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Author: KarlErickson

articles/spring-apps/how-to-enterprise-marketplace-offer.md

@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ The pricing for Azure Spring Apps Enterprise plan is composed of the following t
 
 For more information about pricing, see [Azure Spring Apps pricing](https://azure.microsoft.com/pricing/details/spring-apps/).
 
-To provide the best customer experience to manage the Tanzu component license purchasing and metering, VMware creates an [Azure Spring Apps Enterprise](https://aka.ms/ascmpoffer) offer in Azure Marketplace. This offer represents a Tanzu component license that is automatically purchased on behalf of customers during the creation of an Azure Spring Apps Enterprise plan instance.
+To provide the best customer experience to manage the Tanzu component license purchasing and metering, VMware creates an [Azure Spring Apps Enterprise](https://aka.ms/ascmpoffer) offer in Azure Marketplace. This offer represents a Tanzu component license that's automatically purchased on behalf of customers during the creation of an Azure Spring Apps Enterprise plan instance.
 
 Under this implicit Azure Marketplace third-party offer purchase from VMware, your personal data and application vCPU usage data is shared with VMware. You agree to this data sharing when you agree to the marketplace terms upon creating the service instance.
 
@@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ The following table lists each supported geographic location and its [ISO 3166
 
 ## Troubleshoot errors
 
-The following list shows the errors you might encounter when you create an Azure Spring Apps Enterprise plan instance, and the actions to take to resolve errors:
+The following list shows the errors you might encounter when you create an Azure Spring Apps Enterprise plan instance, and the actions to take to resolve the errors:
 
 - `Failed to purchase on Azure Marketplace because the Microsoft.SaaS RP is not registered on the Azure subscription.`
 
@@ -161,39 +161,47 @@ The following list shows the errors you might encounter when you create an Azure
   1. Determine whether the billing address is in the scope of the [supported geographic locations](#supported-geographic-locations-of-billing-account). If it isn't, try one of the following approaches:
 
      - If possible, use another billing account with a supported billing address and then try again.
+
      - If you want to use the current subscription, raise a support ticket with us with the subject "Unsupported market in billing address when creating Azure Spring Apps enterprise".
 
 - `Failed to purchase on Azure Marketplace due to signature verification on Marketplace legal agreement.`
 
-  It is because you don't accept the marketplace legal terms and privacy statements while provisioning the tier, you can use the following commands to do so in advance. `az term accept --publisher vmware-inc --product azure-spring-cloud-vmware-tanzu-2 --plan asa-ent-hr-mtr`
+  You haven't accepted the marketplace legal terms and privacy statements while provisioning the tier. Use the following command to accept the terms:
+
+  ```azurecli
+  az term accept \
+      --publisher vmware-inc \
+      --product azure-spring-cloud-vmware-tanzu-2 \
+      --plan asa-ent-hr-mtr
+  ```
 
 - `Purchase has failed because we couldn't find a valid credit card nor a payment method associated with your Azure subscription.`
 
-  It is because your Azure subscription does not have an associated payment method. Azure credits or free MSDN subscriptions aren't supported. For more information, see the [Purchasing requirements](/marketplace/azure-marketplace-overview#purchasing-requirements) section of [What is Azure Marketplace?](/marketplace/azure-marketplace-overview)
+  Your Azure subscription doesn't have an associated payment method. Azure credits or free MSDN subscriptions aren't supported. For more information, see the [Purchasing requirements](/marketplace/azure-marketplace-overview#purchasing-requirements) section of [What is Azure Marketplace?](/marketplace/azure-marketplace-overview)
 
 - `Plan can not be purchased on a free subscription.`
 
-  It is because your Azure subscription does not have an associated payment method. Azure credits or free MSDN subscriptions aren't supported. For more information, see the [Purchasing requirements](/marketplace/azure-marketplace-overview#purchasing-requirements) section of [What is Azure Marketplace?](/marketplace/azure-marketplace-overview)
+  Your Azure subscription doesn't have an associated payment method. Azure credits or free MSDN subscriptions aren't supported. For more information, see the [Purchasing requirements](/marketplace/azure-marketplace-overview#purchasing-requirements) section of [What is Azure Marketplace?](/marketplace/azure-marketplace-overview)
 
