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articles/spring-apps/how-to-enterprise-marketplace-offer.md

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 **This article applies to:** ❌ Basic/Standard tier ✔️ Enterprise tier
 
-The Azure Spring Apps Enterprise tier is optimized for the needs of enterprise Spring developers and provides advanced configurability, flexibility and portability. In a strong partnership with VMware, the enterprise-ready VMware Spring Runtime has 24/7 support. You can learn more about the tier's value propositions in [Azure Spring Apps Enterprise Overview](./overview.md#enterprise-tier-overview).
+The Azure Spring Apps Enterprise tier is optimized for the needs of enterprise Spring developers and provides advanced configurability, flexibility, portability, and the enterprise-ready VMware Spring Runtime with 24/7 support in a strong partnership with VMware. You can learn more about the tier's value propositions in [Azure Spring Apps Enterprise Overview](./overview.md#enterprise-tier-overview).
 
 In addition to the feature parity with the Standard tier, the Enterprise tier offers a powerful managed infrastructure with a rich set of features. These features include app lifecycle management, monitoring, and troubleshooting.
 
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 For more information about pricing, see [Azure Spring Apps pricing](https://azure.microsoft.com/pricing/details/spring-apps/).
 
-To provide the best customer experience to manage the Tanzu component license purchasing and metering, VMware creates a [Azure Marketplace Offer](https://aka.ms/ascmpoffer) that represents a Tanzu component license. This offer is automatically purchased on behalf of customers and metered against going forward.
+To provide the best customer experience to manage the Tanzu component license purchasing and metering, VMware creates a [Azure Marketplace Offer](https://aka.ms/ascmpoffer) that represents a Tanzu component license, and during the creation of an Azure Spring Apps Enterprise, this offer is automatically purchased on behalf of customers and metered against going forward.
 
-Under this implicit Azure Marketplace third party offer purchasing agreement with VMware, your personal data and application vCPU usage data is shared to VMware, according to be agreed upon marketplace terms prior to creating the service.
+Under this implicit Azure Marketplace third party offer purchasing with VMware, your personal data and application vCPU usage data is shared to VMware, according to be agreed upon marketplace terms prior to creating the service.
 
 To purchase the Tanzu component license successfully, your billing account of your subscription must be included in the [Supported geographic locations of billing account](#supported-geographic-locations-of-billing-account). Because of tax management restrictions from VMware in some countries, not all countries are supported.
 
-In comparison to Azure Spring Apps standard tier, there are no extra license fees because the managed Spring components use the OSS config server and Eureka server. No other third party license fees are required.
+In comparison to Azure Spring Apps standard tier, there are no extra license fees in that tier because the managed Spring components use the OSS config server and Eureka server. No other third party license fees are required.
 
 On the [Azure Marketplace Offer](https://aka.ms/ascmpoffer) page, you can review the Tanzu component license pricing as shown in the following image.