address final PR reviewer feedback

Author: mrbullwinkle

articles/azure-monitor/platform/workbooks-access-control.md

@@ -16,13 +16,13 @@ ms.author: mbullwin
 
 Access control in workbooks refers to two things:
 
-1. Access required to read data in a workbook. This access is controlled by standard [Azure roles](https://docs.microsoft.com/azure/role-based-access-control/overview) on the resources used in the workbook. Workbooks do not specify or configure access to those resources. Users would usually get this access to those resources using the [Monitoring Reader](https://docs.microsoft.com/azure/role-based-access-control/built-in-roles#monitoring-reader) role on those resources.
+* Access required to read data in a workbook. This access is controlled by standard [Azure roles](https://docs.microsoft.com/azure/role-based-access-control/overview) on the resources used in the workbook. Workbooks do not specify or configure access to those resources. Users would usually get this access to those resources using the [Monitoring Reader](https://docs.microsoft.com/azure/role-based-access-control/built-in-roles#monitoring-reader) role on those resources.
 
-2. Access required to save workbooks
-
-- Saving private `("My")` workbooks requires no additional privileges. All users can save private workbooks, and only they can see those workbooks.
-- Saving shared workbooks requires write privileges in a resource group to save the workbook. These privileges are usually specified by the [Monitoring Contributor](https://docs.microsoft.com/azure/role-based-access-control/built-in-roles#monitoring-contributor) role, but can also be set via the *Workbooks Contributor* role.
+* Access required to save workbooks
 
+    - Saving private `("My")` workbooks requires no additional privileges. All users can save private workbooks, and only they can see those workbooks.
+    - Saving shared workbooks requires write privileges in a resource group to save the workbook. These privileges are usually specified by the [Monitoring Contributor](https://docs.microsoft.com/azure/role-based-access-control/built-in-roles#monitoring-contributor) role, but can also be set via the *Workbooks Contributor* role.
+    
 ## Standard roles with workbook-related privileges
 
 [Monitoring Reader](https://docs.microsoft.com/azure/role-based-access-control/built-in-roles#monitoring-reader) includes standard /read privileges that would be used by monitoring tools (including workbooks) to read data from resources.

articles/azure-monitor/platform/workbooks-automate.md

@@ -17,8 +17,8 @@ ms.author: mbullwin
 Resource owners have the option to create and manage their workbooks programmatically via Resource Manager templates. 
 
 This can be useful in scenarios like:
-1. Deploying org- or domain-specific analytics reports along with resources deployments. For instance, you may deploy org-specific performance and failure workbooks for your new apps or virtual machines.
-2. Deploying standard reports or dashboards using workbooks for existing resources.
+* Deploying org- or domain-specific analytics reports along with resources deployments. For instance, you may deploy org-specific performance and failure workbooks for your new apps or virtual machines.
+* Deploying standard reports or dashboards using workbooks for existing resources.
 
 The workbook will be created in the desired sub/resource-group and with the content specified in the Resource Manager templates.
 
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ The workbook will be created in the desired sub/resource-group and with the cont
 4. In the editor, switch _Template Type_ to _Resource Manager template_.
 5. The Resource Manager template for creating shows up in the editor. Copy the content and use as-is or merge it with a larger template that also deploys the target resource.
 
-![Image showing how to get the Resource Manager template from within the workbook UI](./media/workbooks-automate/programmatic-template.png)
+    ![Image showing how to get the Resource Manager template from within the workbook UI](./media/workbooks-automate/programmatic-template.png)
 
 ## Sample Azure Resource Manager template
 This template shows how to deploy a simple workbook that displays a 'Hello World!'

articles/azure-monitor/platform/workbooks-data-sources.md

@@ -15,15 +15,7 @@ ms.author: mbullwin
 
 # Azure Monitor workbooks data sources
 
-Workbooks are compatible with the following data sources:
-
-* [Logs](#logs)
-* [Metrics](#metrics)
-* [Azure Resource Graph](#azure-resource-graph)
-* [Alerts (Preview)](#alerts-preview)
-* [Workload Health (Preview)](#workload-health-preview)
-* [Azure Resource Health (Preview)](#azure-resource-health)
-* [Azure Data Explorer (Preview)](#azure-data-explorer-preview)
+Workbooks are compatible with a large number of data sources. This article will walk you through data sources which are currently available for Azure Monitor workbooks.
 
 ## Logs
 

articles/azure-monitor/platform/workbooks-dropdowns.md

@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ The easiest way to specify a drop-down is by providing a static list in the para
 7. Choose 'Save' from the toolbar to create the parameter.
 8. The Environment parameter will be a drop-down with the three values.
 
