updating per review feedback

Author: KendalBond007

articles/healthcare-apis/deidentification/manage-access-rbac.md

@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ To assign an Azure role to a security principal with PowerShell, call the [New-A
 
 The format of the command can differ based on the scope of the assignment, but `ObjectId` and `RoleDefinitionName` are required parameters. While the `Scope` parameter is optional, you should set it to retain the principle of least privilege. By limiting roles and scopes, you limit the resources that are at risk if the security principal is ever compromised.
 
-The scope for a de-identification service (preview) is in the form `/subscriptions/<Subscription ID>/resourceGroups/<Resource Group Name>/providers/Microsoft.HealthDataAIServices/deidServices/<Deidentification Service Name>`
+The scope for a de-identification service (preview) is in the form `/subscriptions/<Subscription ID>/resourceGroups/<Resource Group Name>/providers/Microsoft.HealthDataAIServices/deidServices/<De-identification Service Name>`
 
 The example assigns the **DeID Data Owner** built-in role to a user, scoped to a specific de-identification service. Make sure to replace the placeholder values 
 in angle brackets `<>` with your own values:
@@ -62,15 +62,15 @@ in angle brackets `<>` with your own values:
 New-AzRoleAssignment 
 	-SignInName <Email> `
 	-RoleDefinitionName "DeID Data Owner" `
-	-Scope "/subscriptions/<Subscription ID>/resourceGroups/<Resource Group Name>/providers/Microsoft.HealthDataAIServices/deidServices/<Deidentification Service Name>"
+	-Scope "/subscriptions/<Subscription ID>/resourceGroups/<Resource Group Name>/providers/Microsoft.HealthDataAIServices/deidServices/<De-identification Service Name>"
 ```
 
 A successful response should look like:
 
 ```
 console
-RoleAssignmentId   : /subscriptions/<Subscription ID>/resourceGroups/<Resource Group Name>/providers/Microsoft.HealthDataAIServices/deidServices/<Deidentification Service Name>/providers/Microsoft.Authorization/roleAssignments/<Role Assignment ID>
-Scope              : /subscriptions/<Subscription ID>/resourceGroups/<Resource Group Name>/providers/Microsoft.HealthDataAIServices/deidServices/<Deidentification Service Name>
+RoleAssignmentId   : /subscriptions/<Subscription ID>/resourceGroups/<Resource Group Name>/providers/Microsoft.HealthDataAIServices/deidServices/<De-identification Service Name>/providers/Microsoft.Authorization/roleAssignments/<Role Assignment ID>
+Scope              : /subscriptions/<Subscription ID>/resourceGroups/<Resource Group Name>/providers/Microsoft.HealthDataAIServices/deidServices/<De-identification Service Name>
 DisplayName        : Mark Patrick
 SignInName         : [email protected]
 RoleDefinitionName : DeID Data Owner
@@ -88,15 +88,15 @@ To assign an Azure role to a security principal with Azure CLI, use the [az role
 
 The format of the command can differ based on the type of security principal, but `role` and `scope` are required parameters.
 
-The scope for a de-identification service (preview) is in the form `/subscriptions/<Subscription ID>/resourceGroups/<Resource Group Name>/providers/Microsoft.HealthDataAIServices/deidServices/<Deidentification Service Name>`
+The scope for a de-identification service (preview) is in the form `/subscriptions/<Subscription ID>/resourceGroups/<Resource Group Name>/providers/Microsoft.HealthDataAIServices/deidServices/<De-identification Service Name>`
 
 The following example assigns the **DeID Data Owner** built-in role to a user, scoped to a specific de-identification service. Make sure to replace the placeholder values in angle brackets `<>` with your own values:
 
 ```azurecli
 az role assignment create \
 	--assignee <Email> \
 	--role "DeID Data Owner" \
-	--scope "/subscriptions/<Subscription ID>/resourceGroups/<Resource Group Name>/providers/Microsoft.HealthDataAIServices/deidServices/<Deidentification Service Name>"
+	--scope "/subscriptions/<Subscription ID>/resourceGroups/<Resource Group Name>/providers/Microsoft.HealthDataAIServices/deidServices/<De-identification Service Name>"
 ```
 
 For more information, see [Assign Azure roles using Azure PowerShell](/azure/role-based-access-control/role-assignments-cli).

articles/healthcare-apis/deidentification/quickstart-sdk-net.md

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ ms.date: 08/05/2024
 ---
 
 
-# Quickstart: Azure Health Deidentification client library for .NET
+# Quickstart: Azure Health De-identification client library for .NET
 
 Get started with the Azure Health De-identification client library for .NET to de-identify your health data. Follow these steps to install the package and try out example code for basic tasks.
 
