Merge pull request #284070 from khdownie/kendownie080824-2

blocked out IP addresses in images

Author: v-dirichards

articles/storage/file-sync/file-sync-extend-servers.md

@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
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-title: Tutorial - Extend Windows file servers with Azure File Sync
+title: Extend Windows file servers with Azure File Sync
 description: Learn how to extend Windows file servers with Azure File Sync, from start to finish.
 author: khdownie
 ms.service: azure-file-storage
 ms.topic: tutorial
-ms.date: 06/21/2022
+ms.date: 08/08/2024
 ms.author: kendownie
 #Customer intent: As an IT administrator, I want see how to extend Windows file servers with Azure File Sync, so I can evaluate the process for extending the storage capacity of my Windows servers.
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@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ Sign in to the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com).
 For this tutorial, you need to do the following before you can deploy Azure File Sync:
 
 - Create an Azure storage account and file share
-- Set up a Windows Server 2019 Datacenter VM
+- Set up a Windows Server VM
 - Prepare the Windows Server VM for Azure File Sync
 
 ### Create a folder and .txt file
@@ -167,7 +167,7 @@ Now you can add the data disk to the VM.
 
 ### Install the Azure PowerShell module
 
-Next, in the Windows Server 2019 Datacenter VM, install the Azure PowerShell module on the server. The `Az` module is a rollup module for the Azure PowerShell cmdlets. Installing it downloads all the available Azure Resource Manager modules and makes their cmdlets available for use.
+Next, in the Windows Server VM, install the Azure PowerShell module on the server. The `Az` module is a rollup module for the Azure PowerShell cmdlets. Installing it downloads all the available Azure Resource Manager modules and makes their cmdlets available for use.
 
 1. In the VM, open an elevated PowerShell window (run as administrator).
 1. Run the following command:
@@ -313,7 +313,7 @@ If you'd like to clean up the resources you created in this tutorial, first remo
 
 [!INCLUDE [storage-files-clean-up-portal](../../../includes/storage-files-clean-up-portal.md)]
 
-## Next steps
+## Next step
 
 In this tutorial, you learned the basic steps to extend the storage capacity of a Windows server by using Azure File Sync. For a more thorough look at planning for an Azure File Sync deployment, see:
 

articles/storage/file-sync/media/storage-sync-files-deployment-guide/firewall-and-vnet.png

@@ -173,16 +173,16 @@ Create an SSH connection with the VM.
 
 1. If you are on a Mac or Linux machine, open a Bash prompt. If you are on a Windows machine, open a PowerShell prompt.
 
-1. At your prompt, open an SSH connection to your VM. Replace the IP address with the one from your VM, and replace the path to the `.pem` with the path to where the key file was downloaded.
+1. At your prompt, open an SSH connection to your VM. Replace `xx.xx.xx.xx` with the IP address of your VM, and replace the path to the `.pem` with the path to where the key file was downloaded.
 
 ```console
-ssh -i .\Downloads\myVM_key.pem azureuser@20.25.14.85
+ssh -i .\Downloads\myVM_key.pem azureuser@xx.xx.xx.xx
 ```
 
 If you encounter a warning that the authenticity of the host can't be established, type **yes** to continue connecting to the VM. Leave the ssh connection open for the next step.
 
 > [!TIP]
-> The SSH key you created can be used the next time your create a VM in Azure. Just select the **Use a key stored in Azure** for **SSH public key source** the next time you create a VM. You already have the private key on your computer, so you won't need to download anything.
+> You can use the SSH key you created the next time you create a VM in Azure. Just select the **Use a key stored in Azure** for **SSH public key source** the next time you create a VM. You already have the private key on your computer, so you won't need to download anything.
 
 ## Mount the NFS share