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articles/center-sap-solutions/deploy-s4hana.md

@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ title: Deploy S/4HANA infrastructure (preview)
 description: Learn how to deploy S/4HANA infrastructure with Azure Center for SAP solutions through the Azure portal. You can deploy High Availability (HA), non-HA, and single-server configurations.
 ms.service: azure-center-sap-solutions
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 01/15/2023
+ms.date: 02/03/2023
 ms.author: ladolan
 author: lauradolan
 #Customer intent: As a developer, I want to deploy S/4HANA infrastructure using Azure Center for SAP solutions so that I can manage SAP workloads in the Azure portal.

articles/center-sap-solutions/install-software.md

@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ title: Install SAP software (preview)
 description: Learn how to install software on your SAP system created using Azure Center for SAP solutions.
 ms.service: azure-center-sap-solutions
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 01/15/2023
+ms.date: 02/03/2023
 author: lauradolan
 ms.author: ladolan
 #Customer intent: As a developer, I want to install SAP software so that I can use Azure Center for SAP solutions.

articles/center-sap-solutions/manage-virtual-instance.md

@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ title: Manage a Virtual Instance for SAP solutions (preview)
 description: Learn how to configure a Virtual Instance for SAP solutions (VIS) resource in Azure Center for SAP solutions through the Azure portal.
 ms.service: azure-center-sap-solutions
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 01/15/2023
+ms.date: 02/03/2023
 author: lauradolan
 ms.author: ladolan
 #Customer intent: As a developer, I want to configure my Virtual Instance for SAP solutions resource so that I can find system properties and connect to databases.

articles/center-sap-solutions/manage-with-azure-rbac.md

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ author: kalyaninamuduri
 ms.author: kanamudu 
 ms.service: azure-center-sap-solutions
 ms.topic: conceptual
-ms.date: 02/01/2023
+ms.date: 02/03/2023
 ms.custom: template-concept 
 ---
 
@@ -131,15 +131,25 @@ To install SAP software, a *user* and *user-assigned managed identity* requires
 | `Microsoft.Workloads/sapVirtualInstances/read` |
 | `Microsoft.Workloads/Operations/read` |
 | `Microsoft.Workloads/Locations/OperationStatuses/read` |
+| `Microsoft.Storage/storageAccounts/read` |
+| `Microsoft.Storage/storageAccounts/blobServices/read` |
+| `Microsoft.Storage/storageAccounts/blobServices/containers/read` |
+| `Microsoft.Storage/storageAccounts/blobServices/containers/blobs/read` |
+| `Microsoft.Storage/storageAccounts/fileServices/read` |
+| `Microsoft.Storage/storageAccounts/fileServices/shares/read` |
 
 | Built-in roles for *user-assigned managed identities* |
 | ---------------------------------------------------- |
 | **Azure Center for SAP solutions service role** |
+| **Reader and Data Access** |
 
 | Minimum permissions for *user-assigned managed identities* |
 | ---------------------------------------------------------- |
 | `Microsoft.Compute/disks/read` |
 | `Microsoft.Compute/virtualMachines/read` |
+| `Microsoft.Compute/disks/write` |
+| `Microsoft.Compute/virtualMachines/write` |
+| `Microsoft.Compute/virtualMachines/extensions/delete` |
 | `Microsoft.Compute/virtualMachines/extensions/read` |
 | `Microsoft.Compute/virtualMachines/extensions/write` |
 | `Microsoft.Compute/virtualMachines/instanceView/read` |
@@ -159,6 +169,10 @@ To install SAP software, a *user* and *user-assigned managed identity* requires
 | `Microsoft.Storage/storageAccounts/fileServices/shares/read` |
 | `Microsoft.Storage/storageAccounts/blobServices/containers/blobs/read` |
 | `Microsoft.Storage/storageAccounts/blobServices/containers/blobs/filter/action` |
+| `Microsoft.Storage/storageAccounts/write` |
+| `Microsoft.Storage/storageAccounts/listAccountSas/action` |
+| `Microsoft.Storage/storageAccounts/fileServices/write` |
+| `Microsoft.Storage/storageAccounts/fileServices/shares/write` |
 
 ## Register and manage existing SAP system
 
@@ -171,6 +185,7 @@ To register an existing SAP system and manage that system with Azure Center for
 | Minimum permissions for *users* |
 | ------------------------------- |
 | `Microsoft.Workloads/sapVirtualInstances/write` |
+| `Microsoft.Compute/virtualMachines/read` |
 
 | Built-in roles for *user-assigned managed identities* |
 | ---------------------------------------------------- |
@@ -179,6 +194,9 @@ To register an existing SAP system and manage that system with Azure Center for
 | Minimum permissions for *user-assigned managed identities* |
 | ---------------------------------------------------------- |
 | `Microsoft.Compute/virtualMachines/read` |
+| `Microsoft.Compute/disks/read` |
+| `Microsoft.Compute/disks/write` |
+| `Microsoft.Compute/virtualMachines/write` |
 | `Microsoft.Compute/virtualMachines/extensions/read` |
 | `Microsoft.Compute/virtualMachines/extensions/write` |
 | `Microsoft.Compute/virtualMachines/instanceView/read` |
@@ -198,6 +216,7 @@ To view VIS resources, a *user* or *user-assigned managed identity* requires the
 | Built-in roles for *users* | 
 | ------------------------- |
 | **Azure Center for SAP solutions reader** |
+| **Reader** |
 
 | Minimum permissions for *users* |
 | ------------------------------- |
@@ -344,6 +363,10 @@ To delete a VIS resource, a *user* or *user-assigned managed identity* requires
 | Minimum permissions for *users* |
 | ------------------------------- |
 | `Microsoft.Workloads/sapVirtualInstances/delete` |
+| `Microsoft.Workloads/sapVirtualInstances/read` |
+| `Microsoft.Workloads/sapVirtualInstances/applicationInstances/read` |
+| `Microsoft.Workloads/sapVirtualInstances/centralInstances/read` |
+| `Microsoft.Workloads/sapVirtualInstances/databaseInstances/read` |
 
 | Built-in roles for *user-assigned managed identities* |
 | ---------------------------------------------------- |

articles/center-sap-solutions/register-existing-system.md

@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ title: Register existing SAP system (preview)
 description: Learn how to register an existing SAP system in Azure Center for SAP solutions through the Azure portal. You can visualize, manage, and monitor your existing SAP system through Azure Center for SAP solutions.
 ms.service: azure-center-sap-solutions
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 01/15/2023
+ms.date: 02/03/2023
 ms.author: ladolan
 author: lauradolan
 #Customer intent: As a developer, I want to register my existing SAP system so that I can use the system with Azure Center for SAP solutions.