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articles/storage/blobs/blob-v2-samples-python.md

@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ setx accountkey "<youraccountkey>"
 
 To run the application on a terminal or command prompt, go to the **circuitbreaker.py** directory, then enter `python circuitbreaker.py`. The application uploads the **HelloWorld.png** image from the solution to the storage account. The application checks to ensure the image has replicated to the secondary RA-GZRS endpoint. It then begins downloading the image up to 999 times. Each read is represented by a **P** or an **S**. Where **P** represents the primary endpoint and **S** represents the secondary endpoint.
 
-![Console app running](media/storage-create-geo-redundant-storage/figure3.png)
+![Screnshot of console app running.](media/storage-create-geo-redundant-storage/figure3.png)
 
 In the sample code, the `run_circuit_breaker` method in the `circuitbreaker.py` file is used to download an image from the storage account using the [get_blob_to_path](/python/api/azure-storage-blob/azure.storage.blob.baseblobservice.baseblobservice#get-blob-to-path-container-name--blob-name--file-path--open-mode--wb---snapshot-none--start-range-none--end-range-none--validate-content-false--progress-callback-none--max-connections-2--lease-id-none--if-modified-since-none--if-unmodified-since-none--if-match-none--if-none-match-none--timeout-none-) method.
 

includes/storage-v11-sdk-support-retirement.md

@@ -10,6 +10,6 @@ ms.author: pauljewell
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-On 31 March 2023, we retired support for Azure SDK libraries which do not conform to the [current Azure SDK guidelines](https://azure.github.io/azure-sdk/general_introduction.html). The new Azure SDK libraries are updated regularly to drive consistent experiences and strengthen your security posture. It's recommended that you transition to the new Azure SDK libraries to take advantage of the new capabilities and critical security updates.  
+On March 31, 2023, we retired support for Azure SDK libraries which do not conform to the [current Azure SDK guidelines](https://azure.github.io/azure-sdk/general_introduction.html). The new Azure SDK libraries are updated regularly to drive consistent experiences and strengthen your security posture. It's recommended that you transition to the new Azure SDK libraries to take advantage of the new capabilities and critical security updates.  
 
-Although the older libraries can still be used beyond 31 March 2023, they'll no longer receive official support and updates from Microsoft. For more information, see the [support retirement announcement](https://azure.microsoft.com/updates/support-for-azure-sdk-libraries-that-do-not-conform-to-our-current-azure-sdk-guidelines-will-be-retired-as-of-31-march-2023/).
+Although the older libraries can still be used beyond March 31, 2023, they'll no longer receive official support and updates from Microsoft. For more information, see the [support retirement announcement](https://azure.microsoft.com/updates/support-for-azure-sdk-libraries-that-do-not-conform-to-our-current-azure-sdk-guidelines-will-be-retired-as-of-31-march-2023/).