 - `Your Azure subscription which is associated with a deleted organization. The billing account is not valid to purchase the SaaS.`
 
-  It is because your Azure subscription does not have an associated payment method. Azure credits or free MSDN subscriptions aren't supported. For more information, see the [Purchasing requirements](/marketplace/azure-marketplace-overview#purchasing-requirements) section of [What is Azure Marketplace?](/marketplace/azure-marketplace-overview)
+  Your Azure subscription doesn't have an associated payment method. Azure credits or free MSDN subscriptions aren't supported. For more information, see the [Purchasing requirements](/marketplace/azure-marketplace-overview#purchasing-requirements) section of [What is Azure Marketplace?](/marketplace/azure-marketplace-overview)
 
 - `Failed to check if marketplace is enabled for your Azure subscription.`
 
-  It is because your organization does not allow Azure Marketplace purchases. To allow the purchase, see the [Enabling Azure Marketplace purchases](../cost-management-billing/manage/ea-azure-marketplace.md#enabling-azure-marketplace-purchases) section of [Azure Marketplace](../cost-management-billing/manage/ea-azure-marketplace.md).
+  Your organization doesn't allow Azure Marketplace purchases. To allow the purchase, see the [Enabling Azure Marketplace purchases](../cost-management-billing/manage/ea-azure-marketplace.md#enabling-azure-marketplace-purchases) section of [Azure Marketplace](../cost-management-billing/manage/ea-azure-marketplace.md).
 
 - `Purchase for Azure product azure-spring-cloud-vmware-tanzu-2 and plan Azure Spring Apps Enterprise (Public) is not allowed.`
 
-  It is because your organization does not allow Azure Marketplace purchases. To allow the purchase, see the [Enabling Azure Marketplace purchases](../cost-management-billing/manage/ea-azure-marketplace.md#enabling-azure-marketplace-purchases) section of [Azure Marketplace](../cost-management-billing/manage/ea-azure-marketplace.md).
+  Your organization doesn't allow Azure Marketplace purchases. To allow the purchase, see the [Enabling Azure Marketplace purchases](../cost-management-billing/manage/ea-azure-marketplace.md#enabling-azure-marketplace-purchases) section of [Azure Marketplace](../cost-management-billing/manage/ea-azure-marketplace.md).
 
 - `Failed to process eligibility check with error Plan 'Azure Spring Apps Enterprise (Public)' of offer 'Azure Spring Apps Enterprise' by publisher 'VMware Inc.' is not available to you for purchase due to private marketplace settings made by your tenant's IT admin.`
 
-  It is because your organization does not allow Azure Marketplace purchases or acquisition of any Azure Marketplace software application. To allow the purchase, see the [Enabling Azure Marketplace purchases](../cost-management-billing/manage/ea-azure-marketplace.md#enabling-azure-marketplace-purchases) section of [Azure Marketplace](../cost-management-billing/manage/ea-azure-marketplace.md) and [Purchase policy management](/marketplace/azure-purchasing-invoicing#purchase-policy-management) section of [Azure Marketplace purchasing](/marketplace/azure-purchasing-invoicing).
+  Your organization doesn't allow Azure Marketplace purchases or acquisition of any Azure Marketplace software application. To allow the purchase, see the [Enabling Azure Marketplace purchases](../cost-management-billing/manage/ea-azure-marketplace.md#enabling-azure-marketplace-purchases) section of [Azure Marketplace](../cost-management-billing/manage/ea-azure-marketplace.md) and the [Purchase policy management](/marketplace/azure-purchasing-invoicing#purchase-policy-management) section of [Azure Marketplace purchasing](/marketplace/azure-purchasing-invoicing).
 
 - `This offer 'vmware-inc.azure-spring-cloud-vmware-tanzu-2' is not available for purchasing by subscriptions belonging to Microsoft Azure Cloud Solution Providers.`
 
-  Azure Cloud Solution Provider is not supported to purchase Azure Sprign Apps Enterprise yet. We are working on to enable it.
+  There's currently no support for Azure Cloud Solution Providers to purchase Azure Spring Apps Enterprise yet. We're working on enabling this support.
 
 ## Next steps