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ Get started with the Azure Health De-identification client library for .NET to d
 
 ## Setting up
 
-### Create a deidentification service (preview)
+### Create a de-identification service (preview)
 
 A de-identification service (preview) provides you with an endpoint URL. This endpoint url can be utilized as a Rest API or with an SDK.
 
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ A de-identification service (preview) provides you with an endpoint URL. This en
     az storage account create --name $STORAGE_ACCOUNT_NAME --resource-group $RESOURCE_GROUP_NAME --location $REGION
     ```
 
-### Authorize deidentification service (preview) on the Azure Storage account
+### Authorize de-identification service (preview) on the Azure Storage account
 
 -  Give the de-identification service (preview) access to your storage account
 
@@ -82,13 +82,13 @@ The client library is available through NuGet, as the `Azure.Health.Deidentifica
 
 
 ## Code examples
-- [Create a Deidentification Client](#create-a-deidentification-client)
+- [Create a de-identification Client](#create-a-de-identification-client)
 - [De-identify a string](#de-identify-a-string)
 - [Tag a string](#tag-a-string)
-- [Create a Deidentification Job](#create-a-deidentification-job)
-- [Get the status of a Deidentification Job](#get-the-status-of-a-deidentification-job)
+- [Create a de-identification Job](#create-a-de-identification-job)
+- [Get the status of a de-identification Job](#get-the-status-of-a-de-identification-job)
 
-### Create a deidentification client
+### Create a de-identification client
 
 Before you can create the client, you need to find your **de-identification service (preview) endpoint URL**.
 
@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ content.Operation = OperationType.Tag;
 DeidentificationResult result = await client.DeidentifyAsync(content);
 ```
 
-### Create a deidentification job
+### Create a de-identification job
 
 This function allows you to de-identify all files, filtered via prefix, within an Azure Blob Storage Account.
 
@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ DeidentificationJob job = new(
 job = client.CreateJob(WaitUntil.Started, "my-job-1", job).Value;
 ```
 
-### Get the status of a deidentification job
+### Get the status of a de-identification job
 
 Once a job is created, you can view the status and other details of the job.
 
@@ -175,13 +175,13 @@ dotnet run
 
 ## Clean up resources
 
-### Delete deidentification service
+### Delete de-identification service
 
 ```bash
 az resource delete -n $DEID_SERVICE_NAME -g $RESOURCE_GROUP_NAME  --resource-type microsoft.healthdataaiservices/deidservices
 ```
 
-### Delete Azure Storage Account
+### Delete Azure Storage account
 
 ```bash
 az resource show -n $STORAGE_ACCOUNT_NAME -g $RESOURCE_GROUP_NAME  --resource-type Microsoft.Storage/storageAccounts
@@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ az role assignment delete --assignee $DEID_SERVICE_PRINCIPAL_ID --role "Storage
 
 Ensure the permissions are given, and the Managed Identity for the de-identification service (preview) is set up properly.
 
-See [Authorize deidentification service on Storage Account](#authorize-deidentification-service-preview-on-the-azure-storage-account)
+See [Authorize de-identification service (preview) on the Azure Storage account](#authorize-de-identification-service-preview-on-the-azure-storage-account)
 
 ### Job failed with status PartialFailed
 
@@ -213,7 +213,7 @@ See [Sample](https://github.com/Azure/azure-sdk-for-net/blob/main/sdk/healthdata
 
 In this quickstart, you learned:
 - How to create a de-identification service (preview) and assign a role on a storage account.
-- How to create a deidentification client
+- How to create a de-identification client
 - How to de-identify strings and create jobs on documents within a storage account.
 
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