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Author: AbbyMSFT

articles/azure-monitor/overview.md

@@ -47,10 +47,11 @@ The following diagram gives a high-level view of Azure Monitor.
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/overview/overview-02-2023.png" alt-text="Diagram that shows an overview of Azure Monitor." border="false" lightbox="media/overview/overview-02-2023.png":::
 
+The diagram depicts the Azure Monitor system components:
 - The **[data sources](data-sources.md)** are the types of data collected from each monitored resource. The data is collected and routed to the **data platform**.
-- The **[data platform](data-platform.md)** are the data stores for collected data. Azure Monitor's data platform has stores for metrics, logs, traces, and changes.
+- The **[data platform](data-platform.md)** is made up of the data stores for collected data. Azure Monitor's data platform has stores for metrics, logs, traces, and changes.
 - The functions and components that consume data include analysis, visualizations, insights, and responses.
-- Services that integrate with Azure Monitor to provide additional functionality are integrated throughout the system.
+- Services that integrate with Azure Monitor to provide additional functionality  and are integrated throughout the system.
 
 ## Data sources
 Azure Monitor can collect data from multiple sources, including from your application, operating systems, the services they rely on, and from the platform itself.