CentOS EOL updates and acrolinx

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articles/virtual-machines/hb-hc-known-issues.md

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 title: Troubleshooting known issues with HPC and GPU VMs - Azure Virtual Machines | Microsoft Docs
-description: Learn about troubleshooting known issues with HPC and GPU VM sizes in Azure.
+description: Learn about troubleshooting known issues with HPC and GPU virtual machine (VM) sizes in Azure.
 ms.service: azure-virtual-machines
 ms.subservice: hpc
 ms.custom: linux-related-content
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 # Known issues with HB-series and N-series VMs
 
-> [!CAUTION]
-> This article references CentOS, a Linux distribution that is End Of Life (EOL) status. Please consider your use and plan accordingly. For more information, see the [CentOS End Of Life guidance](~/articles/virtual-machines/workloads/centos/centos-end-of-life.md).
-
 **Applies to:** :heavy_check_mark: Linux VMs :heavy_check_mark: Windows VMs :heavy_check_mark: Flexible scale sets :heavy_check_mark: Uniform scale sets
 
 This article attempts to list recent common issues and their solutions when using the [HB-series](sizes-hpc.md) and [N-series](sizes-gpu.md) HPC and GPU VMs.
 
 ## Cache topology on Standard_HB120rs_v3
-`lstopo` displays incorrect cache topology on the Standard_HB120rs_v3 VM size. It may display that there’s only 32 MB L3 per NUMA. However in practice, there is indeed 120 MB L3 per NUMA as expected since the same 480 MB of L3 to the entire VM is available as with the other constrained-core HBv3 VM sizes. This is a cosmetic error in displaying the correct value, which should not impact workloads.
+`lstopo` displays incorrect cache topology on the Standard_HB120rs_v3 VM size. It may display that there’s only 32 MB L3 per nonuniform memory access (NUMA) node. However, in practice, there's indeed 120 MB L3 per NUMA as expected since the same 480 MB of L3 to the entire VM is available as with the other constrained-core HBv3 VM sizes. This incorrect display is a cosmetic error and shouldn't affect workloads.
 
 ## qp0 Access Restriction
-To prevent low-level hardware access that can result in security vulnerabilities, Queue Pair 0 is not accessible to guest VMs. This should only affect actions typically associated with administration of the ConnectX InfiniBand NIC, and running some InfiniBand diagnostics like ibdiagnet, but not end-user applications.
+To prevent low-level hardware access that can result in security vulnerabilities, Queue Pair 0 isn't accessible to guest VMs. This restriction should only affect actions typically associated with administration of the ConnectX InfiniBand network interface card (NIC) and running some InfiniBand diagnostics like ibdiagnet, but not end-user applications.
 
 ## MOFED installation on Ubuntu
-On Ubuntu-18.04 based marketplace VM images with kernels version `5.4.0-1039-azure #42` and newer, some older Mellanox OFED are incompatible causing an increase in VM boot time up to 30 minutes in some cases. This has been reported for both Mellanox OFED versions 5.2-1.0.4.0 and 5.2-2.2.0.0. The issue is resolved with Mellanox OFED 5.3-1.0.0.1.
-If it is necessary to use the incompatible OFED, a solution is to use the **Canonical:UbuntuServer:18_04-lts-gen2:18.04.202101290** marketplace VM image, or older and not to update the kernel.
+On Ubuntu-18.04 based marketplace VM images with kernels version `5.4.0-1039-azure #42` and newer, some older Mellanox OFED are incompatible causing an increase in VM boot time up to 30 minutes in some cases. This issue is reported in both Mellanox OFED versions 5.2-1.0.4.0 and 5.2-2.2.0.0. The issue is resolved with Mellanox OFED 5.3-1.0.0.1.
+If it's necessary to use the incompatible OFED, a solution is to use the **Canonical:UbuntuServer:18_04-lts-gen2:18.04.202101290** marketplace VM image, or older and not to update the kernel.
 
