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Author: dksimpson

articles/cognitive-services/Bing-Video-Search/quickstarts/java.md

@@ -14,9 +14,9 @@ ms.author: aahi
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 # Quickstart: Search for videos using the Bing Video Search REST API and Java
 
-Use this quickstart to make your first call to the Bing Video Search API. This simple Java application sends an HTTP video search query to the API and displays the JSON response. 
+Use this quickstart to make your first call to the Bing Video Search API. This simple Java application sends an HTTP video search query to the API and displays the JSON response. Although this application is written in Java, the API is a RESTful Web service compatible with most programming languages. 
 
-Although this application is written in Java, the API is a RESTful Web service compatible with most programming languages. The source code for this sample is available [on GitHub](https://github.com/Azure-Samples/cognitive-services-REST-api-samples/blob/master/java/Search/BingVideoSearchv7.java) with additional error handling, features, and code annotations.
+The source code for this sample is available [on GitHub](https://github.com/Azure-Samples/cognitive-services-REST-api-samples/blob/master/java/Search/BingVideoSearchv7.java) with additional error handling, features, and code annotations.
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ In the `SearchVideos()` method, perform the following steps:
 
 ## Format the response
 
-1. Create a method named `prettify()` to format the response returned from the Bing Video API. Use the Gson library's `JsonParser` to convert a JSON string to an object. Then, use `GsonBuilder()` and `toJson()` to create the formatted string. 
+Create a method named `prettify()` to format the response returned from the Bing Video API. Use the Gson library's `JsonParser` to convert a JSON string to an object. Then, use `GsonBuilder()` and `toJson()` to create the formatted string.
 
     ```java
     // pretty-printer for JSON; uses GSON parser to parse and re-serialize

articles/cognitive-services/Bing-Video-Search/quickstarts/nodejs.md

@@ -14,9 +14,9 @@ ms.author: aahi
 ---
 # Quickstart: Search for videos using the Bing Video Search REST API and Node.js
 
-Use this quickstart to make your first call to the Bing Video Search API. This simple JavaScript application sends an HTTP video search query to the API, and displays the JSON response. 
+Use this quickstart to make your first call to the Bing Video Search API. This simple JavaScript application sends an HTTP video search query to the API, and displays the JSON response. Although this application is written in JavaScript and uses Node.js, the API is a RESTful Web service compatible with most programming languages. 
 
-Although this application is written in JavaScript and uses Node.js, the API is a RESTful Web service compatible with most programming languages. The source code for this sample is available [on GitHub](https://github.com/Azure-Samples/cognitive-services-REST-api-samples/blob/master/nodejs/Search/BingVideoSearchv7.js) with additional error handling, and code annotations.
+The source code for this sample is available [on GitHub](https://github.com/Azure-Samples/cognitive-services-REST-api-samples/blob/master/nodejs/Search/BingVideoSearchv7.js) with additional error handling, and code annotations.
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ Although this application is written in JavaScript and uses Node.js, the API is
     };
     ```
 
-1. When `end` is signaled, use `response.on()` to store the bing-related headers (beginning with `bingapis` or `x-msedge-`). Parse the JSON using `JSON.parse()`, convert it to a string with `JSON.stringify()`, and print it.
+1. In this function, use `response.on()` when `end` is signaled to store the bing-related headers (beginning with `bingapis` or `x-msedge-`). Parse the JSON using `JSON.parse()`, convert it to a string with `JSON.stringify()`, and print it.
 
     ```javascript
     response.on('end', function () {

articles/cognitive-services/Bing-Video-Search/quickstarts/php.md

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ ms.author: aahi
 Use this quickstart to make your first call to the Bing Video Search API. This simple JavaScript application sends an HTTP video search query to the API, and displays the JSON response. 
 
 Although this application is written in JavaScript and uses Node.js, the API is a RESTful Web service compatible with most programming languages.
-The example code was written to work under PHP 5.6.
+The example code is written to work under PHP 5.6.
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ The example code was written to work under PHP 5.6.
 
