Rewrite to be more active voice. Remove Preview.

Author: nathaniel-msft

articles/aks/limit-egress-traffic.md

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 # Limit Network Traffic with Azure Firewall in Azure Kubernetes Service (AKS) 
 
-This article provides a walkthrough of how to use the [Outbound network and FQDN rules for AKS clusters][outbound-fqdn-rules] to control egress traffic using Azure Firewall in AKS. To simplify this configuration, Azure Firewall provides an Azure Kubernetes Service (`AzureKubernetesService`) FQDN that restricts outbound traffic from the AKS cluster. This article also provides an example of how to configure public inbound traffic via the firewall.
+Learn how to use the [Outbound network and FQDN rules for AKS clusters][outbound-fqdn-rules] to control egress traffic using the Azure Firewall in AKS. To simplify this configuration, Azure Firewall provides an Azure Kubernetes Service (`AzureKubernetesService`) Fully Qualified Domain Name (FQDN) tag that restricts outbound traffic from the AKS cluster. This article shows how you can configure your AKS Cluster traffic rules through Azure firewall.
 
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     az network public-ip create -g $RG -n $FWPUBLICIP_NAME -l $LOC --sku "Standard"
     ```
 
-2. Register the [Azure Firewall preview CLI extension](https://github.com/Azure/azure-cli-extensions/tree/main/src/azure-firewall) to create an Azure Firewall using the [`az extension add`][az-extension-add] command.
+2. Register the [Azure Firewall CLI extension](https://github.com/Azure/azure-cli-extensions/tree/main/src/azure-firewall) to create an Azure Firewall using the [`az extension add`][az-extension-add] command.
 
     ```azurecli-interactive
     az extension add --name azure-firewall