 ## Accelerated Networking on HB, HC, HBv2, HBv3, HBv4, HX, NDv2 and NDv4
 
-[Azure Accelerated Networking](https://azure.microsoft.com/blog/maximize-your-vm-s-performance-with-accelerated-networking-now-generally-available-for-both-windows-and-linux/) is now available on the RDMA and InfiniBand capable and SR-IOV enabled VM sizes [HB](hb-series.md), [HC](hc-series.md), [HBv2](hbv2-series.md), [HBv3](hbv3-series.md), [HBv4](hbv4-series.md), [HX](hx-series.md), [NDv2](ndv2-series.md) and [NDv4](nda100-v4-series.md). This capability now allows enhanced throughout (up to 30 Gbps) and latencies over the Azure Ethernet network. Though this is separate from the RDMA capabilities over the InfiniBand network, some platform changes for this capability may impact behavior of certain MPI implementations when running jobs over InfiniBand. Specifically the InfiniBand interface on some VMs may have a slightly different name (mlx5_1 as opposed to earlier mlx5_0). This may require tweaking of the MPI command lines especially when using the UCX interface (commonly with OpenMPI and HPC-X).
-
-The simplest solution currently is to use the latest HPC-X on the CentOS-HPC VM images where we rename the InfiniBand and Accelerated Networking interfaces accordingly or to run the [script](https://github.com/Azure/azhpc-images/blob/master/common/install_azure_persistent_rdma_naming.sh) to rename the InfiniBand interface.
+[Azure Accelerated Networking](https://azure.microsoft.com/blog/maximize-your-vm-s-performance-with-accelerated-networking-now-generally-available-for-both-windows-and-linux/) is now available on the RDMA and InfiniBand capable. It's also available on SR-IOV enabled VM sizes [HB](hb-series.md), [HC](hc-series.md), [HBv2](hbv2-series.md), [HBv3](hbv3-series.md), [HBv4](hbv4-series.md), [HX](hx-series.md), [NDv2](ndv2-series.md), and [NDv4](nda100-v4-series.md). This capability now allows enhanced throughout (up to 30 Gbps) and latencies over the Azure Ethernet network. Though this enhanced throughput is separate from the RDMA capabilities over the InfiniBand network, some platform changes for this capability could affect behavior of certain MPI implementations when running jobs over InfiniBand. Specifically the InfiniBand interface on some VMs may have a slightly different name (mlx5_1 as opposed to earlier mlx5_0). This issue may require tweaking of the MPI command lines, especially when using the UCX interface (commonly with OpenMPI and HPC-X).
 
-More details on this are available on this [TechCommunity article](https://techcommunity.microsoft.com/t5/azure-compute/accelerated-networking-on-hb-hc-and-hbv2/ba-p/2067965) with instructions on how to address any observed issues.
+For more information on this issue, see the [TechCommunity article with instructions on how to address any observed issues](https://techcommunity.microsoft.com/t5/azure-compute/accelerated-networking-on-hb-hc-and-hbv2/ba-p/2067965).
 
 ## InfiniBand driver installation on non-SR-IOV VMs
 
-Currently H16r, H16mr, and NC24r are not SR-IOV enabled. For more information on the InfiniBand stack bifurcation, see [Azure VM sizes - HPC](sizes-hpc.md#rdma-capable-instances).
-InfiniBand can be configured on the SR-IOV enabled VM sizes with the OFED drivers while the non-SR-IOV VM sizes require ND drivers. This IB support is available appropriately for [CentOS, RHEL, and Ubuntu](configure.md).
+Currently H16r, H16mr, and NC24r aren't SR-IOV enabled. For more information on the InfiniBand stack bifurcation, see [Azure VM sizes - HPC](sizes-hpc.md#rdma-capable-instances).
+InfiniBand can be configured on the SR-IOV enabled VM sizes with the OFED drivers while the non-SR-IOV VM sizes require ND drivers. This IB support is available appropriately for [RHEL and Ubuntu](configure.md).
 
