edit pass: neon-serverless-postgres-ga

Author: ShawnJackson

articles/partner-solutions/includes/sso.md

@@ -5,9 +5,7 @@ ms.date: 02/18/2025
 ms.author: kkendrick
 ---
 
-If your organization uses Microsoft Entra ID as its identity provider, you can establish single sign-on from the Azure portal. 
-
-To establish single sign-on through Microsoft Entra ID:
+If your organization uses Microsoft Entra ID as its identity provider, you can establish single sign-on from the Azure portal:
 
 1. Select the checkbox.
 

articles/partner-solutions/neon/create.md

@@ -13,6 +13,7 @@ This quickstart shows you how to create a Neon Serverless Postgres resource by u
 ## Prerequisites
 
 [!INCLUDE [create-prerequisites](../includes/create-prerequisites.md)]
+
 - You must [subscribe to Neon](overview.md#subscribe-to-neon).
 
 ## Create a resource

articles/partner-solutions/neon/manage.md

@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ The details under **Essentials** include:
 - Subscription ID
 - Tags
 
-To manage your resource, select the links next to corresponding details.
+To manage your resource, select the links next to the corresponding details.
 
 Below the essentials, you can go to other details about your resource by selecting the links.
 

articles/partner-solutions/neon/overview.md

@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ Neon is a cloud-native Postgres solution designed for modern applications. It of
 
 Neon manages the Postgres infrastructure so that you can focus on building and optimizing your applications. For example, Neon manages database configuration, maintenance, and scaling operations.
 
-With its intuitive onboarding process, you can quickly start using Neon's capabilities for your Azure workloads to help ensure that your databases are always optimized for performance and reliability.  
+With the service's intuitive onboarding process, you can quickly start using Neon's capabilities for your Azure workloads to keep your databases optimized for performance and reliability.
 
 Neon Serverless Postgres provides these key capabilities:
 

articles/partner-solutions/neon/troubleshoot.md

@@ -8,11 +8,11 @@ ms.date: 04/23/2025
 
 # Troubleshoot Neon Serverless Postgres
 
-You can get support for your Neon Serverless Postgres deployment through a support request. For further assistance, visit the [Neon Support](https://neon.tech/docs/introduction/support) page. This article also includes troubleshooting for problems that you might experience in creating and using a Neon resource.
+You can get support for your Neon Serverless Postgres deployment by creating a support request. For more assistance, visit the [Neon Support](https://neon.tech/docs/introduction/support) page. This article also includes troubleshooting for problems that you might experience when you're creating and using a Neon resource.
 
 ## Get support
 
-To contact support about a Neon resource:
+Begin by signing in to the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com/).
 
 1. In the Azure portal, go to the resource. Then select **Support + troubleshooting** > **New Support Request**.