editorial tweaks

Author: LouisBerner

articles/databox-online/azure-stack-edge-add-hardware-terms.md

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ author: alkohli
 ms.service: databox
 ms.subservice: edge
 ms.topic: article
-ms.date: 08/09/2022
+ms.date: 08/10/2022
 ms.author: alkohli
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 # Azure Stack Edge hardware additional terms
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ This article documents additional terms for Azure Stack Edge hardware.
 
 ## Availability of the Azure Stack Edge device
 
-Microsoft isn't obligated to continue to offer the Azure Stack Edge Device or any other hardware product in connection with the Service. The Azure Stack Edge Device may not be offered in all regions or jurisdictions, and even where it is offered, it may be subject to availability. Microsoft reserves the right to refuse to offer the Azure Stack Edge device to anyone in its sole discretion and judgment.
+Microsoft isn't obligated to continue to offer the Azure Stack Edge device or any other hardware product in connection with the Service. The Azure Stack Edge device may not be offered in all regions or jurisdictions, and even where it is offered, it may be subject to availability. Microsoft reserves the right to refuse to offer the Azure Stack Edge device to anyone in its sole discretion and judgment.
 
 ## Use of the Azure Stack Edge device
 As part of the Service, Microsoft allows Customer to use the Azure Stack Edge device for as long as Customer has an active subscription to the Service. If Customer no longer has an active subscription and fails to return the Azure Stack Edge device, Microsoft may deem the Azure Stack Edge device as lost as described in the “Title and risk of loss; shipment and return responsibilities” section.
@@ -33,11 +33,11 @@ Microsoft may charge Customer for a lost device fee for the Azure Stack Edge dev
 
 ### Shipment and return of Azure Stack Edge device
 
-Customer will be responsible for a one-time metered shipping fee for the shipment of the Azure Stack Edge Device from Microsoft to Customer and return shipping of the same, in addition to any metered amounts for carrier charges, any taxes, or applicable customs fees. When returning an Azure Stack Edge device to Microsoft, Customer will package and ship the same in accordance with Microsoft’s instructions, including using a carrier designated by Microsoft and the packaging materials provided by Microsoft. If Customer prefers to arrange Customer’s own pick-up and/or return of the same, then Customer is responsible for the costs of shipping the Azure Stack Edge device, including protections against any loss or damage of the Azure Stack Edge device (for example, insurance coverage) while in transit. Customer will package and ship the Azure Stack Edge device in accordance with Microsoft’s packaging instructions. Customer is also responsible to ensure that it removes all Customer’s data from the Azure Stack Edge device prior to returning it to Microsoft, including following any Microsoft-issued processes for wiping or clearing the Azure Stack Edge device.
+Customer will be responsible for a one-time metered shipping fee for the shipment of the Azure Stack Edge device from Microsoft to Customer and return shipping of the same, in addition to any metered amounts for carrier charges, any taxes, or applicable customs fees. When returning an Azure Stack Edge device to Microsoft, Customer will package and ship the same in accordance with Microsoft’s instructions, including using a carrier designated by Microsoft and the packaging materials provided by Microsoft. If Customer prefers to arrange Customer’s own pick-up and/or return of the same, then Customer is responsible for the costs of shipping the Azure Stack Edge device, including protections against any loss or damage of the Azure Stack Edge device (for example, insurance coverage) while in transit. Customer will package and ship the Azure Stack Edge device in accordance with Microsoft’s packaging instructions. Customer is also responsible to ensure that it removes all Customer’s data from the Azure Stack Edge device prior to returning it to Microsoft, including following any Microsoft-issued processes for wiping or clearing the Azure Stack Edge device.
 
 ### Responsibilities if a government customer moves an Azure Stack Edge device between customer’s locations
 
-Government Customer agrees to comply with and be responsible for all applicable import, export and general trade laws and regulations should Customer decide to transport the Azure Stack Edge device beyond the country border in which Customer receives the Azure Stack Edge device. For clarity, but not limited to, if a government Customer is in possession of an Azure Stack Edge device, only the government Customer may, at government Customer’s sole risk and expense, transport the Azure Stack Edge device to its different locations in accordance with this Section and the requirements of the Additional Terms. Customer is responsible for obtaining at Customer’s own risk and expense any export license, import license and other official authorization for the exportation and importation of the Azure Stack Edge device and Customer’s data to any different Customer location. Customer shall also be responsible for customs clearance to any different Customer location, and will bear all duties, taxes, and other official charges payable upon importation as well as all costs and risks of carrying out customs formalities in a timely manner.
+Government Customer agrees to comply with and be responsible for all applicable import, export and general trade laws and regulations should Customer decide to transport the Azure Stack Edge device beyond the country border in which Customer receives the Azure Stack Edge device. For clarity, but not limited to, if a government Customer is in possession of an Azure Stack Edge device, only the government Customer may, at government Customer’s sole risk and expense, transport the Azure Stack Edge device to its different locations in accordance with this section and the requirements of the Additional Terms. Customer is responsible for obtaining at Customer’s own risk and expense any export license, import license and other official authorization for the exportation and importation of the Azure Stack Edge device and Customer’s data to any different Customer location. Customer shall also be responsible for customs clearance to any different Customer location, and will bear all duties, taxes, and other official charges payable upon importation as well as all costs and risks of carrying out customs formalities in a timely manner.
 
 If Customer transports the Azure Stack Edge device to a different location, Customer agrees to return the Azure Stack Edge device to the country location where Customer received it initially, prior to shipping the Azure Stack Edge device back to Microsoft. Customer acknowledges that there are inherent risks in shipping data on and in connection with the Azure Stack Edge device, and that Microsoft will have no liability to Customer for any damage, theft, or loss occurring to an Azure Stack Edge device or any data stored on one, including during transit. It's Customer’s responsibility to obtain the appropriate support agreement from Microsoft to meet Customer’s operating objectives for the Azure Stack Edge device; however, depending on the location to which Customer intends to move the Azure Stack Edge device, Microsoft’s ability to provide hardware servicing and support may be delayed, or may not be available.