Update quickstart-portal.md

Author: Suzi Zuber

articles/sap/monitor/quickstart-portal.md

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ ms.author: sakhare
 ms.topic: quickstart
 ms.service: sap-on-azure
 ms.subservice: sap-monitor
-ms.date: 10/19/2022
+ms.date: 08/22/2024
 # Customer intent: As a developer, I want to deploy Azure Monitor for SAP solutions from the Azure portal so that I can configure providers.
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@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ In this quickstart, you get started with Azure Monitor for SAP solutions by usin
 - If you don't have an Azure subscription, create a [free account](https://azure.microsoft.com/free/) before you begin.
 - [Set up a network](./set-up-network.md) before you create an Azure Monitor instance.
 - Create or choose a virtual network for Azure Monitor for SAP solutions that has access to the source SAP system's virtual network.
-- Create a subnet with an address range of IPv4/25 or larger in the virtual network that's associated with Azure Monitor for SAP solutions, with subnet delegation assigned to **Microsoft.Web/serverFarms**.
+- Create a subnet with an address range of IPv4/25 or larger in the virtual network associated with Azure Monitor for SAP solutions, with subnet delegation assigned to **Microsoft.Web/serverFarms**.
 
    > [!div class="mx-imgBorder"]
    > ![Screenshot that shows subnet creation for Azure Monitor for SAP solutions.](./media/quickstart-portal/subnet-creation.png)
@@ -36,11 +36,11 @@ In this quickstart, you get started with Azure Monitor for SAP solutions by usin
    2. For **Resource group**, create a new resource group or select an existing one under the subscription.
    3. For **Resource name**, enter the name for the Azure Monitor for SAP solutions instance.
    4. For **Workload region**, select the region where the monitoring resources are created. Make sure that it matches the region for your virtual network.
-   5. **Service region** is where your proxy resource is created. The proxy resource manages monitoring resources deployed in the workload region. The service region is automatically selected based on your **Workload region** selection.
+   5. **Service region** is where your proxy resource is created. The proxy resource manages all monitoring resources deployed in the workload region. The service region is automatically selected based on your **Workload region** selection.
    6. For **Virtual network**, select a virtual network that has connectivity to your SAP systems for monitoring.
    7. For **Subnet**, select a subnet that has connectivity to your SAP systems. You can use an existing subnet or create a new one. It must be an IPv4/25 block or larger.
-   8. For **Log analytics**, you can use an existing Log Analytics workspace or create a new one. If you create a new workspace, it's created inside the managed resource group along with other monitoring resources.
-   9. For **Managed resource group name**, enter a unique name. This name is used to create a resource group that will contain all the monitoring resources. You can't change this name after the resource is created.
+   8. For **Log analytics**, you can use an existing Log Analytics workspace or create a new one. If you create a new workspace, it gets created inside the managed resource group along with other monitoring resources.
+   9. For **Managed resource group name**, enter a unique name. This name is used to create a resource group that contains all the monitoring resources. You can't change this name after the resource is created.
 
    > [!div class="mx-imgBorder"]
    > ![Screenshot that shows basic details for an Azure Monitor for SAP solutions instance.](./media/quickstart-portal/azure-monitor-quickstart-2-new.png)
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ In this quickstart, you get started with Azure Monitor for SAP solutions by usin
 
 5. On the **Tags** tab, you can add tags to the monitoring resource. Make sure to add all the mandatory tags if you have a tag policy in place.
 
-6. On the **Review + create** tab, review the details and select **Create**.
+6. On the **Review + create** tab, review the details then select **Create**.
 
 ## Create a provider in Azure Monitor for SAP solutions