Acrolinx fixes

Author: v-ksreedevan

articles/migrate/concepts-migration-planning.md

@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ Start by identifying your on-premises infrastructure, applications, and dependen
 
 ### Workloads in use
 
-Azure Migrate uses a lightweight Azure Migrate appliance to perform agentless discovery of on-premises VMware VMs, Hyper-V VMs, other virtualized servers, and physical servers. Continuous discovery collects server configuration information, and performance metadata, as well as application data. Here's what the appliance collects from on-premises servers:
+Azure Migrate uses a lightweight Azure Migrate appliance to perform agentless discovery of on-premises VMware VMs, Hyper-V VMs, other virtualized servers, and physical servers. Continuous discovery collects server configuration information, and performance metadata, and application data. Here's what the appliance collects from on-premises servers:
 
 - Server, disk, and NIC metadata.
 
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ You can view Discovery and assessment reports (with Azure readiness information,
 
 ### Evaluate gaps/blockers
 
-As you figure out the apps and workloads you want to migrate, identify downtime constraints for them, and look for any operational dependencies between your apps and the underlying infrastructure. This analysis helps you to plan migrations that meet your recovery time objective (RTO), and ensure minimal to zero data loss. Before you migrate, we recommend that you review and mitigate any compatibility issues, or unsupported features, that may block server/SQL database migration. The Azure Migrate Discovery and assessment report, and Azure Migrate Database Assessment, can help with this.
+As you figure out the apps and workloads you want to migrate, identify downtime constraints for them, and look for any operational dependencies between your apps and the underlying infrastructure. This analysis helps you to plan migrations that meet your recovery time objective (RTO), and ensure minimal to zero data loss. Before you migrate, we recommend that you review and mitigate any compatibility issues, or unsupported features that may block server/SQL database migration. The Azure Migrate Discovery and assessment report, and Azure Migrate Database Assessment, can help with this.
 
 ### Prioritize workloads
 
@@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ A few recommendations:
     **State** | **Action**
     --- | ---
     **Azure ready VMs** | Export the assessment report, and filter all servers with state *Ready for Azure*. This might be the first group of servers that you lift and shift to Azure, using the [Migration and modernization](migrate-services-overview.md#migration-and-modernization-tool) tool.
-    **End-of-support operating systems** | Export the assessment report, and filter all servers running Windows Server 2008 R2/Windows Server 2008. These operating systems are at the end of support, and only Azure provides a free three years of security updates when you migrate them to Azure. If you combine Azure Hybrid Benefit, and use RIs, the savings could be much higher.
+    **End-of-support operating systems** | Export the assessment report, and filter all servers running Windows Server 2008 R2/Windows Server 2008. These operating systems are at the end of support, and only Azure provides a free three years of security updates when you migrate them to Azure. If you combine Azure Hybrid Benefit, and use RIs, the savings could be higher.
     **SQL Server migration** | Use the database assessment recommendations to migrate databases that are ready for Azure SQL Database, using the Azure Migrate: Database Migration tool. Migrate the databases ready for Azure SQL VM using the Migration and modernization tool.
     **End-of-support software** | Export your application inventory, and filter for any software/extensions that might be reaching end-of-support. Prioritize these applications for migration.
     **Under-provisioned servers** | Export the assessment report, and filter for servers with low CPU utilization (%) and memory utilization (%).  Migrate to a right-sized Azure VM, and save on costs for underutilized resources.
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@ Before finalizing your migration plan, make sure you consider and mitigate other
 - **Implementation support**: Get support for your implementation if you need it. Many organizations opt for outside help to support their cloud migration. To move to Azure quickly and confidently with personalized assistance, consider an [Azure Expert Managed Service Provider](https://www.microsoft.com/solution-providers/search?cacheId=9c2fed4f-f9e2-42fb-8966-4c565f08f11e&ocid=CM_Discovery_Checklist_PDF), or [FastTrack for Azure](https://azure.microsoft.com/programs/azure-fasttrack/?ocid=CM_Discovery_Checklist_PDF). 
 
 
-Create an effective cloud migration plan that includes detailed information about the apps you want to migrate, app/database availability, downtime constraints, and migration milestones. The plan considers how long the data copy will take, and include a realistic buffer for post-migration testing, and cut-over activities.
+Create an effective cloud migration plan that includes detailed information about the apps you want to migrate, app/database availability, downtime constraints, and migration milestones. The plan considers how long the data copy takes, and include a realistic buffer for post-migration testing, and cut-over activities.
 
 A post-migration testing plan should include functional, integration, security, and performance testing and use cases, to ensure that migrated apps work as expected, and that all database objects, and data relationships, are transferred successfully to the cloud.