Merge pull request #270636 from ankitaduttaMSFT/mf

RM content refresher

Author: Stacyrch140

articles/resource-mover/about-move-process.md

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ description: Learn about the process for moving resources across regions with Az
 author: ankitaduttaMSFT
 ms.service: resource-mover
 ms.topic: overview
-ms.date: 02/02/2023
+ms.date: 03/29/2024
 ms.author: ankitadutta
 ms.custom: UpdateFrequency.5
 #Customer intent: As an Azure admin, I want to understand how Azure Resource Mover works.

articles/resource-mover/common-questions.md

@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
 ---
 title: Common questions about Azure Resource Mover?
-description: Get answers to common questions about  Azure Resource Mover
+description: Get answers to common questions about  Azure Resource Mover.
 author: ankitaduttaMSFT
 ms.service: resource-mover
 ms.custom: engagement-fy23, UpdateFrequency.5
 ms.topic: conceptual
-ms.date: 10/12/2023
+ms.date: 03/29/2024
 ms.author: ankitadutta
 ---
 
@@ -34,18 +34,18 @@ Azure Resource Mover is currently available as follows:
 
 Using Resource Mover, you can currently move the following resources across regions:
 
-- Azure VMs and associated disks (Azure Spot VMs are not currently supported)
-- NICs
+- Azure virtual machines and associated disks (Azure Spot virtual machines are not currently supported)
+- Network Interface Cards
 - Availability sets 
 - Azure virtual networks 
-- Public IP addresses (Public IP will not be retained across Azure region)
+- Public IP addresses (Public IP are be retained across Azure region)
 - Network security groups (NSGs)
 - Internal and public load balancers 
 - Azure SQL databases and elastic pools
 
 ### Can I move disks across regions?
 
-You can't select disks as resources to the moved across regions. However, disks are moved as part of a VM move.
+You can't select disks as resources to the moved across regions. However, disks are moved as part of a virtual machine move.
 
 ### How can I move my resources across subscription?
 
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ No. Resource Mover service doesn't store customer data, it only stores metadata
 
 ### Where is the metadata for moving across regions stored?
 
-It's stored in an [Azure Cosmos DB](../cosmos-db/database-encryption-at-rest.md) database, and in [Azure Blob storage](../storage/common/storage-service-encryption.md), in a Microsoft subscription. Currently, metadata is stored in East US 2 and North Europe. We will expand this coverage to other regions. This doesn't restrict you from moving resources across any public region.
+It's stored in an [Azure Cosmos DB](../cosmos-db/database-encryption-at-rest.md) database, and in [Azure Blob storage](../storage/common/storage-service-encryption.md), in a Microsoft subscription. Currently, metadata is stored in East US 2 and North Europe. We plan to expand this coverage to other regions. This doesn't restrict you from moving resources across any public region.
 
 ### Is the collected metadata encrypted?
 
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ Change the source/target combinations as needed using the change option in the p
 
 ### What happens when I remove a resource from a list of move resources?
 
-You can remove resources that you've added to the move list. The exact remove behavior depends on the resource state. [Learn more](remove-move-resources.md#vm-resource-state-after-removing).
+You can remove resources that you added to the move list. The exact remove behavior depends on the resource state. [Learn more](remove-move-resources.md#vm-resource-state-after-removing).
 
 
 ## Next steps

articles/resource-mover/manage-resources-created-move-process.md

@@ -1,26 +1,26 @@
 ---
-title: Manage resources that are created during the VM move process in Azure Resource Mover
-description: Learn how to manage resources that are created during the VM move process in Azure Resource Mover
+title: Manage resources that are created during the virtual machine move process in Azure Resource Mover
+description: Learn how to manage resources that are created during the virtual machine move process in Azure Resource Mover.
 author: ankitaduttaMSFT 
 ms.service: resource-mover
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 10/31/2023
+ms.date: 03/29/2024
 ms.author: ankitadutta
 ms.custom: engagement-fy23
 ---
 
-# Manage resources created for the VM move
+# Manage resources created for the virtual machine move
 
-This article describes how to manage resources that are created explicitly by [Azure Resource Mover](overview.md) to facilitate the VM move process. 
+This article describes how to manage resources that are created explicitly by [Azure Resource Mover](overview.md) to facilitate the virtual machine move process. 
 
-After moving VMs across regions, there are a number of resources created by Resource Mover that should be cleaned up manually.
+After moving virtual machines across regions, there are a number of resources created by Resource Mover that should be cleaned up manually.
 
-## Delete resources created for VM move
+## Delete resources created for virtual machine move
 
-Manually delete the move collection, and Site Recovery resources created for the VM move.
+Manually delete the move collection, and Site Recovery resources created for the virtual machine move.
 
 1. Review the resources in resource group ```ResourceMoverRG-<sourceregion>-<target-region>-<metadataRegionShortName>```.
-2. Check that the VM and all other source resources in the move collection have been moved/deleted. This ensures that there are no pending resources using them.
+2. Check that the virtual machine and all other source resources in the move collection have been moved/deleted. This ensures that there are no pending resources using them.
 2. Delete these resources.
 
