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articles/active-directory/privileged-identity-management/groups-features.md

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 In Privileged Identity Management (PIM), you can now assign eligibility for membership or ownership of privileged access groups. Starting with this preview, you can assign Azure Active Directory (Azure AD) built-in roles to cloud groups and use PIM to manage group member and owner eligibility and activation. For more information about role-assignable groups in Azure AD, see [Use Azure AD groups to manage role assignments](../roles/groups-concept.md).
 
 > [!Important]
-> To provide a group of users with just-in-time (eligible) access to role with permissions in SharePoint, Exchange, or Security & Compliance Center, make permanent assignments of users to the group, and then assign the group to a role as eligible for activation. If instead you  assign a role permanently to a group and and assign users to be eligible to group membership, it might take significant time to have all permissions of the role activated and ready to use.
+> To provide a group of users with just-in-time access to roles with permissions in SharePoint, Exchange, or Security & Compliance Center, be sure to make permanent assignments of users to the group, and then assign the group to a role as eligible for activation. If instead you  assign a role permanently to a group and and assign users to be eligible to group membership, it might take significant time to have all permissions of the role activated and ready to use.
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > For privileged access groups that are used to elevate into Azure AD roles, we recommend that you require an approval process for eligible member assignments. Assignments that can be activated without approval might create a security risk from administrators who have a lower level of permissions. For example, the Helpdesk Administrator has permissions to reset an eligible user's password.

articles/active-directory/privileged-identity-management/pim-apis.md

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 # Understand the Privileged Identity Management APIs
 
-You can perform Privileged Identity Management (PIM) tasks using the Microsoft Graph APIs for Azure Active Directory (Azure AD) roles and the Azure Resource Manager API for Azure resource roles (sometimes called Azure RBAC roles). This article describes important concepts for using the APIs for Privileged Identity Management.
+You can perform Privileged Identity Management (PIM) tasks using the Microsoft Graph APIs for Azure Active Directory (Azure AD) roles and the Azure Resource Manager API for Azure roles. This article describes important concepts for using the APIs for Privileged Identity Management.
 
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