Update how-to-data-owner-policy-authoring-generic.md

Author: inward-eye

articles/purview/how-to-data-owner-policy-authoring-generic.md

@@ -6,16 +6,16 @@ ms.author: vlrodrig
 ms.service: purview
 ms.subservice: purview-data-policies
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 2/24/2022
+ms.date: 3/02/2022
 ---
 
 # Authoring and publishing data owner access policies (Preview)
 
 [!INCLUDE [feature-in-preview](includes/feature-in-preview.md)]
 
-Access policies allow data owners to manage access to datasets from Azure Purview. Data owners can monitor and manage data use from within the Azure Purview Studio, without directly modifying the resource where the data is housed.
+Access policies allow data owners to manage access to datasets from Azure Purview. Data owners can author policies directly from Azure Purview Studio, and then have those policies enforced by the data source.
 
-This tutorial describes how a data owner can create, update, and publish access policies in Azure Purview.
+This tutorial describes how a data owner can create, update, and publish access policies in Azure Purview Studio.
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
@@ -31,13 +31,13 @@ This tutorial describes how a data owner can create, update, and publish access
 
 For more information, see the guide on [managing Azure Purview role assignments](catalog-permissions.md#assign-permissions-to-your-users).
 
-### Source configuration
+### Data source configuration
 
-To apply these policies to data sources in your environment, you'll need to configure your sources.
+Before authoring data policies in Azure Purview Studio, you'll need to configure the data sources so that they can enforce those policies.
 
-1. Your source needs to already be registered to Azure Purview. To register a resource, follow the **Prerequisites** and **Register** sections of the [source pages](azure-purview-connector-overview.md) for your resources.
-1. [Enable data use governance on your resource](how-to-enable-data-use-governance.md#enable-data-use-governance).
 1. Follow any policy-specific prerequisites for your source. Check the [Azure Purview supported data sources table](azure-purview-connector-overview.md#azure-purview-data-sources) and select the link in the **Access Policy** column for sources where access policies are available. Follow any steps listed in the Access policy or Prerequisites sections.
+1. Register the data source in Azure Purview. Follow the **Prerequisites** and **Register** sections of the [source pages](azure-purview-connector-overview.md) for your resources.
+1. [Enable the data use governance toggle on the data source](how-to-enable-data-use-governance.md#enable-data-use-governance).
 
 ## Create a new policy