     - The move collection name is ```movecollection-<sourceregion>-<target-region>-<metadata-region>```.
@@ -29,4 +29,4 @@ Manually delete the move collection, and Site Recovery resources created for the
 
 ## Next steps
 
-Try [moving a VM](tutorial-move-region-virtual-machines.md) to another region with Resource Mover.
+Try [moving a virtual machine](tutorial-move-region-virtual-machines.md) to another region with Resource Mover.

articles/resource-mover/modify-target-settings.md

@@ -4,10 +4,10 @@ description: Learn how to modify destination settings when moving Azure VMs betw
 author: ankitaduttaMSFT
 ms.service: resource-mover
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 10/31/2023
+ms.date: 03/29/2024
 ms.author: ankitadutta
 ms.custom: engagement-fy23, UpdateFrequency2
-#Customer intent: As an Azure admin,  I want to modify destination settings when moving resources to another region.
+#Customer intent: As an Azure admin,  I want to modify destination settings when moving resources to another region using Azure Resource Mover.
 
 ---
 # Modify destination settings
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ When moving Azure SQL Database resources, you can modify the destination setting
 
 ### Edit SQL destination settings
 
-You modify the destination settings for a Azure SQL Database resource as follows: 
+You modify the destination settings for an Azure SQL Database resource as follows: 
 
 1. In **Across regions**, for the resource you want to modify, click the **Destination configuration** entry.
 2. In **Configuration settings**, specify the destination settings summarized in the table above.

articles/resource-mover/move-across-region-dashboard.md

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ author: Aarthi-Vijayaraghavan
 manager: sutalasi
 ms.service: resource-mover
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 10/31/2023
+ms.date: 03/29/2024
 ms.custom: engagement-fy23
 ms.author: AarthiV
 ---
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ The **Move across region dashboard** page combines all monitoring information of
     [![Move across region dashboard tab](media\move-across-region-dashboard\move-across-region-dashboard-tab.png)](media\move-across-region-dashboard\move-across-region-dashboard-tab.png)
 2. The dashboard lists all the move combinations created by you. The following two sections are used to capture the status of your move across regions.
     In **Resources by move status**, monitor the percentage and number of resources in each state.
-    In **Error Summary**, monitor the active errors that needs to be resolved before you can successfully move to the destination region.
+    In **Error Summary**, monitor the active errors that need to be resolved before you can successfully move to the destination region.
     [![Status and issues section](media\move-across-region-dashboard\move-across-region-dashboard-status-issues.png)](media\move-across-region-dashboard\move-across-region-dashboard-status-issues.png)
 > [!NOTE]
 > Only the source-destination combinations that are already created in your chosen subscription would be listed in the dashboard.

articles/resource-mover/move-region-availability-zone.md

@@ -4,10 +4,10 @@ description: Learn how to move Azure VMs to availability zones with Azure Resour
 author: ankitaduttaMSFT 
 ms.service: resource-mover
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 09/29/2023
+ms.date: 03/29/2024
 ms.author: ankitadutta
 
-#Customer intent: As an Azure admin,  I want to move Azure VMs to a different Azure region.
+#Customer intent: As an Azure admin,  I want to move Azure VMs to a different Azure region using Azure Resource Mover.
 
 ---
 # Move Azure VMs to an availability zone in another region

articles/resource-mover/move-region-within-resource-group.md

@@ -4,10 +4,10 @@ description: Learn how to move resources within a resource group to another regi
 author: ankitaduttaMSFT
 ms.service: resource-mover
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 02/10/2023
+ms.date: 03/29/2024
 ms.author: ankitadutta
 
-#Customer intent: As an Azure admin,  I want to move Azure resources to a different Azure region.
+#Customer intent: As an Azure admin,  I want to move Azure resources to a different Azure region using Azure Resource Mover.
 ---
 
 # Move resources across regions (from resource group)

articles/resource-mover/overview.md

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ description: Learn about Azure Resource Mover
 author: ankitaduttaMSFT
 ms.service: resource-mover
 ms.topic: overview
-ms.date: 02/02/2023
+ms.date: 03/29/2024
 ms.author: ankitadutta
 ms.custom: mvc, engagement-fy23, UpdateFrequency.5
 

articles/resource-mover/remove-move-resources.md

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ description: Learn how to remove resources from a move collection in Azure Resou
 author: ankitaduttaMSFT
 ms.service: resource-mover
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 10/30/2023
+ms.date: 03/29/2024
 ms.author: ankitadutta
 ms.custom:
 #Customer intent: As an Azure admin,  I want remove resources I've added to a move collection.

articles/resource-mover/select-move-tool.md

@@ -4,10 +4,10 @@ description: Review options and tools for moving Azure resources across regions
 author: ankitaduttaMSFT
 ms.service: resource-mover
 ms.topic: overview
-ms.date: 12/23/2022
+ms.date: 03/29/2024
 ms.author: ankitadutta
 ms.custom: mvc, engagement-fy23, UpdateFrequency.5
-#Customer intent: As an Azure admin, I need to compare tools for moving resources in Azure.
+#Customer intent: As an Azure admin, I need to compare tools for moving resources in Azure using Azure Resource Mover.
 ---
 
 # Choose a tool for moving Azure resources