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Author: b-ahibbard

articles/azure-netapp-files/azure-netapp-files-create-volumes-smb.md

@@ -107,11 +107,11 @@ Before creating an SMB volume, you need to create an Active Directory connection
 
     * <a name="access-based-enumeration"></a> If you want to enable access-based enumeration, select **Enable Access Based Enumeration**.
 
-        This feature hides directories and files created under a share from users who do not have access permissions to the files or folders under the share. Users are still able to view the share.
+        Hide directories and files created under a share from users who don't have access permissions to the files or folders under the share. Users are still able to view the share.
 
     * <a name="non-browsable-share"></a> You can enable the **non-browsable-share feature.**
 
-        This feature prevents the Windows client from browsing the share. The share does not show up in the Windows File Browser or in the list of shares when you run the `net view \\server /all` command.
+        Prevent the Windows client from browsing the share. The share doesn't show up in the Windows File Browser or in the list of shares when you run the `net view \\server /all` command.
 
     * <a name="continuous-availability"></a>If you want to enable Continuous Availability for the SMB volume, select **Enable Continuous Availability**.    
 

articles/azure-netapp-files/whats-new.md

@@ -18,11 +18,11 @@ Azure NetApp Files is updated regularly. This article provides a summary about t
 
 * [Access-based enumeration](azure-netapp-files-create-volumes-smb.md#access-based-enumeration) is now generally available (GA)
 
-    In environments with Azure NetApp Files volumes shared among multiple departments, projects and users, users can see the existence of other files and folders in directory listings even if they do not have permissions to access those items. Enabling Access-based enumeration (ABE) on Azure NetApp Files volumes ensures users only see those files and folders in directory listings that they have permission to access. If a user doesn't have read (or equivalent) permissions for a folder, the Windows client hides the folder from the user’s view. This new capability provides an additional layer of security by only displaying files and folders a user has access to, and conversely hiding file and folder information a user has no access to. You can enable ABE on Azure NetApp Files SMB and dual-protocol (with NTFS security style) volumes.
+    In environments with Azure NetApp Files volumes shared among multiple departments, projects, and users, many users can see the existence of other files and folders in directory listings even if they don't have permissions to access those items. Enabling Access-based enumeration (ABE) on Azure NetApp Files volumes ensures users only see those files and folders in directory listings that they have permission to access. If a user doesn't have read or equivalent permissions for a folder, the Windows client hides the folder from the user’s view. This capability provides an additional layer of security by only displaying files and folders a user has access to, and conversely hiding file and folder information a user has no access. You can enable ABE on Azure NetApp Files SMB volume and dual-protocol volume with NTFS security style.
 
 * [Non-browsable shares](azure-netapp-files-create-volumes-smb.md#non-browsable-share) are now generally available (GA)
 
-    By default, Azure NetApp Files SMB and dual-protocol volumes show up in the list of shares in Windows Files Explorer. In certain scenarios, you might want to exclude specific Azure NetApp Files volumes from being listed for reasons such as sensitive content. You can configure these volumes as non-browsable in Azure NetApp Files. This feature prevents the Windows client from browsing the share, and the share doesn't show up in the Windows File Explorer. This capability provides an additional layer of security by not displaying these shares. This setting doesn't impact permissions. Users who have access to the share maintain their existing access.
+    By default, Azure NetApp Files SMB and dual-protocol volumes show up in the list of shares in Windows Files Explorer. You might want to exclude specific Azure NetApp Files volumes from being listed. You can configure these volumes as non-browsable in Azure NetApp Files. This feature prevents the Windows client from browsing the share so the share doesn't show up in the Windows File Explorer. This capability provides an additional layer of security by not displaying these shares. This setting doesn't impact permissions. Users who have access to the share maintain their existing access.
 
 ## August 2024