fixing phrasing

Author: batamig

articles/sentinel/connect-defender-for-cloud.md

@@ -33,9 +33,9 @@ appliesto:
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
-- You must be using Microsoft Sentinel in the Azure portal. If you're onboarded to Microsoft's unified security operations (SecOps) platform, Defender for Cloud alerts are already ingested into Microsoft Defender XDR, and the **Tenant-based Microsoft Defender for Cloud (Preview)** data connector isn't listed in the **Data connectors** page in the Defender portal. For more information, see [Microsoft Sentinel in the Microsoft Defender portal](microsoft-sentinel-defender-portal.md).
+- You must be using Microsoft Sentinel in the Azure portal. When you onboard Microsoft Sentinel to the Defender portal, Defender for Cloud alerts are already ingested into Microsoft Defender XDR, and the **Tenant-based Microsoft Defender for Cloud (Preview)** data connector isn't listed in the **Data connectors** page in the Defender portal. For more information, see [Microsoft Sentinel in the Microsoft Defender portal](microsoft-sentinel-defender-portal.md).
 
-    If you're onboarded to Microsoft's unified SecOps platform, you'll still want to install the **Microsoft Defender for Cloud** solution to use built-in security content with Microsoft Sentinel.
+    If you've onboarded Microsoft Sentinel to the Defender portal, you'll still want to install the **Microsoft Defender for Cloud** solution to use built-in security content with Microsoft Sentinel.
 
     If you're using Microsoft Sentinel in the Defender portal without Microsoft Defender XDR, this procedure is still relevant for you. 
 

articles/sentinel/feature-availability.md

@@ -23,9 +23,9 @@ This article describes the features available in Microsoft Sentinel across diffe
 
 ## Experience in the Defender portal 
 
-Microsoft Sentinel is also available in the [Microsoft Defender portal](microsoft-sentinel-defender-portal.md) as Microsoft's unified security operations (SecOps) platform. In the Defender portal, all features in general availability are available in both commercial and GCC High and DoD clouds. Features still in preview are available only in the commercial cloud.
+Microsoft Sentinel is also available in the [Microsoft Defender portal](microsoft-sentinel-defender-portal.md). In the Defender portal, all features in general availability are available in both commercial and GCC High and DoD clouds. Features still in preview are available only in the commercial cloud.
 
-While [attack disruption in the Defender portal](/defender-xdr/automatic-attack-disruption) is generally available, [SAP support for attack disruption](/defender-xdr/automatic-attack-disruption#automated-response-actions-for-sap-with-microsoft-sentinel) with Microsoft's unified SecOps platform is available only in the commercial cloud.
+While [attack disruption in the Defender portal](/defender-xdr/automatic-attack-disruption) is generally available, [SAP support for attack disruption](/defender-xdr/automatic-attack-disruption#automated-response-actions-for-sap-with-microsoft-sentinel) in the Defender portal available only in the commercial cloud.
 
 For more information, see [Microsoft Defender XDR for US Government customers](/defender-xdr/usgov).
 

articles/sentinel/geographical-availability-data-residency.md

@@ -78,8 +78,9 @@ Customer data is kept and is available while the license is under a grace period
 
 Microsoft Sentinel may share data, including customer data, among the following Microsoft products:
 
-- Microsoft Defender XDR / Microsoft's unified security operations platform
+- Microsoft Defender XDR
 - Azure Log Analytics
+
 ## Related content
 
 For more information, see details about [Azure regions](/azure/azure-monitor/logs/workspace-design#azure-regions?toc=/azure/sentinel/TOC.json&bc=/azure/sentinel/breadcrumb/toc.json) when designing your workspace architecture.

articles/sentinel/whats-new.md

@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ For more information, see:
 
 ### Microsoft Sentinel workbooks now available to view directly in the Microsoft Defender portal
 
-Microsoft Sentinel workbooks are now available for viewing directly in the Microsoft Defender portal with Microsoft's unified security operations (SecOps) platform. Now, in the Defender portal, when you select **Microsoft Sentinel > Threat management> Workbooks**, you remain in the Defender portal instead of a new tab being opened for workbooks in the Azure portal. Continue tabbing out to the Azure portal only when you need to edit your workbooks.
+Microsoft Sentinel workbooks are now available for viewing directly in the Microsoft Defender portal for unified security operations (SecOps). Now, in the Defender portal, when you select **Microsoft Sentinel > Threat management> Workbooks**, you remain in the Defender portal instead of a new tab being opened for workbooks in the Azure portal. Continue tabbing out to the Azure portal only when you need to edit your workbooks.
 
 Microsoft Sentinel workbooks are based on Azure Monitor workbooks, and help you visualize and monitor the data ingested to Microsoft Sentinel. Workbooks add tables and charts with analytics for your logs and queries to the tools already available.