Improved the Acrolinx Score

Improved the Acrolinx Score

Author: sreekzz

articles/hdinsight/hdinsight-retired-versions.md

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 1. As a retired version of an Azure service, HDInsight hasn't been shipping and we don't ship any updates or security patches to these versions. Some of the OSS components in these versions haven't updated for several years.  ​
 1. By continuing to use these versions, there are security risks that may lead to vulnerabilities, system instability, and potential data loss for you and your customers.  ​
 1. HDInsight team can't able to provide support or help if a security compromise as we don't have pipelines and patching mechanisms for these versions.  ​
-1. In the case of operational issues, we're unable to provide support for root cause analysis, investigation of failures, or performance degradation/issues.  ​
-1. There's no guarantee that all the existing functionality of your clusters continue to work as-is, because underlying dependencies determine the availability of the existing features in these versions. If there's a breaking change due to these dependencies, there's no way to recover the impacted clusters.  ​
+1. Any operational issues, we're unable to provide support for root cause analysis, investigation of failures, or performance degradation/issues.  ​
+1. There's no guarantee that all the existing functionality of your clusters continues to work as-is, because underlying dependencies determine the availability of the existing features in these versions. If there's a breaking change due to these dependencies, there's no way to recover the impacted clusters.  ​
 1. New service capabilities developed by HDInsight not applicable to these versions.  ​
 1. In the extreme event of a serious security threat to the service caused by, the outdated version you're using, HDInsight might choose to stop or delete your clusters immediately to secure the service. In such cases, there's no way to recover the impacted HDInsight clusters but your data in Azure storage and BYO Azure SQL DBs aren't deleted and utilized to migrate to the latest HDInsight version.  ​