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 ## Create firewall rules
 
-SQL databases are protected by firewalls in Azure. By default, all connections to the server and database are rejected, except for connections from other Azure services. To learn more, see [Azure SQL Database server-level and database-level firewall rules](sql-database-firewall-configure.md).
+SQL databases are protected by firewalls in Azure. By default, all connections to the server and database are rejected. To learn more, see [Azure SQL Database server-level and database-level firewall rules](sql-database-firewall-configure.md).
 
 Set **Allow access to Azure services** to **OFF** for the most secure configuration. Then, create a [reserved IP (classic deployment)](../virtual-network/virtual-networks-reserved-public-ip.md) for the resource that needs to connect, such as an Azure VM or cloud service, and only allow that IP address access through the firewall. If you're using the [resource manager](/azure/virtual-network/virtual-network-ip-addresses-overview-arm) deployment model, a dedicated public IP address is required for each resource.