Merge pull request #273207 from kianaharris4/kianaharris-updates

updating wording + regions

Author: Stacyrch140

articles/azure-arc/edge-storage-accelerator/create-pv.md

@@ -18,7 +18,8 @@ This section describes the prerequisites for creating a persistent volume (PV).
 
 1. Create a storage account [following the instructions here](/azure/storage/common/storage-account-create?tabs=azure-portal).
 
-   When you create your storage account, create it under the same resource group and region/location as your Kubernetes cluster.
+    > [!NOTE]
+    > When you create your storage account, create it under the same resource group and region/location as your Kubernetes cluster.
 
 1. Create a container in the storage account that you created in the previous step, [following the instructions here](/azure/storage/blobs/storage-quickstart-blobs-portal#create-a-container).
 
@@ -54,7 +55,7 @@ This section describes the prerequisites for creating a persistent volume (PV).
 
 You must create a Persistent Volume (PV) for the Edge Storage Accelerator to create a local instance and bind to a remote BLOB storage account.  
 
-Note the `metadata: name:` (`esa4` in this example), as you must specify it in the `spec: volumeName` of the PVC that binds to it. Use your storage account and container that you created as part of the [prerequisites](#prerequisites).
+Note the `metadata: name:` as you must specify it in the `spec: volumeName` of the PVC that binds to it. Use your storage account and container that you created as part of the [prerequisites](#prerequisites).
 
 1. Create a file named **pv.yaml**:
 

articles/azure-arc/edge-storage-accelerator/jumpstart.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ---
 title: Azure Arc Jumpstart scenario using Edge Storage Accelerator (preview)
-description: Learn about an Azure Arc scenario that uses Edge Storage Accelerator.
+description: Learn about an Azure Arc Jumpstart scenario that uses Edge Storage Accelerator.
 author: sethmanheim
 ms.author: sethm
 ms.topic: overview
@@ -10,16 +10,17 @@ ms.date: 04/18/2024
 
 # Azure Arc Jumpstart scenario using Edge Storage Accelerator
 
-Edge Storage Accelerator (ESA) collaborated with the [Arc Jumpstart](https://azurearcjumpstart.com/) team to implement a scenario in which a computer vision AI model detects defects in bolts by analyzing video from a supply line video feed streamed over Real-Time Streaming Protocol (RTSP). The identified defects are then stored in a container within a storage account using Edge Storage Accelerator.
+Edge Storage Accelerator (ESA) collaborated with the [Azure Arc Jumpstart](https://azurearcjumpstart.com/) team to implement a scenario in which a computer vision AI model detects defects in bolts by analyzing video from a supply line video feed streamed over Real-Time Streaming Protocol (RTSP). The identified defects are then stored in a container within a storage account using Edge Storage Accelerator.
 
 ## Scenario description
 
 In this automated setup, ESA is deployed on an [AKS Edge Essentials](/azure/aks/hybrid/aks-edge-overview) single-node instance, running in an Azure virtual machine. An Azure Resource Manager template is provided to create the necessary Azure resources and configure the **LogonScript.ps1** custom script extension. This extension handles AKS Edge Essentials cluster creation, Azure Arc onboarding for the Azure VM and AKS Edge Essentials cluster, and Edge Storage Accelerator deployment. Once AKS Edge Essentials is deployed, ESA is installed as a Kubernetes service that exposes a CSI driven storage class for use by applications in the Edge Essentials Kubernetes cluster.
 
 For more information, see the following articles:
 
-- [Watch the ESA jumpstart scenario on YouTube](https://youtu.be/Qnh2UH1g6Q4)
-- [Visit the ESA jumpstart documentation](https://aka.ms/esajumpstart)
+- [Watch the ESA Jumpstart scenario on YouTube](https://youtu.be/Qnh2UH1g6Q4)
+- [Visit the ESA Jumpstart documentation](https://aka.ms/esajumpstart)
+- [Visit the ESA Jumpstart architecture diagrams](https://aka.ms/arcposters)
 
 ## Next steps
 

articles/azure-arc/edge-storage-accelerator/overview.md

@@ -40,6 +40,7 @@ Edge Storage Accelerator (ESA) serves as a native persistent storage system for
 
 Edge Storage Accelerator is only available in the following Azure regions:
 
+- East US
 - East US 2
 - West US 3
 - West Europe

articles/azure-arc/edge-storage-accelerator/prepare-linux.md

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ The article describes how to prepare Linux using AKS enabled by Azure Arc, Edge
 ## Prerequisites
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> Edge Storage Accelerator is only available in the following regions: East US 2, West US 3, West Europe.
+> Edge Storage Accelerator is only available in the following regions: East US, East US 2, West US 3, West Europe.
 
 ### Arc-connected Kubernetes cluster