. This quickstart shows examples of how to accomplish this within the Azure Communication Services Calling SDK.
+As a developer you can have control over checking microphone volume. This quickstart shows examples of how to accomplish it within the Azure Communication Services Calling SDK.
 
 ## Checking the local audio stream volume
 As a developer it can be nice to have the ability to check and display to end users the current local microphone volume level. Azure Communication Services calling API exposes this information using `VolumeLevel`. The `VolumeLevel` value is a float number ranging from 0 to 1 (with 0 noting zero audio detected, 100 as the max level detectable, -1 noting a failed operation).