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articles/defender-for-iot/organizations/architecture-connections.md

@@ -12,19 +12,17 @@ OT network sensors connect to Azure to provide data about detected devices, aler
 
 The cloud connection methods described in this article are supported only for OT sensor version 22.x and later. All methods provide:
 
-- **Improved security**, without additional security configurations. Connect to Azure using specific and [secure firewall rules](how-to-set-up-your-network#sensor-access-to-azure-portal.md), without the need for any wildcards. 
+- **Improved security**, without additional security configurations. Connect to Azure using specific and secure firewall rules](how-to-set-up-your-network#sensor-access-to-azure-portal.md), without the need for any wildcards.
 
 - **Encryption**, Transport Layer Security (TLS1.2/AES-256) provides encrypted communication between the sensor and Azure resources.
 
 - **Scalability** for new features supported only in the cloud
 
-- **Flexible connectivity** using any of the connection methods described in this article
-
-For more information, see [Choose a sensor connection method](connect-sensors.md#choose-a-sensor-connection-method).
+For more information, see [Choose a sensor connection method](connect-sensors.md#choose-a-sensor-connection-method) and [Download endpoint details](how-to-manage-sensors-on-the-cloud.md#endpoint).
 
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]
-> To ensure that your network is ready, we recommend that you first run the migration in a lab or testing environment so that you can safely validate your Azure service configurations.
+> To ensure that your network is ready, we recommend that you first run your connections in a lab or testing environment so that you can safely validate your Azure service configurations.
 >
 
 ## Proxy connections with an Azure proxy

articles/defender-for-iot/organizations/how-to-manage-sensors-on-the-cloud.md

@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ Use the options on the **Sites and sensor** page and a sensor details page to do
 | :::image type="icon" source="media/how-to-manage-sensors-on-the-cloud/icon-diagnostics.png" border="false"::: **Send diagnostic files to support** | Individual, locally managed OT sensors only. <br><br>Available from the **...** options menu. <br><br>For more information, see [Upload a diagnostics log for support (Public preview)](#upload-a-diagnostics-log-for-support-public-preview).|
 | **Download SNMP MIB file** | Available from the **Sites and sensors** toolbar **More actions** menu. <br><br>For more information, see [Set up SNMP MIB monitoring](how-to-set-up-snmp-mib-monitoring.md).|
 | **Recover an on-premises management console password** | Available from the **Sites and sensors** toolbar **More actions** menu. <br><br>For more information, see [Manage the on-premises management console](how-to-manage-the-on-premises-management-console.md). |
-| **Download endpoint details** (Public preview) | Available from the **Sites and sensors** toolbar **More actions** menu, for OT sensor versions 22.x only. <br><br>Download the list of endpoints that must be enabled as secure endpoints from OT network sensors. Make sure that HTTPS traffic is enabled over port 443 to the listed endpoints for your sensor to connect to Azure. Outbound allow rules are defined once for all OT sensors onboarded to the same subscription.<br><br>To enable this option, select a sensor with a supported software version, or a site with one or more sensors with supported versions. |
+|<a name="endpoint"></a> **Download endpoint details** (Public preview) | Available from the **Sites and sensors** toolbar **More actions** menu, for OT sensor versions 22.x only. <br><br>Download the list of endpoints that must be enabled as secure endpoints from OT network sensors. Make sure that HTTPS traffic is enabled over port 443 to the listed endpoints for your sensor to connect to Azure. Outbound allow rules are defined once for all OT sensors onboarded to the same subscription.<br><br>To enable this option, select a sensor with a supported software version, or a site with one or more sensors with supported versions. |
 
 ## Reactivate an OT sensor