Merge pull request #251322 from shpathak-msft/patch-21

Update cache-remove-tls-10-11.md

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articles/azure-cache-for-redis/cache-remove-tls-10-11.md

@@ -23,8 +23,8 @@ TLS versions 1.0 and 1.1 also don't support the modern encryption methods and ci
 
 As a part of this effort, you can expect the following changes to Azure Cache for Redis:
 
-- _Phase 1_: Azure Cache for Redis changes the default minimum TLS version to TLS 1.2 for newly created cache instances. Previously, it was TLS 1.0. Existing cache instances won't be updated at this point. You can still use the Azure portal or other management APIs to [change the minimum TLS version](cache-configure.md#access-ports) to 1.0 or 1.1 for backward compatibility.
-- _Phase 2_: Azure Cache for Redis stops supporting TLS 1.1 and TLS 1.0 starting August 1,2024. After this change, your application must use TLS 1.2 or later to communicate with your cache. The Azure Cache for Redis service is expected to be available while it is migrated to support only TLS 1.2 or later. Read further sections to know how to determine if your applications are affected.
+- _Phase 1_: Azure Cache for Redis stops offering TLS 1.0/1.1 as an option for MinimumTLSVersion setting for new cache creates. Existing cache instances won't be updated at this point. You can still use the Azure portal or other management APIs to [change the minimum TLS version](cache-configure.md#access-ports) to 1.0 or 1.1 for backward compatibility.
+- _Phase 2_: Azure Cache for Redis stops supporting TLS 1.1 and TLS 1.0 starting October 1, 2024. After this change, your application must use TLS 1.2 or later to communicate with your cache. The Azure Cache for Redis service will be available while we update the MinimumTLSVerion for all caches to 1.2.
 
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