Updates.

Author: roygara

articles/storage/elastic-san/elastic-san-networking.md

@@ -171,15 +171,15 @@ To create a private endpoint for an Elastic SAN volume group, you must have the
 
 If you create the endpoint from a user account that has all of the necessary roles and permissions required for creation and approval, the process can be completed in one step. If not, it requires two separate steps by two different users.
 
-The Elastic SAN and the virtual network could be in different resource groups, regions and subscriptions, including subscriptions that belong to different Microsoft Entra tenants. In these examples, we're creating the private endpoint in the same resource group as the virtual network.
+The Elastic SAN and the virtual network could be in different resource groups, regions, and subscriptions, including subscriptions that belong to different Microsoft Entra tenants. In these examples, we're creating the private endpoint in the same resource group as the virtual network.
 
 # [Portal](#tab/azure-portal)
 
 You can create a private endpoint in the Azure portal either when you create a volume group or when modifying an existing volume group. You need an existing virtual network to create a private endpoint.
 
-When creating or modifying a volume group, select the **Networking** page, then select **+ Create a private endpoint** under **Private endpoint connections**.
+When creating or modifying a volume group, select **Networking**, then select **+ Create a private endpoint** under **Private endpoint connections**.
 
-Fill out the values in the menu that pops up, select the virtual network and the subnet that your applications will use. 
+Fill out the values in the menu that pops up, select the virtual network and the subnet that your applications will use to connect. When you're done, select **Add**, and **Save**. 
 
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