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Author: msmbaldwin

articles/virtual-machines/linux/disk-encryption-cli-quickstart.md

@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ It takes a few minutes to create the VM and supporting resources. The following
 Azure disk encryption stores its encryption key in an Azure Key Vault. Create a Key Vault with [az keyvault create](/cli/azure/keyvault#az-keyvault-create). To enable the Key Vault to store encryption keys, use the --enabled-for-disk-encryption parameter.
 
 > [!Important]
-> Every key vault must have a name that is unique across Azure. In the examples below, replace \<your-unique-keyvault-name\> with the  name you choose.
+> Every key vault must have a name that is unique across Azure. Replace \<your-unique-keyvault-name\> with the name you choose.
 
 ```azurecli-interactive
 az keyvault create --name "<your-unique-keyvault-name>" --resource-group "myResourceGroup" --location "eastus" --enabled-for-disk-encryption
@@ -76,13 +76,13 @@ Encrypt your VM with [az vm encryption](/cli/azure/vm/encryption), providing you
 az vm encryption enable -g "MyResourceGroup" --name "myVM" --disk-encryption-keyvault "<your-unique-keyvault-name>"
 ```
 
-After a moment the process will return, "The encryption request was accepted. Please use 'show' command to monitor the progress.". The "show" command is [az vm show](/cli/azure/vm/encryption#az-vm-encryption-show).
+After a moment the process will return, "The encryption request was accepted. Use 'show' command to monitor the progress.". The "show" command is [az vm show](/cli/azure/vm/encryption#az-vm-encryption-show).
 
 ```azurecli-interactive
 az vm encryption show --name "myVM" -g "MyResourceGroup"
 ```
 
-When encryption is enabled, you will see the following in the returned output:
+When encryption is enabled, you will see "EnableEncryption" in the returned output:
 
 ```
 "EncryptionOperation": "EnableEncryption"
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@ az group delete --name "myResourceGroup"
 
 ## Next steps
 
-In this quickstart, you created a virtual machine, created a Key Vault that was enable for encryption keys, and encrypted the VM.  Advance to the next article to learn more about more Azure Disk Encryption for Linux VMs.
+In this quickstart, you created a virtual machine, created a Key Vault that was enabled for encryption keys, and encrypted the VM.  Advance to the next article to learn more about more Azure Disk Encryption for Linux VMs.
 
 > [!div class="nextstepaction"]
 > [Azure Disk Encryption overview](disk-encryption-overview.md)

articles/virtual-machines/linux/disk-encryption-faq.yml

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ metadata:
   ms.subservice: disks
   ms.topic: faq
   ms.author: mbaldwin
-  ms.date: 06/05/2019
+  ms.date: 01/04/2023
   ms.custom: seodec18
 title: Azure Disk Encryption for Linux virtual machines FAQ
 summary: |

articles/virtual-machines/linux/disk-encryption-isolated-network.md

@@ -20,13 +20,13 @@ When connectivity is restricted by a firewall, proxy requirement, or network sec
 
 ## Package management
 
-Azure Disk Encryption depends on a number of components, which are typically installed as part of ADE enablement if not already present. When behind a firewall or otherwise isolated from the Internet, these packages must be pre-installed or available locally.
+Azure Disk Encryption depends on many components, which are typically installed as part of ADE enablement if not already present. When behind a firewall or otherwise isolated from the Internet, these packages must be pre-installed or available locally.
 
 Here are the packages necessary for each distribution. For a full list of supported distros and volume types, see [supported VMs and operating systems](disk-encryption-overview.md#supported-vms-and-operating-systems).
 
 - **Ubuntu 14.04, 16.04, 18.04**: lsscsi, psmisc, at, cryptsetup-bin, python-parted, python-six, procps, grub-pc-bin
 - **CentOS 7.2 - 7.9, 8.1, 8.2**: lsscsi, psmisc, lvm2, uuid, at, patch, cryptsetup, cryptsetup-reencrypt, pyparted, procps-ng, util-linux
-- **CentOS 6.8**: lsscsi, psmisc, lvm2, uuid, at, cryptsetup-reencrypt, pyparted, python-six
+- **CentOS 6.8**: lsscsi, psmisc, lvm2, uuid, at, cryptsetup-reencrypt, parted, python-six
 - **RedHat 7.2 - 7.9, 8.1, 8.2**: lsscsi, psmisc, lvm2, uuid, at, patch, cryptsetup, cryptsetup-reencrypt, procps-ng, util-linux
 - **RedHat 6.8**: lsscsi, psmisc, lvm2, uuid, at, patch, cryptsetup-reencrypt
 - **openSUSE 42.3, SLES 12-SP4, 12-SP3**: lsscsi, cryptsetup
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ When encryption is being enabled with [Azure AD credentials](disk-encryption-lin
 
 ### Azure Instance Metadata Service 
 
-The virtual machine must be able to access the [Azure Instance Metadata service](instance-metadata-service.md) endpoint, which uses a well-known non-routable IP address (`169.254.169.254`) that can be accessed only from within the VM.  Proxy configurations that alter local HTTP traffic to this address (for example, adding an X-Forwarded-For header) are not supported.
+The virtual machine must be able to access the [Azure Instance Metadata service](instance-metadata-service.md) endpoint, which uses a well-known non-routable IP address (`169.254.169.254`) that can be accessed only from within the VM.  Proxy configurations that alter local HTTP traffic to this address (for example, adding an X-Forwarded-For header) aren't supported.
 
 ## Next steps
 

articles/virtual-machines/linux/disk-encryption-key-vault.md

@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ You may also, if you wish, generate or import a key encryption key (KEK).
 
 ## Install tools and connect to Azure
 
-The steps in this article can be completed with the [Azure CLI](/cli/azure/), the [Azure PowerShell Az module](/powershell/azure/), or the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com). 
+The steps in this article can be completed with the [Azure CLI](/cli/azure/), the [Azure PowerShell Az PowerShell module module](/powershell/azure/), or the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com). 
 
 While the portal is accessible through your browser, Azure CLI and Azure PowerShell require local installation; see [Azure Disk Encryption for Linux: Install tools](disk-encryption-linux.md#install-tools-and-connect-to-azure) for details.