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articles/sentinel/microsoft-365-defender-sentinel-integration.md

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 This article describes how Microsoft Defender XDR services integrate with Microsoft Sentinel, whether in the Microsoft Defender portal or in the Azure portal.
 
-- If you onboarded to Microsoft Sentinel after July 1, 2025 with permissions of a subscription [Owner](/azure/role-based-access-control/built-in-roles#owner) or a [User access administrator](/azure/role-based-access-control/built-in-roles#user-access-administrator), your workspace is [automatically onboarded to the Defender portal](quickstart-onboard.md). In such cases, you [use Microsoft Sentinel in the Defender portal only](microsoft-sentinel-defender-portal.md), where your data can integrate directly with Defender XDR service data for [unified security operations](/unified-secops-platform/overview-unified-security).
+- If you first onboarded to Microsoft Sentinel after July 1, 2025 with permissions of a subscription [Owner](/azure/role-based-access-control/built-in-roles#owner) or a [User access administrator](/azure/role-based-access-control/built-in-roles#user-access-administrator), your workspace is [automatically onboarded to the Defender portal](quickstart-onboard.md). In such cases, you [use Microsoft Sentinel in the Defender portal only](microsoft-sentinel-defender-portal.md), where your data can integrate directly with Defender XDR service data for [unified security operations](/unified-secops-platform/overview-unified-security).
 
 - If you're otherwise using the Azure portal in addition to or instead of the Defender portal, integrate Microsoft Defender XDR with Microsoft Sentinel. Integrating the services streams all Defender XDR incidents and advanced hunting events into Microsoft Sentinel, and keeps the incidents and events synchronized between the Azure and Microsoft Defender portals.
 

articles/sentinel/quickstart-onboard.md

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     - To install or manage solutions in the content hub, you need the **Microsoft Sentinel Contributor** role on the resource group that the workspace belongs to.
 
-    - If you have permissions of a subscription [Owner](/azure/role-based-access-control/built-in-roles#owner) or a [User access administrator](/azure/role-based-access-control/built-in-roles#user-access-administrator), your workspace is automatically onboarded to the Defender portal. Users of such workspaces use [Microsoft Sentinel in the Defender portal](microsoft-sentinel-defender-portal.md) only.
+    - If you are a new Microsoft Sentinel customer and have permissions of a subscription [Owner](/azure/role-based-access-control/built-in-roles#owner) or a [User access administrator](/azure/role-based-access-control/built-in-roles#user-access-administrator), your workspace is automatically onboarded to the Defender portal. Users of such workspaces use [Microsoft Sentinel in the Defender portal](microsoft-sentinel-defender-portal.md) only.
 
 - **Microsoft Sentinel is a paid service**. Review the [pricing options](https://go.microsoft.com/fwlink/?linkid=2104058) and the [Microsoft Sentinel pricing page](https://azure.microsoft.com/pricing/details/azure-sentinel/).
 
@@ -68,9 +68,9 @@ To get started, add Microsoft Sentinel to an existing workspace or create a new
 1. Select **Add**.
 
 > [!TIP]
-> If your workspace isn't automatically onboarded to the Defender portal, we recommend onboarding for a unified experience in managing security operations (SecOps) across both Microsoft Sentinel and other Microsoft security services.
+> If your workspace isn't automatically onboarded to the Defender portal, we recommend onboarding for a unified experience in managing security operations (SecOps) across both Microsoft Sentinel and other Microsoft security services. For more information, see [Onboard Microsoft Sentinel to the Defender portal](/unified-secops-platform/microsoft-sentinel-onboard).
 >
-> If your workspace is automatically onboarded, or if you decide to onboard your workspace now, you can continue the procedures in this article from the Defender portal. For more information, see [Onboard Microsoft Sentinel to the Defender portal](/unified-secops-platform/microsoft-sentinel-onboard).
+> If your workspace is automatically onboarded, or if you decide to onboard your workspace now, you can continue the procedures in this article from the Defender portal. If this is your first time using the Defender portal, there will be a delay of a few minutes while the process completes.
 
 ## Access Microsoft Sentinel in the Defender portal