 ## Duplicate MAC with cloud-init with Ubuntu on H-series and N-series VMs
 
-There's a known issue with cloud-init on Ubuntu VM images as it tries to bring up the IB interface. This can happen either on VM reboot or when trying to create a VM image after generalization. The VM boot logs may show an error like so:
+There's a known issue with cloud-init on Ubuntu VM images as it tries to bring up the IB interface. This issue can happen either on VM reboot or when trying to create a VM image after generalization. The VM boot logs may show an error like so:
 ```output
 “Starting Network Service...RuntimeError: duplicate mac found! both 'eth1' and 'ib0' have mac”.
 ```
 
-This 'duplicate MAC with cloud-init on Ubuntu" is a known issue. This will be resolved in newer kernels. If this issue is encountered, the workaround is:
+This 'duplicate MAC with cloud-init on Ubuntu" is a known issue. Newer kernels plan to resolve the issue. If this issue is encountered, the workaround is:
 1) Deploy the (Ubuntu 18.04) marketplace VM image
 2) Install the necessary software packages to enable IB ([instruction here](https://techcommunity.microsoft.com/t5/azure-compute/configuring-infiniband-for-ubuntu-hpc-and-gpu-vms/ba-p/1221351))
-3) Edit waagent.conf to change EnableRDMA=y
-4) Disable networking in cloud-init
+3) Edit waagent.conf and set EnableRDMA=y
+4) Disable networking in cloud-init:
     ```bash
     echo network: {config: disabled} | sudo tee /etc/cloud/cloud.cfg.d/99-disable-network-config.cfg
     ```
-5) Edit netplan's networking configuration file generated by cloud-init to remove the MAC
+5) To remove the MAC, edit netplan's networking configuration file generated by cloud-init:
     ```bash
     sudo bash -c "cat > /etc/netplan/50-cloud-init.yaml" <<'EOF'
     network:
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 ## DRAM on HB-series VMs
 
-HB-series VMs can only expose 228 GB of RAM to guest VMs at this time. Similarly, 458 GB on HBv2 and 448 GB on HBv3 VMs. This is due to a known limitation of Azure hypervisor to prevent pages from being assigned to the local DRAM of AMD CCX’s (NUMA domains) reserved for the guest VM.
+HB-series VMs can only expose 228 GB of RAM to guest VMs at this time. Similarly, 458 GB on HBv2 and 448 GB on HBv3 VMs. This limitation is due to a known limitation of Azure hypervisor to prevent pages from being assigned to the local DRAM of AMD CCXs (NUMA domains) reserved for the guest VM.
 
 ## GSS Proxy
 
-GSS Proxy has a known bug in CentOS/RHEL 7.5 that can manifest as a significant performance and responsiveness penalty when used with NFS. This can be mitigated with:
+GSS Proxy has a known bug in RHEL 7.5 that can manifest as a significant performance and responsiveness penalty when used with NFS. This bug can be mitigated with:
 
 ```bash
 sudo sed -i 's/GSS_USE_PROXY="yes"/GSS_USE_PROXY="no"/g' /etc/sysconfig/nfs
 ```
 
 ## Cache Cleaning
 
-On HPC systems, it is often useful to clean up the memory after a job has finished before the next user is assigned the same node. After running applications in Linux you may find that your available memory reduces while your buffer memory increases, despite not running any applications.
+On HPC systems, it's often useful to clean up the memory after a job finishes before the next user is assigned the same node. After running applications in Linux, you may find that your available memory reduces while your buffer memory increases, despite not running any applications.
 
 ![Screenshot of command prompt before cleaning](./media/hpc/cache-cleaning-1.png)
 
-Using `numactl -H` will show which NUMAnode(s) the memory is buffered with (possibly all). In Linux, users can clean the caches in three ways to return buffered or cached memory to ‘free’. You need to be root or have sudo permissions.
+Using `numactl -H` shows which NUMAnodes the memory is buffered with (possibly all). In Linux, users can clean the caches in three ways to return buffered or cached memory to ‘free’. You need to be root or have sudo permissions.
 
 ```bash
 sudo echo 1 > /proc/sys/vm/drop_caches [frees page-cache]