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articles/energy-data-services/overview-ddms.md

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 ### Frictionless Exploration and Production(E&P)
 
-The Azure Data Manager for Energy Preview DDMS service enables energy companies to access their data in a manner that is fast, portable, testable and extendible. As a result, they'll achieve unparalleled streaming performance and use the standards and output from OSDU™. The Azure DDMS service will onboard the OSDU™ DDMS and SLB proprietary DMS. Microsoft also continues to contribute to the OSDU™ community DDMS to ensure compatibility and architectural alignment.
+The Azure Data Manager for Energy Preview DDMS service enables energy companies to access their data in a manner that is fast, portable, testable and extendible. As a result, they can achieve unparalleled streaming performance and use the standards and output from OSDU™. The Azure DDMS service includes the OSDU™ DDMS and SLB proprietary DMS. Microsoft also continues to contribute to the OSDU™ community DDMS to ensure compatibility and architectural alignment.
 
 ### Seamless connection between applications and data
 
-Customers can deploy applications on top of Azure Data Manager for Energy Preview that have been developed as per the OSDU™ standard. They're able to connect applications to Core Services and DDMS without spending extensive cycles on deployment. Customers can also easily connect DELFI to Azure Data Manager for Energy Preview, eliminating the cycles associated with Petrel deployments and connection to data management systems. By connecting applications to DDMS service, Geoscientists can execute integrated E&P workflows with unparalleled performance on Azure and use OSDU™ core services. For example, a geophysicist can pick well ties on a seismic volume in Petrel and stream data from the seismic DMS.  
+You can deploy applications on top of Azure Data Manager for Energy Preview that has been developed as per the OSDU™ standard. They're able to connect applications to Core Services and DDMS without spending extensive cycles on deployment. Customers can also easily connect DELFI to Azure Data Manager for Energy Preview, eliminating the cycles associated with Petrel deployments and connection to data management systems. By connecting applications to DDMS service, Geoscientists can execute integrated E&P workflows with unparalleled performance on Azure and use OSDU™ core services. For example, a geophysicist can pick well ties on a seismic volume in Petrel and stream data from the seismic DMS.  
 
 ## Types of DMS 
-Below are the OSDU™ DMS the service supports - 
+OSDU™ DMS supports the following services: 
 
 ### OSDU™ - Seismic DMS
 
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 ### OSDU™ - Wellbore DMS
 
-Well Logs are measurements taken while drilling, which tells energy companies information about the subsurface. Ultimately, they reveal whether hydrocarbons are present (or if the well is dry). Logs contain many attributes that inform geoscientists about the type of rock, its quality, and whether it contains oil, water, gas, or a mix. Energy companies use these attributes to determine the quality of a reservoir – how much oil or gas is present, its quality, and ultimately, economic viability. Maintaining Well Log data and ensuring easy access to historical logs is critical to energy companies. The Wellbore DMS facilitates access to this data in any OSDU™ compliant application. The Wellbore DMS was contributed by SLB to OSDU™.
+Well Logs are measurements taken while drilling, which tells energy companies information about the subsurface. Ultimately, they reveal whether hydrocarbons are present (or if the well is dry). Logs contain many attributes that inform geoscientists about the type of rock, its quality, and whether it contains oil, water, gas, or a mix. Energy companies use these attributes to determine the quality of a reservoir – how much oil or gas is present, its quality, and ultimately, economic viability. Maintaining Well Log data and ensuring easy access to historical logs is critical to energy companies. The Wellbore DMS facilitates access to this data in any OSDU™ compliant application. 
 
-Well Log data can come in different formats. It's most often indexed by depth or time and the increment of these measurements can vary. Well Logs typically contain multiple attributes for each vertical measurement. Well Logs can therefore be small or for more modern Well Logs that use high frequency data, greater than 1 Gb. Well Log data is smaller than seismic; however, users will want to look at upwards of hundreds of wells at a time. This scenario is common in mature areas that have been heavily drilled such as the Permian Basin in West Texas.
+Well Log data can come in different formats. It's indexed by depth or time and the increment of these measurements can vary. Well Logs typically contain multiple attributes for each vertical measurement. Well Logs can therefore be small or for more modern Well Logs that use high frequency data, greater than 1 Gb. Well Log data is smaller than seismic data, however, there are hundreds of wells associated with any oil exploration project. This scenario is common in mature areas that have been heavily drilled such as the Permian Basin in West Texas.
 