 The [Bing Video Search API](https://docs.microsoft.com/rest/api/cognitiveservices-bingsearch/bing-web-api-v7-reference) returns video results from the Bing search engine.
 
-1. Enable secure HTTP support in your `php.ini` file by uncommenting the `;extension=php_openssl.dll` line, as described in the code comment.
+1. Enable secure HTTP support in your `php.ini` file by uncommenting the `;extension=php_openssl.dll` line, as described in the following code.
 2. Create a new PHP project in your favorite IDE or editor.
 3. Add the code provided below.
 4. Replace the `$accessKey` value with an access key valid for your subscription. You can use the value of `$endpoint` in the following code for the global endpoint, or use the [custom subdomain](../../../cognitive-services/cognitive-services-custom-subdomains.md) endpoint displayed in the Azure portal for your resource.

articles/cognitive-services/Bing-Video-Search/quickstarts/python.md

@@ -15,11 +15,11 @@ ms.author: aahi
 
 # Quickstart: Search for videos using the Bing Video Search REST API and Python
 
-Use this quickstart to make your first call to the Bing Video Search API. This simple Python application sends an HTTP video search query to the API, and displays the JSON response. 
+Use this quickstart to make your first call to the Bing Video Search API. This simple Python application sends an HTTP video search query to the API, and displays the JSON response. Although this application is written in Python, the API is a RESTful Web service compatible with most programming languages. 
 
-Although this application is written in Python, the API is a RESTful Web service compatible with most programming languages. The source code for this sample is available [on GitHub](https://github.com/Azure-Samples/cognitive-services-REST-api-samples/blob/master/python/Search/BingVideoSearchv7.py) with additional error handling, and code annotations.
+The source code for this sample is available [on GitHub](https://github.com/Azure-Samples/cognitive-services-REST-api-samples/blob/master/python/Search/BingVideoSearchv7.py) with additional error handling, and code annotations.
 
-You can run this example as a Jupyter notebook on [MyBinder](https://mybinder.org) by selecting the **Launch Binder** badge: 
+You can run this example as a Jupyter notebook on [MyBinder](https://mybinder.org) by selecting the **launch binder** badge: 
 
 [![Binder](https://mybinder.org/badge.svg)](https://mybinder.org/v2/gh/Microsoft/cognitive-services-notebooks/master?filepath=BingVideoSearchAPI.ipynb)
 
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ You can run this example as a Jupyter notebook on [MyBinder](https://mybinder.or
 
 ## Initialize the application
 
-1. Create a new Python file in your favorite IDE or editor and import the following libraries:
+1. Create a new Python file in your favorite IDE or editor, and import the following libraries:
 
     ```python
     import requests

articles/cognitive-services/Bing-Video-Search/quickstarts/ruby.md

@@ -15,9 +15,9 @@ ms.author: aahi
 
 # Quickstart: Search for videos using the Bing Video Search REST API and Ruby
 
-Use this quickstart to make your first call to the Bing Video Search API. This simple Ruby application sends an HTTP video search query to the API, and displays the JSON response. 
+Use this quickstart to make your first call to the Bing Video Search API. This simple Ruby application sends an HTTP video search query to the API, and displays the JSON response. Although this application is written in Python, the API is a RESTful Web service compatible with most programming languages. 
 
-Although this application is written in Python, the API is a RESTful Web service compatible with most programming languages. The source code for this sample is available [on GitHub](https://github.com/Azure-Samples/cognitive-services-REST-api-samples/blob/master/ruby/Search/BingVideoSearchv7.rb) with additional error handling, and code annotations.
+The source code for this sample is available [on GitHub](https://github.com/Azure-Samples/cognitive-services-REST-api-samples/blob/master/ruby/Search/BingVideoSearchv7.rb) with additional error handling, and code annotations.
 
 ## Prerequisites