Addressing PRMerger feedback

Author: cynthn

articles/virtual-machines/azure-compute-gallery.md

@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ An Azure Compute Gallery helps you build structure and organization around your
 
 With a gallery, you can share your resources to everyone, or limit sharing to different users, service principals, or AD groups within your organization. Resources can be replicated to multiple regions, for quicker scaling of your deployments.
 
-<sup>1</sup> The Azure Compute Gallery service isn't a global resource. For disaster recovery scenarios, it's a best practice is to have at least two galleries, in different regions.
+<sup>1</sup> The Azure Compute Gallery service isn't a global resource. For disaster recovery scenarios, the best practice is to have at least two galleries, in different regions.
 
 ## Images 
 

articles/virtual-machines/create-gallery.md

@@ -115,6 +115,8 @@ PUT https://management.azure.com/subscriptions/{subscriptionId}/resourceGroups/{
 >
 > You can't currently create a Flexible virtual machine scale set from an image shared to you by another tenant.
 
+To start sharing a direct shared gallery with a subscription or tenant, use see [Share a gallery with a subscription or tenant](./share-gallery-direct.md).
+
 ### [Portal](#tab/portaldirect)
 
 1. Sign in to the Azure portal at https://portal.azure.com.
@@ -181,7 +183,7 @@ POST https://management.azure.com/subscriptions/{subscriptionId}/resourceGroups/
 
 ---
 
-To start sharing the gallery with a subscription or tenant, use see [Share a gallery with a subscription or tenant](./share-gallery-direct.md).
+
 
 <a name=community></a>
 ## Create a community gallery

articles/virtual-machines/image-version.md

@@ -13,8 +13,6 @@ ms.custom:
 
 ---
 
-
-
 # Create an image definition and an image version 
 
 A [Azure Compute Gallery](shared-image-galleries.md) (formerly known as Shared Image Gallery) simplifies custom image sharing across your organization. Custom images are like marketplace images, but you create them yourself. Images can be created from a VM, VHD, snapshot, managed image, or another image version. 
@@ -323,6 +321,8 @@ PUT https://management.azure.com/subscriptions/{subscriptionId}/resourceGroups/{
 }
 ```
 
+---
+
 ## Create an image in one tenant using the source image in another tenant
 
 In the subscription where the source image exists, grant reader permissions to the user. Once the user has reader permission to the source image, login to both accounts (source and target).

articles/virtual-machines/vm-generalized-image-version.md

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ ms.service: virtual-machines
 ms.subservice: gallery
 ms.topic: how-to
 ms.workload: infrastructure
-ms.date: 02/06/2023
+ms.date: 02/16/2023
 ms.author: saraic
 ms.reviewer: cynthn 
 ms.custom: devx-track-azurecli, devx-track-azurepowershell
@@ -738,7 +738,7 @@ galleryName="1a2b3c4d-1234-abcd-1234-1a2b3c4d5e6f-myDirectShared"
 
 Make sure the state of the image is `Generalized`. If you want to use an image with the `Specialized` state, see [Create a VM from a specialized image version](vm-specialized-image-version.md).
 
-Use the `Id` from the output, appended with `/Versions/latest` to use the latest version, as the value for `--image`` to create a VM. In this example, we are creating a VM from a Linux image that is directly shared to us, and creating SSH keys for authentication.
+Use the `Id` from the output, appended with `/Versions/latest` to use the latest version, as the value for `--image` to create a VM. In this example, we are creating a VM from a Linux image that is directly shared to us, and creating SSH keys for authentication.
 
 ```azurecli-interactive
 imgDef="/SharedGalleries/1a2b3c4d-1234-abcd-1234-1a2b3c4d5e6f-MYDIRECTSHARED/Images/myDirectDefinition/Versions/latest"
@@ -830,7 +830,7 @@ https://management.azure.com/subscriptions/{subscriptionId}/resourceGroups/{rg}/
 > [!NOTE]
 > **Known issue**: In the Azure portal, if you you select a region, select an image, then change the region, you will get an error message: "You can only create VM in the replication regions of this image" even when the image is replicated to that region. To get rid of the error, select a different region, then switch back to the region you want. If the image is available, it should clear the error message.
 >
-> You can also use the Azure CLI to check what images are shared with you. For example, you can use `az sig list-shared --location westus" to see what images are shared with you in the West US region.
+> You can also use the Azure CLI to check what images are shared with you. For example, you can use `az sig list-shared --location westus` to see what images are shared with you in the West US region.
 
 1. Type **virtual machines** in the search.
 1. Under **Services**, select **Virtual machines**.

articles/virtual-machines/vm-specialized-image-version.md

@@ -159,7 +159,7 @@ Now you can create one or more new VMs. This example creates a VM named *myVM*,
 1. For **Availability options**, leave the default of *No infrastructure redundancy required*.
 1. The value for **Image** is automatically filled with the `latest` image version if you started from the page for the image definition.
 1. For **Size**, choose a VM size from the list of available sizes and then choose **Select**.
-1. Under **Administrator account**, the username is greyed out because the username and credentials from the source VM are used.
+1. Under **Administrator account**, the username is grayed out because the username and credentials from the source VM are used.
 1. If you want to allow remote access to the VM, under **Public inbound ports**, choose **Allow selected ports** and then select **SSH (22)** or **RDP (3389)** from the drop-down. If you don't want to allow remote access to the VM, leave **None** selected for **Public inbound ports**.
 1. When you're finished, select the **Review + create** button at the bottom of the page.
 1. After the VM passes validation, select **Create** at the bottom of the page to start the deployment.
@@ -169,7 +169,7 @@ Now you can create one or more new VMs. This example creates a VM named *myVM*,
 
 If the subscription where the gallery resides is within the same tenant, images shared through RBAC can be used to create VMs using the CLI and PowerShell.
 
-You'll need to the `imageID` of the image you want to use and you need to make sure it is replicated to the region where you want to create the VM.
+You'll need the `imageID` of the image you want to use and make sure the image is replicated to the region where you want to create the VM.
 
 ### [CLI](#tab/cli2)
 
@@ -266,7 +266,7 @@ New-AzVM `
 
 If the image you want to use is stored in a gallery that isn't in the same tenant (directory) then you will need to sign in to each tenant to verify you have access.
 
-You will need to the `imageID` of the image you want to use and you need to make sure it is replicated to the region where you want to create the VM. You will also need the `tenantID` for the source gallery and the `tenantID` for where you want to create the VM.
+You'll need the `imageID` of the image you want to use and make sure the image is replicated to the region where you want to create the VM. You'll also need the `tenantID` for the source gallery and the `tenantID` for where you want to create the VM.
 
 ### [CLI](#tab/cli3)