-![Image showing the creation of a static drown down](./media/workbook-dropdowns/dropdown-create.png)
+    ![Image showing the creation of a static drown down](./media/workbook-dropdowns/dropdown-create.png)
 
 ## Creating a static dropdown with groups of items
 If your query result/json contains a "group" field, the dropdown will display groups of values. Follow the above sample, but use the following json instead:
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ If your query result/json contains a "group" field, the dropdown will display gr
     { "value":"prod2", "label":"Prod 2", "group":"Production" }
 ]
 ```
-![Image showing an example of a grouped dropdown](./media/workbook-dropdowns/grouped-dropDown.png)
+    ![Image showing an example of a grouped dropdown](./media/workbook-dropdowns/grouped-dropDown.png)
 
 
 ## Creating a dynamic drop-down parameter
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ If your query result/json contains a "group" field, the dropdown will display gr
 2. Choose 'Save' from the toolbar to create the parameter.
 3. The RequestName parameter will be a drop-down the names of all requests in the app.
 
-![Image showing the creation of a dynamic drop-down](./media/workbook-dropdowns/dropdown-dynamic.png)
+    ![Image showing the creation of a dynamic drop-down](./media/workbook-dropdowns/dropdown-dynamic.png)
 
 ## Referencing drop down parameter
 ### In KQL
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ If your query result/json contains a "group" field, the dropdown will display gr
 
 4. Run query to see the results. Optionally, render it as a chart.
 
-![Image showing a drop-down referenced in KQL](./media/workbook-dropdowns/dropdown-reference.png)
+    ![Image showing a drop-down referenced in KQL](./media/workbook-dropdowns/dropdown-reference.png)
 
 
 ## Parameter Value, Label, Selection and Group
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ dependencies
 | serialize Rank = row_number()
 | project value = name, label = strcat('🌐 ', name), selected = iff(Rank == 1, true, false), group = operation_Name
 ```
-![Image showing a drop-down parameter using value, label, selection and group options](./media/workbook-dropdowns/dropdown-more-options.png)
+    ![Image showing a drop-down parameter using value, label, selection and group options](./media/workbook-dropdowns/dropdown-more-options.png)
 
 
 ## Drop down parameter options

articles/azure-monitor/platform/workbooks-interactive.md

@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ Workbooks allow authors to add interactivity via a special type of grid column r
     4. Click _Save and Close_ to apply changes
 8. Click on one of the `Sample` links in the grid. This opens up a property pane with the details of a sampled request.
 
-![Image showing the creation an interactive experience using grid cell clicks](./media/workbooks-interactive/grid-cell-click-create.png)
+    ![Image showing the creation an interactive experience using grid cell clicks](./media/workbooks-interactive/grid-cell-click-create.png)
 
 ### Link Renderer Actions
 | Link action | Action on click |

articles/azure-monitor/platform/workbooks-parameters.md

@@ -41,11 +41,11 @@ These parameter values can be referenced in other parts of workbooks either via
     4. Available time ranges: Last hour, Last 12 hours, Last 24 hours, Last 48 hours, Last 3 days, Last 7 days and Allow custom time range selection
 5. Choose 'Save' from the toolbar to create the parameter.
 
-![Image showing the creation of a time range parameter](./media/workbooks-parameters/time-settings.png)
+   ![Image showing the creation of a time range parameter](./media/workbooks-parameters/time-settings.png)
 
 This is how the workbook will look like in read-mode, in the "Pills" style.
 
-![Image showing a time range parameter in read mode](./media/workbooks-parameters/parameters-time.png)
+   ![Image showing a time range parameter in read mode](./media/workbooks-parameters/parameters-time.png)
 
 ## Referencing a parameter
 ### Via Bindings
@@ -54,15 +54,15 @@ This is how the workbook will look like in read-mode, in the "Pills" style.
 3. This binds the time range parameter to the time range of the chart. The time scope of the sample query is now Last 24 hours.
 4. Run query to see the results
 
-![Image showing a time range parameter referenced via bindings](./media/workbooks-parameters/time-binding.png)
+    ![Image showing a time range parameter referenced via bindings](./media/workbooks-parameters/time-binding.png)
 
 ### In KQL
 1. Add a query control to the workbook and select an Application Insights resource.
 2. In the KQL, enter a time scope filter using the parameter: `| where timestamp {TimeRange}`
 3. This expands on query evaluation time to `| where timestamp > ago(1d)`, which is the time range value of the parameter.
 4. Run query to see the results
 
-![Image showing a time range referenced in KQL](./media/workbooks-parameters/time-in-code.png)
+    ![Image showing a time range referenced in KQL](./media/workbooks-parameters/time-in-code.png)
 
 ### In Text 
 1. Add a text control to the workbook.

articles/azure-monitor/platform/workbooks-text.md

@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ A common use of textboxes is as internal variables used by other workbook contro
     4. Get default value from query: `unchecked`
 5. Choose 'Save' from the toolbar to create the parameter.
 
