Update articles/machine-learning/v1/concept-model-management-and-deployment.md

Co-authored-by: Mope Akande <[email protected]>

Author: dem108

articles/machine-learning/v1/concept-model-management-and-deployment.md

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 > * [v1](concept-model-management-and-deployment.md)
 > * [v2 (current version)](../concept-model-management-and-deployment.md)
 
-In this article, learn about how to apply Machine Learning Operations (MLOps) practices in Azure Machine Learning to manage the lifecycle of your models. MLOps improves the quality and consistency of your machine learning solutions. 
+In this article, learn how to apply Machine Learning Operations (MLOps) practices in Azure Machine Learning for the purpose of managing the lifecycle of your models. Applying MLOps practices can improve the quality and consistency of your machine learning solutions. 
 
 ## What is MLOps?