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 # Tutorial: Use Azure Deployment Manager with Resource Manager templates (Public preview)
 
-Learn how to use [Azure Deployment Manager](./deployment-manager-overview.md) to deploy your applications across multiple regions. If you want a faster approach, [Azure Deployment Manager quickstart](https://github.com/Azure-Samples/adm-quickstart) creates the required configurations in your subscription and customizes the artifacts to deploy an application across multiple regions. The quickstart performs the same tasks as it does in this tutorial.
+Learn how to use [Azure Deployment Manager](./deployment-manager-overview.md) to deploy your applications across multiple regions. If you prefer a faster approach, [Azure Deployment Manager quickstart](https://github.com/Azure-Samples/adm-quickstart) creates the required configurations in your subscription and customizes the artifacts to deploy an application across multiple regions. The quickstart performs the same tasks as it does in this tutorial.
 
 To use Deployment Manager, you need to create two templates: