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articles/iot-edge/how-to-update-iot-edge.md

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-title: Update IoT Edge version on devices - Azure IoT Edge | Microsoft Docs 
+title: Update IoT Edge version on devices
 description: How to update IoT Edge devices to run the latest versions of the security subsystem and the IoT Edge runtime
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 ### Patch releases
 
-When upgrading between *patch* releases, for example 1.4.1 to 1.4.2, the update order isn't important. You can upgrade security subsystem or runtime containers before or after the other. To update between patch releases:
+When you upgrade between *patch* releases, for example 1.4.1 to 1.4.2, the update order isn't important. You can upgrade the security subsystem or the runtime containers before or after the other. To update between patch releases:
 
 1. [Update the security subsystem](#update-the-security-subsystem)
 1. [Update the runtime containers](#update-the-runtime-containers)
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 ### Major or minor releases
 
-When upgrading between major or minor product releases, for example from 1.1 to 1.4, we recommend updating both the security subsystem and the runtime containers. Before a release, we test the security subsystem and the runtime container version combination. To update between major or minor product releases:
+When you upgrade between major or minor releases, for example from 1.1 to 1.4, update both the security subsystem and the runtime containers. Before a release, we test the security subsystem and the runtime container version combination. To update between major or minor product releases:
 
 1. On the device, stop IoT Edge using the command `sudo systemctl stop iotedge` and [uninstall](how-to-provision-single-device-windows-symmetric.md#uninstall-iot-edge).