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Author: asudbring

articles/virtual-network/tutorial-connect-virtual-networks-cli.md

@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ az network vnet create \
 
 ## Peer virtual networks
 
-Peerings are established between virtual network IDs, so you must first get the ID of each virtual network with [az network vnet show](/cli/azure/network/vnet#az-network-vnet-show) and store the ID in a variable.
+Peerings are established between virtual network IDs. Obtain the ID of each virtual network with [az network vnet show](/cli/azure/network/vnet#az-network-vnet-show) and store the ID in a variable.
 
 ```azurecli-interactive
 # Get the id for vnet-1.
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ vNet2Id=$(az network vnet show \
   --out tsv)
 ```
 
-Create a peering from **vnet-1** to **vnet-2** with [az network vnet peering create](/cli/azure/network/vnet/peering#az-network-vnet-peering-create). If the `--allow-vnet-access` parameter is not specified, a peering is established, but no communication can flow through it.
+Create a peering from **vnet-1** to **vnet-2** with [az network vnet peering create](/cli/azure/network/vnet/peering#az-network-vnet-peering-create). If the `--allow-vnet-access` parameter isn't specified, a peering is established, but no communication can flow through it.
 
 ```azurecli-interactive
 az network vnet peering create \
@@ -114,15 +114,15 @@ az network vnet peering show \
   --query peeringState
 ```
 
-Resources in one virtual network cannot communicate with resources in the other virtual network until the **peeringState** for the peerings in both virtual networks is **Connected**. 
+Resources in one virtual network can't communicate with resources in the other virtual network until the **peeringState** for the peerings in both virtual networks is **Connected**. 
 
 ## Create virtual machines
 
 Create a VM in each virtual network so that you can communicate between them in a later step.
 
 ### Create the first VM
 
-Create a VM with [az vm create](/cli/azure/vm#az-vm-create). The following example creates a VM named **vm-1** in the **vnet-1** virtual network. If SSH keys do not already exist in a default key location, the command creates them. To use a specific set of keys, use the `--ssh-key-value` option. The `--no-wait` option creates the VM in the background, so you can continue to the next step.
+Create a VM with [az vm create](/cli/azure/vm#az-vm-create). The following example creates a VM named **vm-1** in the **vnet-1** virtual network. If SSH keys don't already exist in a default key location, the command creates them. To use a specific set of keys, use the `--ssh-key-value` option. The `--no-wait` option creates the VM in the background, so you can continue to the next step.
 
 ```azurecli-interactive
 az vm create \