-Geoscientists therefore want to access numerous well logs in a single session. They often are looking at all historical drilling programs in an area. As a result, they'll look at Well Log data that was collected using a wide variety of instruments and technology. This data will vary widely in format, quality, and sampling. The Wellbore DMS resolves this data through the OSDU™ schemas to deliver the data to the consuming applications.
+As a geoscientists therefore you want to access numerous well logs in a single session. You  often look at all historical drilling programs in an area. As a result, you can look at Well Log data that was collected using a wide variety of instruments and technology. This data can vary widely in format, quality, and sampling. The Wellbore DMS resolves this data through the OSDU™ schemas to deliver the data to the consuming applications.
 
 Here are the services that the Wellbore DMS offers - 
 
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 The Well Delivery DMS stores critical drilling domain information related to the planning and execution of a well. Throughout a drilling program, engineers and domain experts need to access a wide variety of data types including activities, trajectories, risks, subsurface information, equipment used, fluid and cementing, rig utilization, and reports. Integrating this collection of data types together are the cornerstone to drilling insights. At the same time, until now, there was no industry wide standardization or enforced format. The common standards the Well Delivery DMS enables is critical to the Drilling Value Chain as it connects a diverse group of personas including operations, oil companies, service companies, logistics companies, etc.
 
 ### SLB™ - Petrel Data Services
-Geoscientists working in [Petrel](https://www.software.slb.com/products/petrel) build Petrel Projects to store, track, share, and communicate their technical work. A Petrel project stores associated data in a .PET manifest file. It also keeps track of the your windows within Petrel and setup. Petrel Data Services is an open DMS and does not require any additional licensing to get started. You can ingest Petrel projects to Petrel Data Services using open API’s. By moving to Petrel on Azure Data Manager for Energy Preview, you can leverage Petrel Data Services Project Explorer UI to discover all the Petrel projects across your organization. You can create and save projects as well as track version history and experience unparalleled performance. This enables you to collaborate in real time with data permanently stored in Azure Data Manager for Energy.
+Geoscientists working in [Petrel](https://www.software.slb.com/products/petrel) build Petrel Projects to store, track, share, and communicate their technical work. A Petrel project stores associated data in a ```.PET``` manifest file. It also keeps track of your windows within Petrel and setup. Petrel Data Services is an open DMS and doesn't require any additional licensing to get started. You can ingest Petrel projects to Petrel Data Services using OpenAPI’s. By moving to Petrel on Azure Data Manager for Energy Preview, you can use Petrel Data Services Project Explorer UI to discover all the Petrel projects across your organization. You can create and save projects as well as track version history and experience unparalleled performance. This enables you to collaborate in real time with data permanently stored in Azure Data Manager for Energy.
 
-Additionally, Petrel Data Services serves to liberate data stored in Petrel .PET files to their respective DDMS for search and utilization in external applications. For example, you can upload a Petrel project containing many well logs to Azure Data Manager for Energy Preview. With data liberation, once the project is saved, the Wellbore data liberation service is triggered and that well log is extracted to the wellbore DMS. The association with the .PET Petrel project is tracked through lineage and the you can use that well log in the full any ISV open app ecosystem. Petrel Data Services offers round trip data liberation and consumption for seismic, wellbore, and Petrel Project data.
+Additionally, Petrel Data Services serves to liberate data stored in Petrel ```.PET``` files to their respective DDMS for search and utilization in external applications. For example, you can upload a Petrel project containing many well logs to Azure Data Manager for Energy Preview. With data liberation, once the project is saved, the Wellbore data liberation service is triggered and that well log is extracted to the wellbore DMS. The association with the ```.PET``` Petrel project is tracked through lineage and you can use that well log in  any ISV open app ecosystem. Petrel Data Services offers round trip data liberation and consumption for seismic, wellbore, and Petrel Project data.
 
 ## Next steps
-Learn more about DDMS concepts below.
+Learn more about DDMS concepts.
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 > [DDMS Concepts](concepts-ddms.md)