review updates

Author: ProfessorKendrick

articles/partner-solutions/includes/register-resource-provider.md

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ ms.date: 01/10/2025
 ms.author: kkendrick
 ---
 
-To set up New Relic on Azure, you need to register the the service as a resource provider in your Azure subscription:
+To set up the partner service on Azure, you need to register the service as a resource provider in your Azure subscription:
 
 - To register the resource provider in the Azure portal, follow the steps in [Azure resource providers and types](../../azure-resource-manager/management/resource-providers-and-types.md).
 

articles/partner-solutions/includes/subscribe.md

@@ -5,5 +5,5 @@ ms.date: 01/06/2025
 ms.author: kkendrick
 ---
 
-You can subscribe to this service through through the Azure Marketplace's [online store](/marketplace/azure-marketplace-overview#azure-marketplace-online-store) or through the [Azure portal](/marketplace/azure-marketplace-overview#azure-marketplace-in-the-azure-portal) by searching for the service by name,
+You can subscribe to this service through the Azure Marketplace's [online store](/marketplace/azure-marketplace-overview#azure-marketplace-online-store) or through the [Azure portal](/marketplace/azure-marketplace-overview#azure-marketplace-in-the-azure-portal) by searching for the service by name,
 

articles/partner-solutions/new-relic/create.md

@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ The *Basics* tab has three sections:
 - Azure resource details
 - New Relic account details
 
-:::image type="content" source="media/create/basics-tab.png" alt-text="A screenshot of the Create a New Relic resource in Azure options inside of the Azure portal's working pane with the Basics tab displayed":::
+:::image type="content" source="media/create/basics-tab.png" alt-text="A screenshot of the Create a New Relic resource in Azure options inside of the Azure portal's working pane with the Basics tab displayed.":::
 
 There are required fields (identified with a red asterisk) in each section that you need to fill out.
 
@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ To filter the set of Azure resources that send logs to New Relic, use inclusion
 > [!NOTE]
 > If there's a conflict between inclusion and exclusion rules, the exclusion rule applies.
 
-1. After you finish configuring metrics and logs, select **Next**.
+-  After you finish configuring metrics and logs, select **Next**.
 
 ### Tags tab (optional)
 

articles/partner-solutions/new-relic/manage.md

@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ For information on New Relic agents, review the [New Relic documentation](https:
 
 To monitor virtual machines using the New Relic agent:
 
-1. Select **New Relic account config** > **Virtual Machines** from the *Service menu*. 
+- Select **New Relic account config** > **Virtual Machines** from the *Service menu*. 
 
     A list of all virtual machines in the subscription displays in the working pane.
 
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ For each virtual machine, the following info appears:
 
 To monitor Virtual Machine Scale Sets using the New Relic Agent:
 
-1. Select **New Relic account config** > **Virtual Machine Scale Sets** from the *Service menu*. 
+- Select **New Relic account config** > **Virtual Machine Scale Sets** from the *Service menu*. 
 
     A list of all Virtual Machine Scale Sets in the subscription displays in the working pane.
 
@@ -137,9 +137,11 @@ To monitor Virtual Machine Scale Sets using the New Relic Agent:
 > [!NOTE]
 > The agent installation dashboard supports the automatic and rolling upgrade policy for Flex orchestration mode in the next release when similar support is available from Virtual Machine Scale Sets Flex resources.
 
-### Monitor app services using the New Relic agent
+### Monitor App Services using the New Relic agent
 
-1. Select **New Relic account config** > **App Services** from the *Service menu*. 
+To monitor App Services using the New Relic Agent:
+
+- Select **New Relic account config** > **App Services** from the *Service menu*. 
 
 For each app service, the following information appears: