Acrolinx updates

Author: whhender

articles/synapse-analytics/troubleshoot/troubleshoot-synapse-studio-powershell.md

@@ -7,14 +7,15 @@ ms.subservice: troubleshooting
 ms.topic: conceptual
 ms.date: 10/30/2020 
 ms.author: whhender 
-ms.reviewer: sngun
+ms.reviewer: whhender
 ---
 
 # Troubleshoot Synapse Studio connectivity with PowerShell
 
-Azure Synapse Studio depends on a set of Web API endpoints to work properly. This guide will help you identify causes of connectivity issues when you're:
-- configuring your local network (such as network behind a corporate firewall) for accessing Azure Synapse Studio.
-- experiencing connectivity issues using Azure Synapse Studio.
+Azure Synapse Studio depends on a set of Web API endpoints to work properly. This guide will help you identify causes of connectivity issues when:
+
+- You're configuring your local network (such as network behind a corporate firewall) for accessing Azure Synapse Studio.
+- You're experiencing connectivity issues using Azure Synapse Studio.
 
 ## Prerequisite
 
@@ -27,7 +28,7 @@ Right-click on the following link, and select "Save target as":
 
 - [Test-AzureSynapse.ps1](https://go.microsoft.com/fwlink/?linkid=2119734)
 
-Alternatively, you may open the link directly, and save the opened script file. Don't save the address of the link above, as it may change in the future.
+Alternatively, you can open the link directly, and save the opened script file. Don't save the address of the link, as it could change in the future.
 
 In file explorer, right-click on the downloaded script file, and select "Run with PowerShell".
 
@@ -41,16 +42,16 @@ The diagnostic session will be started. Wait for it to complete.
 
 ![Wait for diagnosis to complete](media/troubleshooting-synapse-studio-powershell/wait-for-diagnosis.png)
 
-In the end, a diagnosis summary will be shown. If your PC cannot connect to one or more of the endpoints, it will show some suggestions in the "Summary" section.
+In the end, a diagnosis summary will be shown. If your PC can't connect to one or more of the endpoints, it will show some suggestions in the "Summary" section.
 
 ![Review diagnostic summary](media/troubleshooting-synapse-studio-powershell/diagnosis-summary.png)
 
-Additionally, a diagnostic log file for this session will be generated in the same folder as the troubleshooting script. Its location is shown in "General tips" section (`D:\TestAzureSynapse_2020....log`). You may send this file to technical support if necessary.
+Additionally, a diagnostic log file for this session will be generated in the same folder as the troubleshooting script. Its location is shown in "General tips" section (`D:\TestAzureSynapse_2020....log`). You can send this file to technical support if necessary.
 
-If you're a network administrator and tuning your firewall configuration for Azure Synapse Studio, the technical details shown above the "Summary" section may help.
+If you're a network administrator and tuning your firewall configuration for Azure Synapse Studio, the technical details shown above the "Summary" section might help.
 
 * All the test items (requests) marked with "Passed" mean they have passed connectivity tests, regardless of the HTTP status code.
- For the failed requests, the reason is shown in yellow, such as `NamedResolutionFailure` or `ConnectFailure`. These reasons may help you figure out whether there are misconfigurations with your network environment.
+ For the failed requests, the reason is shown in yellow, such as `NamedResolutionFailure` or `ConnectFailure`. These reasons might help you figure out whether there are misconfigurations with your network environment.
 
 
 ## Next steps