-![Image showing the creation of a text parameter](./media/workbooks-text/text-create.png)
+    ![Image showing the creation of a text parameter](./media/workbooks-text/text-create.png)
 
 This is how the workbook will look like in read-mode.
 
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ This is how the workbook will look like in read-mode.
     ```
 4. Run query to see the results
 
-![Image showing a text parameter referenced in KQL](./media/workbooks-text/text-reference.png)
+    ![Image showing a text parameter referenced in KQL](./media/workbooks-text/text-reference.png)
 
 
 ## Setting default values
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ This is how the workbook will look like in read-mode.
 6. Run query to see the result
 7. Choose 'Save' from the toolbar to create the parameter.
 
-![Image showing a text parameter with default value from KQL](./media/workbooks-text/text-default-value.png)
+    ![Image showing a text parameter with default value from KQL](./media/workbooks-text/text-default-value.png)
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > While this example queries Application Insights data, the approach can be used for any log based data source - Log Analytics, Azure Resource Graph, etc.

articles/azure-monitor/platform/workbooks-time.md

@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ Time parameters allow users to set the time context of analysis and is used by a
     4. Available time ranges: Last hour, Last 12 hours, Last 24 hours, Last 48 hours, Last 3 days, Last 7 days and Allow custom time range selection
 5. Choose 'Save' from the toolbar to create the parameter.
 
-![Image showing the creation of a time range parameter](./media/workbooks-time/time-settings.png)
+    ![Image showing the creation of a time range parameter](./media/workbooks-time/time-settings.png)
 
 This is how the workbook will look like in read-mode.
 
@@ -40,15 +40,15 @@ This is how the workbook will look like in read-mode.
 3. This binds the time range parameter to the time range of the chart. The time scope of the sample query is now Last 24 hours.
 4. Run query to see the results
 
-![Image showing a time range parameter referenced via bindings](./media/workbooks-time/time-binding.png)
+    ![Image showing a time range parameter referenced via bindings](./media/workbooks-time/time-binding.png)
 
 ### In KQL
 1. Add a query control to the workbook and select an Application Insights resource.
 2. In the KQL, enter a time scope filter using the parameter: `| where timestamp {TimeRange}`
 3. This expands on query evaluation time to `| where timestamp > ago(1d)`, which is the time range value of the parameter.
 4. Run query to see the results
 
-![Image showing a time range referenced in KQL](./media/workbooks-time/time-in-code.png)
+    ![Image showing a time range referenced in KQL](./media/workbooks-time/time-in-code.png)
 
 ### In Text 
 1. Add a text control to the workbook.

articles/azure-monitor/platform/workbooks-visualizations.md

@@ -16,15 +16,6 @@ ms.author: mbullwin
 
 Azure Monitor workbooks support a number of different styles of visualizations to accommodate your reporting needs. This article provides examples of each type of visualization.
 
-## Visualization components
-
-* [Text](#text)
-* [Charts](#charts)
-* [Grids](#grids)
-* [Tiles](#tiles)
-* [Trees](#trees)
-* [Graphs](#graphs)
-
 ## Text
 
 Workbooks allow authors to include text blocks in their workbooks. The text can be human analysis of telemetry, information to help users interpret your data, section headings, etc.
@@ -238,15 +229,15 @@ The graph below show data flowing in/out of a computer via various port to/from
 7. Set the visualization to **Graph**
 8. Click the **Graph Settings** button to open the settings pane
 9. In _Layout Fields_ at the bottom, set:
-    * Node Id: `Id`
-    * Source Id: `SourceId`
-    * Target Id: `TargetId`
-    * Edge Label: `None`
-    * Edge Size: `Calls`
-    * Node Size: `None`
-    * Coloring Type: `Categorical`
-    * Node Color Field: `Kind`
-    * Color palette: `Pastel`
+    * `Node Id`: `Id`
+    * `Source Id`: `SourceId`
+    * `Target Id`: `TargetId`
+    * `Edge Label`: `None`
+    * `Edge Size`: `Calls`
+    * `Node Size`: `None`
+    * `Coloring Type`: `Categorical`
+    * `Node Color Field`: `Kind`
+    * `Color palette`: `Pastel`
 10. In _Node Format Settings_ at the top, set:
     * _Top Content_- Use Column: `Name`, Column Renderer: `Text`
     * _Center Content_- Use Column: `Calls`, Column Renderer: `Big Number`, Color Palette: `None`