Final updates

Added Craigg and Steve suggestions.

Author: jovanpop-msft

articles/sql-database/index.yml

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ metadata:
   ms.tgt_pltfrm: na
   ms.devlang:
   ms.topic: landing-page
-  ms.date: 04/01/2018
+  ms.date: 07/07/2018
   ms.author: carlrab
 abstract:
   description: Azure SQL Database is a relational database-as-a-service (DBaaS) based on the latest stable version of Microsoft SQL Server Database Engine. SQL Database is a high-performance, reliable, and secure database you can use to build data-driven applications and websites in the programming language of your choice, without needing to manage infrastructure. Learn how to use SQL Database with our quickstarts, tutorials, and samples.
@@ -64,12 +64,12 @@ sections:
           src: media/index/i_mi.svg
         title: Managed Instance
       - href: /azure/sql-database/sql-database-business-continuity
-        html: <p>Built-in High-availability, automated backups, and geo-replication will not allow maintenance operations, infrastructure or hardware failures to stop your business.</p>
+        html: <p>Built-in High-availability, automated backups, and geo-replication, will prevent maintenance operations, infrastructure or hardware failures from stopping your business.</p>
         image:
           src: media/index/gear.svg
         title: Business continuity
       - href: /azure/sql-database/sql-database-security-overview
-        html: <p>Secure your database with Azure AD authentication, Virtual Networks, Firewalls, Always Encrypted connection, and let built-in security you to identify threats and vulnerabilities.</p>
+        html: <p>Secure your database with Azure AD authentication, Virtual Networks, Firewalls, Always Encrypted connections. Identify threats and vulnerabilities with built-in security.</p>
         image:
           src: media/index/i_security.svg
         title: Advanced security
@@ -186,6 +186,6 @@ sections:
     - title: REST
       html: <p><a href="/rest/api/sql/">REST API Reference</a></p>
     - title: SQL Server Tools
-      html: <p><a href="https://msdn.microsoft.com/library/mt238365.aspx">SQL Server Tools</a></p><p><a href="https://msdn.microsoft.com/library/mt238290.aspx">SQL Server Management Studio (SSMS)</a></p><p><a href="https://msdn.microsoft.com/library/mt204009.aspx">SQL Server Data Tools (SSDT)</a></p><p><a href="https://msdn.microsoft.com/library/ms162802.aspx">BCP</a></p><p><a href="https://msdn.microsoft.com/library/ms162773.aspx">SQLCMD</a></p><p><a href="https://msdn.microsoft.com/hh550080.aspx">SqlPackage</a></p><p><a href="https://www.nuget.org/packages/Microsoft.Azure.Management.Sql">SQL Database Management Library package</a></p>
+      html: <p><a href="https://msdn.microsoft.com/library/mt238365.aspx">SQL Server Tools</a></p><p><a href="https://msdn.microsoft.com/library/mt238290.aspx">SQL Server Management Studio (SSMS)</a></p><p><a href="https://msdn.microsoft.com/library/mt204009.aspx">SQL Server Data Tools (SSDT)</a></p><p><a href="https://msdn.microsoft.com/library/ms162802.aspx">BCP</a></p><p><a href="https://msdn.microsoft.com/library/ms162773.aspx">SQLCMD</a></p><p><a href="https://docs.microsoft.com/sql/tools/sqlpackage">SqlPackage</a></p><p><a href="https://www.nuget.org/packages/Microsoft.Azure.Management.Sql">SQL Database Management Library package</a></p>
     - title: SQL Server Drivers
       html: <p><a href="https://msdn.microsoft.com/library/mt654049.aspx">SQL Server Drivers</a></p><p><a href="https://msdn.microsoft.com/library/mt657768.aspx">ADO.NET</a></p><p><a href="https://msdn.microsoft.com/library/mt484311.aspx">JDBC</a></p><p><a href="https://msdn.microsoft.com/library/mt654048.aspx">ODBC</a></p>