Merge pull request #211946 from v-pbartley/AHDS_docs_update

Ahds docs update

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articles/healthcare-apis/fhir/overview.md

@@ -6,13 +6,13 @@ author: matjazl
 ms.service: healthcare-apis
 ms.subservice: fhir
 ms.topic: overview
-ms.date: 08/01/2022
+ms.date: 09/20/2022
 ms.author: chrupa
 ---
 
 # What is the FHIR service in Azure Health Data Services?
 
-The FHIR service in Azure Health Data Services enables rapid exchange of health data using the Fast Healthcare Interoperability Resources (FHIR®) data standard. Offered as a managed Platform-as-a-Service (PaaS), the FHIR service makes it easy for anyone working with health data to securely store and exchange Protected Health Information ([PHI](https://www.hhs.gov/answers/hipaa/what-is-phi/index.html)) in the cloud. 
+The FHIR service in Azure Health Data Services enables rapid exchange of health data using the Fast Healthcare Interoperability Resources (FHIR®) data standard. As part of a managed Platform-as-a-Service (PaaS), the FHIR service makes it easy for anyone working with health data to securely store and exchange Protected Health Information ([PHI](https://www.hhs.gov/answers/hipaa/what-is-phi/index.html)) in the cloud. 
 
 The FHIR service offers the following:
 
@@ -21,10 +21,10 @@ The FHIR service offers the following:
 - High performance, low latency
 - Secure management of Protected Health Information (PHI) in a compliant cloud environment
 - SMART on FHIR for mobile and web clients
-- Controlled access to FHIR data at scale with Azure Active Directory-backed Role-Based Access Control (RBAC)
-- Audit log tracking for access, creation, and modification within the FHIR service data store
+- Controlled access to FHIR data at scale with Azure Active Directory Role-Based Access Control (RBAC)
+- Audit log tracking for access, creation, and modification events within the FHIR service data store
 
-The FHIR service allows you to quickly create and deploy a FHIR server in just minutes to leverage the elastic scale of the cloud for ingesting, persisting, and querying FHIR data. The Azure services that power the FHIR service are designed for high performance no matter how much data you're working with.
+The FHIR service allows you to quickly create and deploy a FHIR server to leverage the elastic scale of the cloud for ingesting, persisting, and querying FHIR data. The Azure services that power the FHIR service are designed for high performance no matter how much data you're working with.
 
 The FHIR API provisioned in the FHIR service enables any FHIR-compliant system to securely connect and interact with FHIR data. As a PaaS offering, Microsoft takes on the operations, maintenance, update, and compliance requirements for the FHIR service so you can free up your own operational and development resources.