edit pass: record-calls

ShawnJackson · ShawnJackson · commit 6707fead1395 · 2024-02-08T14:14:49.000-06:00
diff --git a/articles/communication-services/how-tos/calling-sdk/includes/install-sdk/install-sdk-android.md b/articles/communication-services/how-tos/calling-sdk/includes/install-sdk/install-sdk-android.md
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ ms.author: rifox
 
 ## Install the SDK
 
-Locate your project-level *build.gradle* file and be sure to add `mavenCentral()` to the list of repositories under `buildscript` and `allprojects`:
+Locate your project-level *build.gradle* file and add `mavenCentral()` to the list of repositories under `buildscript` and `allprojects`:
 
 ```groovy
 buildscript {
diff --git a/articles/communication-services/how-tos/calling-sdk/includes/install-sdk/install-sdk-web.md b/articles/communication-services/how-tos/calling-sdk/includes/install-sdk/install-sdk-web.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.author: rifox
 ---
 ## Install the SDK
 
-Use the `npm install` command to install the Azure Communication Services calling and common SDKs for JavaScript.
+Use the `npm install` command to install the Azure Communication Services Common and Calling SDKs for JavaScript:
 
 ```console
 npm install @azure/communication-common --save
diff --git a/articles/communication-services/how-tos/calling-sdk/includes/install-sdk/install-sdk-windows.md b/articles/communication-services/how-tos/calling-sdk/includes/install-sdk/install-sdk-windows.md
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ ms.topic: include
 ms.date: 05/30/2023
 ms.author: jowang
 ---
-## Set up
+## Set up your system
 
 ### Create the Visual Studio project
 
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ The Calling SDK APIs and libraries are publicly available via a NuGet package.
 
 The following steps exemplify how to find, download, and install the Calling SDK NuGet package:
 
-1. Open NuGet Package Manager (**Tools** > **NuGet Package Manager** > **Manage NuGet Packages for Solution**).
+1. Open NuGet Package Manager by selecting **Tools** > **NuGet Package Manager** > **Manage NuGet Packages for Solution**.
 2. Select **Browse**, and then enter `Azure.Communication.Calling.WindowsClient` in the search box.
 3. Make sure that the **Include prerelease** check box is selected.
 4. Select the `Azure.Communication.Calling.WindowsClient` package, and then select `Azure.Communication.Calling.WindowsClient` [1.4.0-beta.1](https://www.nuget.org/packages/Azure.Communication.Calling.WindowsClient/1.4.0-beta.1) or a newer version.
diff --git a/articles/communication-services/how-tos/calling-sdk/includes/record-calls/record-calls-android.md b/articles/communication-services/how-tos/calling-sdk/includes/record-calls/record-calls-android.md
@@ -9,13 +9,15 @@ ms.author: rifox
 
 ## Record calls
 
-> [!WARNING]
-> Up until version 1.1.0 and beta release version 1.1.0-beta.1 of the Azure Communication Services Calling Android SDK, `isRecordingActive` and `addOnIsRecordingActiveChangedListener` were part of the `Call` object. For new beta releases, those APIs were moved as an extended feature of `Call`.
-
 > [!NOTE]
 > This API is provided as a preview for developers and might change based on feedback that we receive. Don't use this API in a production environment. To use this API, use the beta release of the Azure Communication Services Calling Android SDK.
 
-Call recording is an extended feature of the core `Call` object. You first need to obtain the recording feature object:
+Call recording is an extended feature of the core `Call` object.
+
+> [!WARNING]
+> Up until version 1.1.0 and beta release version 1.1.0-beta.1 of the Azure Communication Services Calling Android SDK, `isRecordingActive` and `addOnIsRecordingActiveChangedListener` were part of the `Call` object. For new beta releases, those APIs were moved as an extended feature of `Call`.
+
+You first need to obtain the recording feature object:
 
 ```java
 RecordingCallFeature callRecordingFeature = call.feature(Features.RECORDING);
diff --git a/articles/communication-services/how-tos/calling-sdk/includes/record-calls/record-calls-ios.md b/articles/communication-services/how-tos/calling-sdk/includes/record-calls/record-calls-ios.md
@@ -9,13 +9,15 @@ ms.author: rifox
 
 ## Record calls
 
-> [!WARNING]
-> Up until version 1.1.0 and beta release version 1.1.0-beta.1 of the Azure Communication Services Calling iOS SDK, `isRecordingActive` was part of the `Call` object and `didChangeRecordingState` was part of the `CallDelegate` delegate. For new beta releases, those APIs were moved as an extended feature of `Call`.
-
 > [!NOTE]
 > This API is provided as a preview for developers and might change based on feedback that we receive. Don't use this API in a production environment. To use this API, use the beta release of the Azure Communication Services Calling iOS SDK.
 
-Call recording is an extended feature of the core `Call` object. You first need to obtain the recording feature object:
+Call recording is an extended feature of the core `Call` object.
+
+> [!WARNING]
+> Up until version 1.1.0 and beta release version 1.1.0-beta.1 of the Azure Communication Services Calling iOS SDK, `isRecordingActive` was part of the `Call` object and `didChangeRecordingState` was part of the `CallDelegate` delegate. For new beta releases, those APIs were moved as an extended feature of `Call`.
+
+You first need to obtain the recording feature object:
 
