Merge pull request #287961 from halkazwini/ps-walkthrough

Peering Service | Maintenance | Freshness: Azure Peering Service customer walkthrough

Author: prmerger-automator[bot]

articles/peering-service/customer-walkthrough.md

@@ -1,22 +1,22 @@
 ---
 title: Azure Peering Service customer walkthrough
-description: Learn about Azure Peering Service and how to onboard.
+description: Learn how to activate and optimize your prefixes with Azure Peering Service.
 author: halkazwini
 ms.author: halkazwini
 ms.service: azure-peering-service
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 07/26/2023
+ms.date: 10/07/2024
 ---
 
 # Azure Peering Service customer walkthrough
 
-This section explains the steps to optimize your prefixes with an Internet Service Provider (ISP) or Internet Exchange Provider (IXP) who is a Peering Service partner.
+This article explains the steps to optimize your prefixes with an Internet Service Provider (ISP) or Internet Exchange Provider (IXP) that is a Peering Service partner.
 
 See [Peering Service partners](location-partners.md) for a complete list of Peering Service providers. 
 
 ## Activate the prefix
 
-If you have received a Peering Service prefix key from your Peering Service provider, then you can activate your prefixes for optimized routing with Peering Service. Prefix activation, alignment to the right OC partner, and appropriate interconnect location are requirements for optimized routing (to ensure cold potato routing).
+If you already received a Peering Service prefix key from your Peering Service provider, then you can activate your prefixes for optimized routing with Peering Service. Prefix activation, alignment to the right OC partner, and appropriate interconnect location are requirements for optimized routing (to ensure cold potato routing).
 
 To activate the prefix, follow these steps:
 
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ To activate the prefix, follow these steps:
 
     :::image type="content" source="./media/customer-walkthrough/peering-service-basics.png" alt-text="Screenshot shows the Basics tab of creating a Peering Service connection in the Azure portal.":::
 
-1. In the **Configuration** tab, provide details on the location, provider and primary and backup interconnect locations. If the backup location is set to **None**, the traffic fails over to the internet.
+1. In the **Configuration** tab, provide details on the location, provider, and primary and backup interconnect locations. If the backup location is set to **None**, the traffic fails over to the internet.
 
     > [!NOTE]
     > - The prefix key should be the same as the one obtained from your Peering Service provider. 
@@ -45,10 +45,10 @@ To activate the prefix, follow these steps:
 
 ## Frequently asked questions (FAQ)
 
-**Q.** Will Microsoft re-advertise my prefixes to the Internet?
+**Q.** Will Microsoft readvertise my prefixes to the Internet?
 
 **A.** No.
 
-**Q.** My Peering Service prefix has failed validation. How should I proceed?
+**Q.** My Peering Service prefix failed validation. How should I proceed?
 
-**A.** Review the [Peering Service Prefix Requirements](./peering-service-prefix-requirements.md) and follow the troubleshooting steps described.
+**A.** Review the [Peering Service prefix requirements](./peering-service-prefix-requirements.md) and follow the troubleshooting steps described.