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 title: What is Azure Operator Service Manager?
-description: Learn about Azure Operator Service Manager, an Azure Service for the management of Network Services for telecom operators.
-author: adamdor
+description: Learn about Azure Operator Service Manager, an Azure orchestration service used to managed network service in large scale operator environments.
+author: msftadam
 ms.author: adamdor
 ms.date: 10/18/2023
 ms.topic: overview
 ms.service: azure-operator-service-manager
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 # What is Azure Operator Service Manager?
 
-Azure Operator Service Manager is an Azure service specifically designed to assist telecom operators in deploying and operating complex network services. It provides management capabilities for multi-vendor applications across Azure Operator Nexus sites and Azure regions. Azure Operator Service Manager caters to the needs of telecom operators, simplifying migration of workloads to Azure cloud and edge environments while accelerating both service innovation and service monetization.
+Azure Operator Service Manager is a cloud orchestration service designed to simplify management of complex edge network services hosted on the Azure Operator Nexus platform. It provides persona-based capabilities to onboard, compose, deploy and update multi-vendor applications across one-to-many Azure sites and regions. Azure Operator Service Manager caters to the needs of large scale operator environments, helping to accelerate the migration of workloads to Azure cloud, while utilizing trusted Azure safe practices, to ensure service resiliency and reliability.
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/overview-unified-service.png" alt-text="Diagram that shows unified service orchestration across Azure domains." lightbox="media/overview-unified-service-lightbox.png":::
 
 ## Technical overview
 
-Managing complex network services efficiently and reliably can be a challenge. Azure Operator Service Manager’s unique role-based approach introduces curated experiences for publishers, designers, and operators. The following diagram illustrates the Azure Operator Service Manager (AOSM) deployment workflow.
+Managing complex network services efficiently and reliably can be a challenge. Azure Operator Service Manager’s unique approach introduces curated experiences for publishers, designers, and operators. The following diagram illustrates the Azure Operator Service Manager (AOSM) deployment workflow.
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/overview-deployment-workflows.png" alt-text="Illustration that shows the Azure Operator Service Manager (AOSM) deployment workflow." lightbox="media/overview-deployment-workflows-lightbox.png":::
 
 ## Product features
 
 ### Unified service orchestration
 
-Consolidate software management tasks into a single set of end-to-end Azure operations to seamlessly compose, deploy, and update complex multi-vendor multi-region services. Model network services using Azure Resource Manager (ARM), just like other Azure resources and drive run-time operations via any Azure interfaces, such as portal, CLI, API, or SDK.
+Consolidate service management tasks into a single set of end-to-end Azure operations to seamlessly manage infrastructure, software and configuration for complex multi-vendor multi-region services. Model network services using Azure Resource Manager (ARM), just like other Azure resources and drive run-time operations via any Azure interfaces, such as portal, CLI, API, or SDK.
 
-### Operations at scale
+### Hybrid operations at scale
 
 Azure Operator Service Manager is built to scale using the same underlying databases, analytics and cloud-native foundational engineering as Azure itself. Core and edge workloads can be managed together, as complete network deployments ranging in scale from private 5G to national networks. Alternatively use Azure subscription or role-based separation of different parts of your network to segregate management by operational team or service type.
 
-### Telco-grade security
+### Operator grade security
 
 Azure Operator Service Manager works seamlessly with Azure security features including Private Link, embedded registries, artifact stores and secret management options to ensure that the operator has confidence that what is deployed matches what was on-boarded by each publisher.
 
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 ## Conclusion
 
-By unifying service management, facilitating deployments at national scale and ensuring service consistency, operators can achieve accelerated service velocity, improved service reliability, and optimize service cost. Harness the power of Microsoft Azure through Azure Operator Service Manager to drive network services forward.
+By unifying service management, facilitating deployments at fleet-wide scale and ensuring service consistency, operators can achieve accelerated service velocity, improved service reliability, and optimize service cost. Harness the power of Microsoft Azure through Azure Operator Service Manager to drive network services forward.
 
 ## Service Level Agreement