 ```swift
 let callRecordingFeature = call.feature(Features.recording)
diff --git a/articles/communication-services/how-tos/calling-sdk/includes/record-calls/record-calls-web.md b/articles/communication-services/how-tos/calling-sdk/includes/record-calls/record-calls-web.md
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ ms.author: rifox
 
 ### Cloud recording
 
-Call recording is an extended feature of the core `Call` API. You first need to import calling features from the Calling SDK:
+Call recording is an extended feature of the core Call API. You first need to import calling features from the Calling SDK:
 
 ```js
 import { Features} from "@azure/communication-calling";
diff --git a/articles/communication-services/how-tos/calling-sdk/record-calls.md b/articles/communication-services/how-tos/calling-sdk/record-calls.md
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ zone_pivot_groups: acs-plat-web-ios-android-windows
 
 [!INCLUDE [Public Preview Disclaimer](../../includes/public-preview-include-document.md)]
 
-[Call recording](../../concepts/voice-video-calling/call-recording.md) lets your users record calls that they make with Azure Communication Services. In this article, you learn how to manage recording on the client side. Before you start, you need to set up [server side](../../quickstarts/voice-video-calling/call-recording-sample.md) recording.
+[Call recording](../../concepts/voice-video-calling/call-recording.md) lets your users record calls that they make with Azure Communication Services. In this article, you learn how to manage recording on the client side. Before you start, you need to set up recording on the [server side](../../quickstarts/voice-video-calling/call-recording-sample.md).
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
@@ -28,20 +28,20 @@ zone_pivot_groups: acs-plat-web-ios-android-windows
 - Optional: Completion of the [quickstart to add voice calling to your application](../../quickstarts/voice-video-calling/getting-started-with-calling.md).
 
 ::: zone pivot="platform-web"
-[!INCLUDE [Record Calls Client-side JavaScript](./includes/record-calls/record-calls-web.md)]
-[!INCLUDE [Local Recording Notification for Teams JavaScript](./includes/record-calls/record-calls-locally-web.md)]
+[!INCLUDE [Record calls client-side JavaScript](./includes/record-calls/record-calls-web.md)]
+[!INCLUDE [Local recording notification for Teams JavaScript](./includes/record-calls/record-calls-locally-web.md)]
 ::: zone-end
 
 ::: zone pivot="platform-android"
-[!INCLUDE [Record Calls Client-side Android](./includes/record-calls/record-calls-android.md)]
+[!INCLUDE [Record calls client-side Android](./includes/record-calls/record-calls-android.md)]
 ::: zone-end
 
 ::: zone pivot="platform-ios"
-[!INCLUDE [Record Calls Client-side iOS](./includes/record-calls/record-calls-ios.md)]
+[!INCLUDE [Record calls client-side iOS](./includes/record-calls/record-calls-ios.md)]
 ::: zone-end
 
 ::: zone pivot="platform-windows"
-[!INCLUDE [Record Calls Client-side Windows](./includes/record-calls/record-calls-windows.md)]
+[!INCLUDE [Record calls client-side Windows](./includes/record-calls/record-calls-windows.md)]
 ::: zone-end
 
 ### Compliance recording
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ const isComplianceRecordingActiveChangedHandler = () => {
 callRecordingApi.on('isRecordingActiveChanged', isComplianceRecordingActiveChangedHandler);
 ```
 
-You can also implement compliance recording by using a custom recording bot. [See the GitHub example](https://github.com/microsoftgraph/microsoft-graph-comms-samples/tree/a3943bafd73ce0df780c0e1ac3428e3de13a101f/Samples/BetaSamples/LocalMediaSamples/ComplianceRecordingBot).
+You can also implement compliance recording by using a custom recording bot. See the [GitHub example](https://github.com/microsoftgraph/microsoft-graph-comms-samples/tree/a3943bafd73ce0df780c0e1ac3428e3de13a101f/Samples/BetaSamples/LocalMediaSamples/ComplianceRecordingBot).
 
 ## Next steps
 
diff --git a/articles/communication-services/includes/public-preview-include-document.md b/articles/communication-services/includes/public-preview-include-document.md
@@ -7,6 +7,6 @@ ms.author: rifox
 ms.custom: private_preview
 ---
 > [!IMPORTANT]
-> Functionality described in this document is currently in public preview.
+> Functionality described in this article is currently in public preview.
 > This preview version is provided without a service-level agreement, and we don't recommend it for production workloads. Certain features might not be supported or might have constrained capabilities.
 > For more information, see [Supplemental Terms of Use for Microsoft Azure Previews](https://azure.microsoft.com/support/legal/preview-supplemental-terms/).
